The great cloud cover has protected, but also isolated the pegasi for nearly two centuries. During this long time the Great Pegasus Enclave has stood valiant and unchallenged, its society content with the status quo save for rare exceptions.
What implications will it have on the lives of the pegasi above the clouds, when a young, earthborn mare will come to them to plead for her parents and the surface? How will the Ravenclaw Enclave respond? What will its rulers do to maintain the inner peace?
[This story is a retelling of the events that were only briefly mentioned in the Fallout Equestria side story War Never Changes written by Jarmari]
Chapters (3)
this sounds good i might have a read
but i may need to warn you there are many fallout crossovers out there and most if them get many bad views, not saying might or might not just be warned i had the same, some people think its just becoming repetitive, but if you right it well get some faves likes and followers you should be in the clear..............oh and by the way welcome to the fallout universe herd!
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Pardon? The first comment isn't a complain about it being a story set in Kkats creation? Me dissapoint
Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm well aware about the attitude some bronies have towards this kind of stories, but I'm open for any kind of feedback. The story is being written more for fun than to gain fame, riches and... let's take mares... yes... I liked Jarmari's tale and wanted to elaborate the back story of one of its mane characters. I think it will have around 3 chapters and I'll try to finish it pretty fast
It will not end on hiatus like CSI... 
Nice to see a person from Authors Helping Authors writing an Fo:E fic, we must just hope that you get some more feedback than the rest of us on that account
1975205
I'm afraid that I'm not yet a part of the Authors Helping Authors group
1975212
Me that read something wrong. Don´t mind me then, I will go over in this whole over here and be ashamed of myself
Derp
1975218
Have you already forgotten my 
from yesterday? 
Don't worry sugarcube
1975229
That explains where I remember that avatar from. None the less good luck with the story, a side story to a side story is going to be interesting after all
Uhh Uhh!
1975231
Me knows, I had to change all of my notes after the Raptor scene, because I simply love the way she ended out
1975239
I know, her insane smile tends to burn itself into the minds of others
1975202 im happy to help trust i know what is like i had a few haters on my fallout fic and my other ones to but i've learned not to suck up to people like thatv
I never noticed this before, but you use the word 'sight' instead of 'sigh' every single time you write it in the story. I went back and looked at the notes and drafts you sent me and you use it in there too...
also in CSI...
I like all the stuff in the academy, those pegasi are all really good characters and I loves them.
1975253 We will see about the reactions to this one
1975275 <Facedesk> Dang it, fails corrected
1975300
Always happy to help
1975302 And I thank you for that
I'z deserves criticizing 
1975312 only in a good way though
1975434
Critique is good, it keeps the ego at bay and motivates the wicked mind
1975439 ah true words............. true words indeed
Oh look, the first thumbs down has appeared. Think they read the story and judged it based on it's merits and decided it didn't mean their standards?
Nope, saw it was an FoE story and gave it a thumbs down just because of that I betcha
1975688
Sweet, I like haters. Good that this fandom is finally getting some schisms
1975443
I prefer insane
1975698
lol I think I had like...5 thumbs down in the first day my story went up? Some people just don't like it, and that's too bad.
1975725
Don't worry, be happy, watch ponies, send them into a post-apocalyptic hell,love, tolerate, be happy
Sounds like an interesting premise. I'll see if I can read it shortly, but have a free upvote.
Don't worry about the haters.
1976402
I was actually afraid that the description is a little bit unspecific/boring... Nevertheless thanks and don't worry - Fallout:Equestria is the best sub-universe this crazy little fandom of pony obsessed men and girls ever created (venerate Kkat, Somber etc.) and the complains and resentments of the haters only make me smile. It's a little bit like the Truk not Munkey! shit-war on the Trasformer forums, from the time when Beast Wars came out
Thank you
1976431
When beast wars first came out...congratulations on making yourself old Alamut
1977458
I didn't participate in it as I was more interested in watching it, playing with the toys and getting nervous that i will be starting first grade the next year or so
WNC=War Never Changes
Now every time I hear that phrase I want to punch a hole through reinforced titanium (because normal titanium is rather soft)
Hopefully this fic is decent enough to not warrant unnecessary hate from the masses. In short: good luck with your FO: E fic, hopefully it does doesn't get lost among the fucking unnecessary amount of other side fics out there
I'll be moving on now without giving any green or read pixels of approval/hate
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1985924
On the other hand it could also be a critique against Fallout Equestria fics as a whole...
Good idea
Thank you, I'm trying
good chapter
2017401
I'm happy that you enjoyed my little crime against equninity
2018859 OHOHOHO the things I would like to do to those stallions... Much to colorful to post here.
2018873
Me included 
Why is everyone saying that?
2018881 Honestly last time I got so attached to a character was a while ago with Aria from another FoE.
2018890
Aww stop that, you're feeding me ego way too much
2018895 go to the chat I will feed more
The last scene... I know Hubi's pain. Anyway it's a nice FF but for me CSI is way better ;>
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It isn't ready yet and CSI will return! Someday...
I swear I would beat the ever living crap out of them and other un mentionables
2225990
I'm right there with you. Ruby deserves justice.
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Yay, strong emotions
2228074
Justice will be served! It just might take a while...lol
2228074 the other things may or may not include limbs shot off
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I hope you aren't meaning Scourge Cloud - he's only doing his job
2228130
I'm referring to the ones that 'keep her company.' I'm very protective of my poor little pegasus
2228937
Then you shouldn't have left her in my wicked claws
2228941
Nah she'll be fine in the end and it adds a whole dark aspect to my world that I'm just not capable of writing myself
2228988
I'll take is a compliment
2229004
tis
Congratulation with the feature in the Fallout Equestria group