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Twilight and her five friends are transported during a botched spell, across dimensions to... Ponyville, Equestria? But not the same one that they knew. Sitting on a bench is Harpsy and Babar. The Doctoress avoids apples from an aspiring Applebuck. And in a library across town, six stallions join their forces as they try to decipher the appearance of filly look-alikes of themselves around Ponyville!
So half the main six suffer some degree of narcissism? Neat.
Anyways, love the amount of character you've ended up injecting into this story, it was really what made this go. It was oft-times and sometimes just downright silly, but usually in the best of ways. (I will continue to facepalm at Rarity, but eh, it worked still) Nice fic. Sad to see it coming to a close, but it couldn't stretch out forever, now could it?
>>3824 There was at least. (though I'm still confused as to whether the name used was a legitimate one...)
Heh, very entertaining! Great characterization, simple but intriguing plot, a fun writing style. Loved it. Can't wait for the conclusion!
>>3829 Grrr, plagiarism is never okay. I guess that explains why the story went down when I was halfway through chapter 4 yesterday. Sorry someone stole your story, but it's great to have it all up here now!
Glad to see this finally up on my preferred site. :)
EXCELLENT chapter. Skillfully done, especially given the sheer amount of characters present! I feel bad for the colt Crusaders, but hey, they had to pop in here at some point. They needed some closure in the story too, given how much they were a part of it.
Can't wait for the conclusion. 
I feel inclined to not that Apollo is the god of the sun, not the moon, so Apocalypse Apollo would likely seek to create eternal day, not night.
But considering the wonderful ending to a wonderful, charming story, I don't really care. This is one of the rare works of writing I come across that I don't have any criticism for; I loved pretty much every aspect of your story. Even though it's over, I hope that you'll continue writing. I eagerly await your next masterpiece!
You were ever so close to bittersweet ending that it was actually rather impressive when the ending was almost straight-forwardly happy. You even ended with a letter the princess. I dunno what else to put here. This was really just one of those perfectly constructed and nigh perfectly delivered stories. I could nit or pick at things, but it's simply more enjoyable to just say that this was something special. Nice job.
>>4216 I said to myself as part 10 ended, "You know, I bet Celestia and Solaris are already acquainted." Sure enough...
I admit part of me was hoping there would be more of a reunion in part 11, even though that would've been a bit cheesy. They're just all so cute together.
It says "FIN," but the story is still listed as incomplete.
I admit to be somewhat confused by the relationships in this story.
Are all the opposites in love with each other? I thought that Dash and Blitz were hooking up with the AJs, but apparently that's not it.
And now we have Celestia/Solaris apparently being friends with benefits (at least) but Solaris still seems interested in Twilight Sparkle. Or were they just playing with one another?
I'm confused. 
I'm going to write this here. I'd write it on FanFic, but I can't log in there for some reason.
It's a fantastic story, subtly funny and still posesses drama and integrity. I feel the ending was a bit sad, but I comfort myself with the knowledge that it's still listed as incomplete. So until then, I'll live with the hope that there'll be another chapter to it.
I'm gonna join in singing your praises with the rest of the choir here: Absolutely awesome story! That ending was perfect. And thank you for that, because I was somewhat hesitant to read this chapter after the crushing close of the previous chapter.
I, too, would love to read a sequel to this - just think of the potential carnage inherent in two Pinkie Pies and two sets of the CMC (not to mention the collateral damage guaranteed by a Dash Vs. Blitz showdown)! - but this one will remain as one of my top favorites regardless, thank you for this. 
Hmmm... I'll be honest, I wasn't expecting a sequel/continuation/maybe a spinoff, but it's certainly welcome given the ending. Also, crusaders. I'm happy.
It's nice to see a story with such a precarious, yet enjoyable balance of humor.
>>4371 I hope it shall be with kindness and friendship or something of that sort... such threat of violence, tis positively appalling. *jk*
Cogwork, I'd like to thank you for improving my quality of life by a measurable amount by writing this. It's the best piece of fan-made literature I've read, both for this franchise and for any other. Or at least, it's my favourite. I literally spent days checking EqD regularly specifically for this story just in case you'd updated it, and now it's finished I thoroughly support the idea of a sequel or continuation.
So, yeah. Big fan of your work. Ya did good, kid. :3
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Love it, obviously.
That wouldn't work.
Cupcakes, try throwing cupcakes 
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allot and found myself at the edge of my seat the entire time 
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