oh boy.

Dear Element huh... coincidence? I think not.

Just saw this on EqD. Seems interesting...

"Friendship"

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Sounds like something epic is going to happen....I like it!!

This is where things get goooowd!

Ooookay, so, after a long time of contemplating, I think I'm finally going to sink my teeth into this story. Hopefully, it won't come back to bite me, but I'm willing to give it a shot nonetheless. :D Not sure how long I'll be reading today(if at all), so I hope you don't mind if I post a separate comment on each chapter, rather than a summary.

So here, I'd usually have something like this lumped into the actual first chapter, but I'll look over that right now. I have to say though, that is quite the ominous letter, all it needs is the image of a pony twirling his long, black mustache. Consider breaking it into 2 or more parts though, it's a little disheartening to immediately be looking at a huge block of text like that.

Onwards!

Moon Shooter lol sanity not included

A classic intro, a mystrious letter...Yepjavascript:smilie('');

Who knows there might be cake? Real honest to goodness  cake.  Not that dang Portal of Mario cake.

That was just a let-down.

Luigis Mansion crossover sounds interesting. At least I think it is still not sure.

Don't mind me, I'm just gonna read this again because I'm bored.

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>>764408764408 Same here. Its been so long that I'm starting to forget the plot.

>>813499813499

Actually, the story was so awesome, I couldn't get it off my mind.

My curiosity just got me looking towards this fic. This could be interesting. Might as well get started.

I'm ashamed no one else said this yet.

Welcome to ou- I mean, you're mansion.

>>850835850835

Probably because Sweetie wasn't tricked into winning this mansion. ^^;

*Peruses letter* Yeah... Seems legit.

>>266826266826

Would you like to read my novel?

1) All-underlined is a pain to read.

2) Several grammar errors in the letter:

> I want to start off by thanking you for your warm welcome all of you gave me several days ago, to your wonderful town.

Should be "the warm welcome", not "your warm welcome".

> Don't worry, I don't plan to keep you if your busy, but I do insist you all attend.

Should be "you're busy", not "your busy".

> I can assure you that despite it’s hasty construction, it is quite sound in terms of architecture, if you have any fears of it crashing down on your heads...

Should be "its hasty construction", not "it's hasty construction".

Shitstorms a brewin

Specter?

Let us attend to the old Spiderman tradition that if your name sounds lie anything, you're a villain.

I call ghosts.

>>21729402172940

That kinda doesn't work in a world where EVERYBODY'S name sounds like something.

I am

A HUGE fan of Luigi's Mansion.  It was the first game I ever played.

Let's see if you can do it justice.  Onwards!:rainbowdetermined:

>>21802852180285 Spoilers: everypony's a villain. The Mane Six are just biding their time until they can enact their diabolical plan to plunge Equestria into an eternal sunset of pink sparkles and rainbows, filled with desserts, apples, and the guarantee that if you like something you'll lose it and never find anything else quite like it for the rest of your life. Also there will be fluttering.

. . . Actually, I could totally go for Rarity being a supervillain who makes you lose things precious to you. And Twi always thwarts Rarity's plan by finding an inferior replacement, then making it so shiny that nopony notices the poor quality. Somebody needs to write this, and it shouldn't be me if it's going to be any good.