While cleaning out the library's basement, Twilight comes across a stack of books that bring back unhappy childhood memories. When Pinkie Pie finds them however, she sets out to create the most fantastical campaign ever! Will the admittedly erratic pony be up to writing out a whole story? Will the others be able to pick up on how to play this strange game? Read on to find out
Chapter one: The Adventurers meet: Twilight comes across that which she had no wish to remember, but Pinkie's got a different plan
Chapter two: Amorphous blobs: The four players go through the trials of character creation
Chapter three: You all meet outside a tavern...: The game begins!
Chapter four: The manhunt: The heroes search for the dastardly theif
Chapter five: Taking Point: Progress is made towards finding the key, but who does what job is important sometimes
Author's notes: This is my first foray into fan-fiction, so hope its all formatted correctly and so on. Criticism is welcomed and encouraged, be it from grammar to writing style to whatever else. As an aside, I've always been fairly involved in shipping when it cames to fandom, and while its not my purpose going into this fic, it may crop up, and I'll change the tags appropriately if it does. In any case, enjoy!
Sounds interesting enough. Consider it read.
Did you just misspell the title?
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and stupid mistakes like that are exactly why I asked for critique's lol. Though that one was /bad/ 
Thank you for catching it
Hey Pinkie save me a slice of that pizza.
They accomplished more in one sitting than my group did in a month
Ahh yes, the girls face the TRUE challenge of any good campaign! The dreaded Pizza Topping debate!
I love this
Good idea.
Write moar! This is wonderful.
1940446 For sure. Easily a CR 20 encounter right there.
This is well written and enjoyable.
The change of view makes for a more interesting narrative.
I would've use fish but bananas are Trollestia's trademark
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Of course they keep bananas in barrels. How else are you going to lure in the monkeys?
Enjoying this a lot, do keep going please.
I got this game a month ago, it's awesome
Can't believe there's actually a story about this on fimfiction 
1963496 Damn, you beat me to it
Awesome start of the story, I never heard of Pathfinder but I know D&D, I assume it's at least somewhat similar. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it! Pinkie as a gamemaster, I'd love to play!
RD's being a silly pony she doesn't know what she's missing.
Small pointer: now and then you use 'hands' and 'feet' (and even an instance 'before handing everyone a character sheet' at the beginning of chapter 2) and other times it's hooves. It would be handy
to stay consistent so the readers know if it's show accurate or more anthro or even humanized ponies. 
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I really do try to avoid it but my brain just kind of fills in the blanks for me when I write. Gonna have to be more diligent in my editting lol, thanks for pointing it out 
(and yes they're hooves)
How this was so fuuuuuuun, there is not enough Ponies and RPG fiction here. Got a new reader here so please update,if you wan't, if that would be alright.
I've to say Dashie is missing a lot of fun trying to be all Cool. A Adventurer is not so different from Daring Do.
whats a paladin
"would her studies of gotten"
... Jesus Christ.
This is getting stupid. I mean, more stupid than it was already. Retarded, and to call it that is insulting to the mentally disadvantaged, because this is still so much worse.
Listen, "would of" is *never* an acceptable substitute for "would have" or "would've". It makes no sense, but it's everywhere like fucking herpes, and whoever first came up with it needs to be sterilized, as well as their closest family, just so any descendants won't have to live with the shame of relation.
Fluttershy character make me smile
always a lot.
I freaking love this story. What was Fabulous's bloodline again, or has it even been revealed yet? I've figured out that it's one of the ones with a ranged touch attack bloodline power so that narrows it down. Also, something tells me that if Dash joins the others are going to force her to be the cleric.
2124565 A holy warrior. A knight with magic spells they get from a deity basically.
4138105 ....
i was making a joke . its a reference to the spoonyones review of ultima 9.
If this is going to be a story series, then for the next story may I suggest Shadowrun (3rd or 4th edition, the 5th edition's crap.)
I recently started playing tabel top games with my friends. Pathfinder is my most played game do far and I enjoy it. Looking foreword to reading this when I have the time.
P.s. Playing lizerdfolk is the best thing ever.
4287391 haha the spoony one. Great man. Just remember do not throw bottles of acid at the door.
4138105 just to correct you on that one. The paladins, sometimes known as the Twelve Peers, were the foremost warriors of Charlemagne's court, The paladins and their associated exploits are largely later fictional inventions, where they represent Christian valor against the Saracen hordes. now my friend. That's a Paladin
It could be worse, it could be Discord.