Good day to you! My name is Connor. an Englishman is what I am, and ponies, I do enjoy. There is nothing better than sitting down with a cup of tea and a good pony story.
Professor Crash Test is an earth pony with a passion for invention, after moving to Ponyville see how his invention's help (or wreak havoc) on the citizen's there and how he mostly end's up needing help from the mane six to help him fix it, come along for the ride and remember: friendship is inventing!
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I don't know who those people (maybe trolls) are, who rated your story 0.5. I think this has some good potential. There are quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes, so I suggest getting a pre-reader, or at least use a spelling checker. Here's a good one: www.grammarly.com
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Thank's for the comment!
to be honest when I first saw the rating of this I was kinda sad
I mean, I'm not the best author but It cant be that bad right!? It could be worse, I could have wrote it like My Immortal! (ugh, I shudder just thinking about it....) anyway thank's for the link I'll be sure to use that in the future, and thank's for taking the time to read this!
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You should get rid of the mistakes, then it should all be good.
The itself is actually quite interesting, and has potential.
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The *story* itself
Sorry about the italic writing near the end, I don't know how to fix it
anyway I hope you enjoy reading this regardless
The spelling and grammar in this chapter is already way better, but you kept making mistakes with the plural. "Time's" is supposed to be "Times", "Cloud's" is supposed to be "Clouds", ... In English, you almost never use "-'s" in the plural. You can just assume it's "-s". I haven't even met a single word that doesn't end on "-s" in the plural! Another tip: Plural words ending on "y" end on "ies" instead of "ys" or "y's". Also, if you quote a sentence (just like "This is a test sentence."), you also need to capitalize and use dots just like normal.
I hope this is useful!
Hey?! Everything's italic!
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Thank's for the tips! Its nice to know your still reading this, and I really appreciate that your helping me to make it better. Hopefully the next chapter will be to everyone's liking.