First comment? Check.

Tracking? Check.

Awesome? Double check.

Keep going!

This is pretty good. Tracking!

Go on good sir, and in the meantime I shall track this interesting, developing story.  Oh and one more thing.  I might be bit cooler if you have him speak in Dutch to begin with.  Just a thought.  Great job so far!

This seems promising. Tracking.

>>144396144396 Well the idea is that its an alternate version of me being thrown into a pony infested world that I don't know anything about.  I will keep the dutch come and I even have a special little idea given to me impart by one of my friends in which to keep it coming.

I love this story!! One day, I'm sure this will become featured.

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay update!

Love this story!

Keep up the good work!

Awesome story! :D When do you predict the next part will be out? I CANT WAIT!

Great update

Y U NO MAKE HIM TALK

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>>148593148593 *Posts third chapter, Reads comment.* Ha ha, your wish has been granted!

(damn I need to sleep now.)

It is very rare now-a days that i see a "Insert" fanfic where they know nothing of the world around them. I like these as it add's depth to their own world as they see new things and not know what to expect. I do hope this continues as I am loving the way you are doing this.

I look forward to reading more chapters of this story my good sir!

Good job with this chapter

Good. Great! Wonderful!! Fantastic!!! I'm absolutely loving this story so far! Keep up the good work! But saying this as a fan: don't rush yourself.  If your eyes hurt so much, then take a break. you don't wanna end up like derpy, do you? but anyways, keep up the great work! can't wait for the next chapter! It's gonna be SO AWESOME!

>>149206149206 Thats the problem... I can't ;-;, this is just to addicting... I love righting too  much.

oh... heheheh well, you were born to be a writer than! that must be your cutie mark! o... sry apple bloom... no no no... don't cry... o geez...

>>153158153158 Now I have to make a ponified version of me with pony creator , thank you for giving me that idea.

I am really finding this story interesting and eagerly await the next chapter!

tried that pulse thing and it better with mad world

>>153709153709 That can be explained by the fact that everyones brain works differently. I need something that plays more things at once. IT feels nicer that way and I can focus better. I like it cause even though I can't play an instrument, I can still feel every note and word throughout my body.

Another amazing chapter!

moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooar

Hot diggedy ding dong doodle disco! I'm absolutely loving this story! I can't stop reading... I won't stop reading until it concludes!

I also find the title of this chapter... a little funny.

Love it!

PINKIE PIE!!   GET BACK HERE WITH HIS ROOT BEER!! 'runs away'  ...dammit... GET BACK HERE!! o, btw, another great chapter! now, if you'll excuse me... i gotta go catch her... 'runs after pinkie'

Another great chapter from you! Keep up the good work!

Wow, this is the longest its ever taken you to write a new story... are you taking a break? Or are you having trouble? sorry, im just really excited....

>>162616162616 Have a big ol school project and writers block at the same time srry, I'm working on the issues as we speak.

Whoa! what's gonna happen next?! This is soooo cool!   And you did a presentation over MLP:FiM?  What did you discuss?   Don't have to answer that... Anyways, keep up the great work, dude!

Another good chapter as always.

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! A story that involves Dutch!

A fanfic I was tracking updated 6 times in a row in my inbox and then this updated. C C C COMBO BREAKER!

Well done, this was as entertaining as the other chapters. Keep up the amazing work my good sir!

Grammatical errors are abound. "Whats thats" and such. Still, an alright start.

Huzzah another chapter!

What is it with Applejack kicking everyone? I've read so many fanfics where that happens at least once.  Applejack, you should be ashamed of yourself!   ...is that sleeping, or shamefulness...?  ah, whatever. Anyways, loving the story still! it felt kind of random this chapter, which was pretty cool. So, yeah man.  Keep up the good work!

O yeah! another chapter! Hey, would it be cool if I went over this and corrected any grammatical errors?

>>176127176127 Sure, It would take some pressure of my mind and let me sleep in the mornings.

Woohoo another chapter

LFFC, Looking Forwards to Future Chapters As always

This was probably the best chapter by now.. At least I know that I enjoyed it thoroughly

You sir, are a boss. Keep writing these great chapters!

Woot

I would LOVE to help filter out the chapters! btw, another great chapter!

I am most defiantly ok with this

1.Your welcome [ he knows what I mean] 2.Your writing is controlled chaos style, its good its funny , its random and allows an easier immersion The problem with that is that is easy to go overboard and not even feel it, re-read your story and you will know what I mean when you reach back to this chapter. While too little random makes a bit of a dull chapter, Said chapter can be inciting in other ways [ex : discovering important s**t or description/discovery of an important story with high relevance] now too much random F**ks up immersion on the spot whether its too much in one spot or everywhere spreading out. The random in this chapter felt rushed, while it could have passed the part where he decides on the name of the power feels just...wrong like someone else wrote it. Considering your style his idea should have come after a short migraine, 'In a moment of clarity when the world seems to stop and he only hears a faint whisper in the back of his mind Frostbite' Something along those lines, not after talking to a stoned part of his mind -.-*. That was my dose of constructive criticism, on a side note the story is coming along great and its pleasant to read. Try and keep a good flow[ +- ballance]. Azzazel out !

>>187151187151 Welcome to my mind, were there is no importance and I will screw up everything with time, njug njug njug.

"Crazy man away!!"

Is that.. This or is this another reference to something else I have no idea not that I care really but I'm going crazy with all these away things, have a nice day.

LFFC, Looking forwards to future chapters

So, the meanings of names have power in Equestria.

My name, Floris means "blooming". The only place where I could truly be happy and come to bloom, is Equestria. I'm finding more and more reasons why Equestria actually would be real and why I would be sent to it.

There are countless ways of how a human could get to Equestria, like:

Our universe, a random other universe and Equestria are all in different Dimensions (instead of asking why there would be other dimensions, ask yourself why there wouldn't be other dimensions). In the "random other universe", there are aliëns with portal guns. An aliën shot a portal to Equestria, another portal gun accidently flew through, a bird crashed into it, triggering it, the portal gun fires a portal to earth.

There you have one of the countless possibilities! For the ones who still don't get my logic: Why wouldn't there be other dimensions? Why wouldn't there be some sort of interdimensional link that causes us to "invent" what happens in other universes? Get it?

It would appear that you have a stoner living inside your head. Might want to get that looked at.

What kind of stoner, it has 161 different definitions.

>>187498187498 The *In your head* stoner.

I believe you mean sore. Not soar. Anyway, asides from a few grammatical errors, this was another great chapter!

Climbing with your arms is fairly energy intensive although you can climb quickly it is always better to climb with your legs, take it from an avid mountaineer

CRYOMANCEY

i second Wutlol?'s opinion.

Gunnar should use his powers to makes some icyhot to relieve his soreness LOLOLOL

>>portalmasterx7

NO THAT'S A BAD IDEA SHUT UP

>>195153195153 I NO RITE LAWLAWLAWL

>>193931193931 Damn it... I thought it was soar... oh well I guess I have to fix it now...

The name thing makes no sense, I get what you are getting at but when I analyze it there are significant flaws:

1.) If your perception of your name is based on how others perceive your name and your power derives from that then if you are surrounded by negative people who consider you poorly then your perception of your name changes and thus you become Epic Fail which only reinforces the perception in an endless negative loop.

2.) If you are alone your personality returns to default and your powers will enter a chaotic state as there is no basis/ground since you will be prone to entering different mind sets dependent on your circumstances.

>>200693200693 I'm working on it, I do a lot more thinking than I write done mind you.

>>200693200693 Also, the power of your name comes from you only the likely hood that other *Define* your name is high. Someone with no human contact would fully define themselves and the name could make no sense to another human and yet still hold power. Simple put, you control your power and people around you can change it but only if you let them change it. (if that makes any sense....) The idea is that the names hold there power based on what you think of them and how you control them but what defines them is based on what you are taught and hear. No one else empowers these words, they just help your mind define them. Like I said in the story. "I can call a rock a stick but if I try to talk about a stick then they will all think its a stick and not a rock." You get influenced by these things and stick with a rock being a rock. If everyone started calling rocks sticks, then over a period of time, the word you use to define a rock would be stick.

Also, its impossible for you personality to go "Default" meaning that that part of my theory was never flawed to begin with. Anyways, your mindset can change, but your definition of yourself only changes based on heavy stress or confusion. Think about it like this, you here the word "Duck" and you relate it to a duck. Now, imagine that everyone around you started calling a duck a train. When you hear the word train, your reaction is to think about trains but through influence you start to connect train with duck, but then you hear train, you think "Oh, duck." Even though the word may have changed, you will still always relate the word train to duck whether or not everyone else does otherwise.

This goes the same with your self definition, even if you go all emo or something, the roots of your definition never change unless you get something along the lines of a massive brainwash, but those don't work at 100%. Basically what I'm saying is one the roots are in place, they will never leave. Once you associate a word with something, you will always associate that word with that thing. Its how the brain works and that won't be changing.  

Very interesting, misspelled Ezio but meh. Someone else probably already said. I look forward to more!

Is he more random than Pinkie Pie ?

Dunno, have to examinate the pros and cons...

Anyway, thanks for the chapter !

----Zombie News Bulletin----

65 ZOMBIES KILLED IN A BRUTAL CHURCH MASSACRE

Reports indicate a crazed madman with a sword and ice magic attacked the congregation as they prepared for their daily service.

It was a complete massacre says one investigator and the madman responsible seems to have a strange fetish for mutilation

specifically the head as all victims were found with there heads smashed flat.

Zombie Police warn that the undead should reamin in their crypts until the madman is apprehended.

One police officer believes that this may be a case of extreme racism against the zombies and is quoted as saying

"Yur, the living folk believe zombies are evil flesh eating monsters and that the only way to stop 'em is to destroy the head.  That's what we think

happened here, probably some kid adventurer thinking he's doing the world a service or sumthin' "

More reports will follow as new information presents itself.  So stay in your coffins and stay safe!

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sleeping is overrated

lost interest in this

There are some parts in your writing where there are misplaced words and some that weren't even really called for.

"Well no time to stop anymore, Adventure awaits and I have completely forgotten what I was had to do. Crazy man away!!"

Now I have no idea if the word "was" was intentionally placed there or not, but I love it for that reason. I myself have purposely butchered the english language similarly to this many times for comedic effect.

>>207803207803

I gained interest in this.

>>207833207833 Sorry about the weird writing sometimes. My mind has moments of *Screw you and the readers, I want it this way* and I start writing wrong things without even realizing there wrong....

----Zombie News Bulletin----

ADVENTURER ACQUITED OF ALL CRIMES!

The adventurer responsible for the brutal church massacre was released earlier today, after appearing in the zombie court house without a summons.

After being tried in the zombie trial pit and defeating the prosecutor in deadly combat the accused was acquited and promptly passed out.

The adventurer was placed outside of the zombie capital using the old tree entrance which he is believed to have entered by.

The verdict however has brought the whole justice system into question and political opponents for the current administration have announced their disapproval.  They say in the next upcoming zombie election they will have a strong stance on changing the current judicial system, changing the curriculum in the schools and of course plans to remove the worm infestation.

More news on this soon and remember line your coffins with WORM'B'GONE the only powder to provide 100% worm annihilation.

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yargh pirates be misunderstood

As the ponies sat there looking at the sleeping creature A thought that made no sense crept inside their minds:

YOU'RE BEING TROLLED!

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Gunnar's logic... is just beautiful. anyways, this story is now gonna get better than ever before!! I CAN FEEL IT!!

If any of ye scallywags be needin' me, I'll be in me private quarters with our new passenger, givin' 'er the "tour",

(If ye know what I be meanin'.)

ithis story so much

Great chapter

...im not a phony pony... ................. anyways, another great chapter! just love how gunnar is FINALLY talking now! i also had a question:  is your name gunnar?  or did you just come up with a name?

>>221648221648 My name really is Gunnar Anthony Berge and I'm goddamn proud of it. Also what is means is also true. The internet confirmed that on many occasions

>>222137222137 O.O This revelation just made you 20% more awesomer!!!!! You, sir, are also one HAY of a writer. So please please please please add the next chapter soon, cause I can get really impatient when it comes to waiting for amazing things.

*gassymexican´s voice ON

cray man, AWAY!!!!

I mean, crazy man,AWAY!!!!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

I was looking forwards to reading a new chapter

>>232206232206 I have vacation so I'm going pump out what I can now but after next week I will need to find a new method to get them out. Like writing it by hand and then typing it out. It does mean that I will be forced into rereading my story but I would prefer to type it in one go and then fix stuff is I so choose, oh well...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

FFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Darn, well I'll be patient.

Back to the land of the living eh? Good for you.

not enough moar

>>287086287086 Question mark face?

i loved this chapter except for the fact that you keep on using your instead of you're look at the story and you will see what i see

your means belonging to, and you're means you are

Sure, there are plenty of grammatical mistakes throughout, but really, I'm just glad another chapter is out.   I've come to love this story too!   By the way, the title of the chapter "I'm bach!!"... shouldn't it be "I'm back!!" ?

>>291980291980 I'm Bach is a joke..... oh well, I guess not everyone gets it...

>>293785293785

the only bach I can think of is Bach the musician... I don't get the joke.  Sorry.

Wait... when's Pinkie gonna give you a root beer?

>>293970293970 1. That's the joke 2. Soon

Cliffhanger! It's halo 2 all over again! Noo! And thanks for the info that trees are serious plants. I'll remember this next time I attempt to tell a joke to one.

hmmmmmmm

Moar?