My nane is Star Swirl, and if you're an egghead, you'll probably recognise the name. The most important conjurer of the pre-classical era, the greatest sorcerer who ever lived, and yes, he is my ancestor. There's just one small problem: I'm an Earth Pony. Or so I thought. It turns out the truth was... much more complicated. And the day I learned the truth was the day my life changed forever. But not in the way I expected.
This is my story.
This story's writing is so mechanically bad that I couldn't tell you if the concept is solid, because I couldn't manage to finish a Chapter. My advice to you kiddo, get a beta reader. You need someone with a lot of dedication, high quality mechanical writing skills, and a greater vocabulary than you.
I kinda like it so far