(Under spelling repair.)
(The image was done by Silver Tongue. CURSE YOUR DRAWING TALENTS!)
(Their theme, while in action, is this)
Celestia summons Twilight for a simple magic test, and Twilight's friends decided to follow to cheer her up from her nervousness. The test's entry was perfect, and a lovely tea break with the princesses to relax a bit and talk was going perfectly...until a strange biped wearing a science outfit appears in the throne room. They were finally in Equestria, but who exactly are they? What are these awful creatures that they are using to kidnap "test subjects" for their experiments, and what is this creature that seems to be a mixture of Nightmare Moon and...something else? When the only safehaven for the inhabitants of Equestria becomes the Island of Secantor, a place where technology is legion and magic is both frowned upon and punished, and, worst of all, is actually an enemy of Equestria, things begin to tense up. And who is this "Doctor" who seems to be the lead scientist in this horror scenario? Does he lead or is he lead? What is he? He and the others seem extremely different from the chained bipeds, but in what manner? Aren't they the same creatures...or are they?
Two worlds are now connected. Two of bizarreties. What are these other bipeds that are thrown into Equestria as well as time goes on? What is there to expect with these chained up creatures?
"Where technology holds a candle, magic shan't prevail."
I am so glad he did the artwork for this. I mean Jesus Christ, it looks amazing.
That quote totally gets to me. I meeeean really, if Humans ever came in contact with enemy magic users, we could totally own them with our technology.
HUMANITY SHALL ALWAYS PREVAIL!
How can that island be a safehaven if it's also a home of their enemies?
1934263 You"ll see.
He just walks out of nowhere.... "Prepare for your examination!" This story makes me want to play Dead Space.... but then I would have to disconnect my cords again and switch over.... it's just so irritating... YOU KNOW RIGHT?
1934263 Perhaps, but They aren't humans, or are they?
1936864 Really.... they probably aren't? Well that kind of depresses me.... but atleast Humanity is possibly still good.
Enough with the confusing stuff though, it's starting to get to me.
1936868 There ARE humans in this story. Read the description a bit more closely.
DONT WORRY ABOUT WHAT I PUT IN YOUR DRINK!
its called a date rape drug
1936900 I see it now, I thought there was only one type of biped, and it would only be Humanity! BECAUSE WE ARE BETTER!
I'm guessing that the chained bipeds are Humans, which would mean that atleast we were better than the scientists.
The story has a interesting concept.In my opinion i find magic and science the two sides of the same coin.Science is the study and understanding of the elemental forces of the universe and magic is the application of that understanding. Without science, magical research would never progress past simple manipulation of the base elements. Without magic, science would stumble blindly into the unknown with no experimentation to move it forward.
1939582I SHOULD be getting the next chapter out today...but later today. VERY "later".
It's the music and the picture that really make this story
1948010 You...you seem to have some tentacles behind you.
1948044 It's best not to ask about those
1948049
This guy's starting to sound like some insane observer from fringe.
1953959 I dunno.
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Y i no comment. because i comment now LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.
No but you are right. this is really dark.
But for some reason I can see Martin Luther King Jr. just coming in and giving some I have a dream speach.
2000160 It sounds familiar?
So the whole problem between the two factions here is that party A see's only good in magic while party B see's only evil?
2010439 There is no "party B", unless you mean Celestia. Think of what Stalin and Mao did to the competition.
2176982 Oh, she's just a background character. She won't come back after that r-unintentional procreation.
Also, I almost wrote their name. That's a secret I intend to keep to myself.
2177114 Oh? You mean the TINY portion you've seen so far? This is just a small portion. There are MANY MANY more of them that aren't involved in this story.
2177130 Perhaps, but they have been around for QUITE a long time.
2251818 Make you hate them even more?
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Lesson Zero is one of my personal favorites, so it's always good to see Twilight panic!
Evil....eviiil....EVIIIIL!!! That Doctor is nothing but PURE EVIL!
Y nopony speak normally? I mean, I don't speak normally in real life, but more normally than these tards.
I like this Secantor place, they hate magic? So do I! Magic is overpowered, and needs to be nerfed.
A Psychonaut doesn't sound like something i'd like to deal with ever, crazy as hell mang.
"Oh no, Rosy galloped away!"
Yes, Equines do tend to gallop.
Is there any point in these experiments that they keep on having? It's just random, and gives me bad images.
Rosy is a Hooman? Sucks.
2256176 They have purposes, but these will never be revealed outside of their circle.
Gimme sum moar of this story fagit, luljk. But seriously, moar kthx.
2279340 It's a "point of view" because Twilight saw everything from her memory. Also, she didn't die. She was just experimented on. That thing torn apart wasn't her.
2279361 Did you not recall what was told before? Twilight was allowed to break apart from her own memory and roam about in the "expanded" memory. Thus, she was not seen.
You know. I hope that fat fuck of a scientist gets cancer, has a knife shoved up his ass, while getting fishing hooks through his goggles into his eye sockets. Then has to sit through the pain of cancer while being starved and forced to do actual manual labor like a real person should. And slowly dies an old man with no family, friends or great life accomplishments. He just gets left in a pile of dog shit.
2283831 The new guy or Doctor?
I just knew that they were somehow going to find Twilight EVEN THOUGH IT'S A MEMORY... or something. They experiment, just to experiment? They're all crazy then. Uhhh, more of this, it's getting better with each chapter although it seems pretty wierd... they should be preparing for war, not trying to determine why it's happening.
2294406 One cannot attack a wall with a sword. They also have to convince Scilian to help them. Even if he does, they don't know the technological level of the invaders.
2297283 Their tech level is 1 million.
2298245 Only two percent power level?
2298257 One million seems like a big number to me.
2298262 You didn't get the joke then.
2302192 Ya think? Lololololol
2501946 Lemme rework that. I'll put the sequel within this story.
2502017 I won't make a separate story to submit. It'll all be in this one thing.
i hope you dont mind me saying, but there are several words throughout the chapters that are misspelled. if you would like, i could go through each chapter and point out such words.
2502094 Of course I wouldn't mind. I always need some help.
2502100 i will copy all chapters, look them through then send them to you from my email account. sound good?
2502502 Sounds weird. Should I pm you the account?