Growing up with no friends and no one who cared about him had driven him into social exile. He had no idea how to interact with others because he never had anyone who cared for him. Left abandoned in a house belonging to his dead parents, with no family members willing to take him in, his school years have been depressing. Though he never gave up he still had the feeling that he wasn't wanted anywhere. He finally spoke up and that is when it all fell apart. All just when he thought things couldn't get worse...
After a tragic incident he gets hospitalized where some weird events occur. A disembodied voice speaks to him promising that it will transport him to a land where happiness is everywhere. Moving towards a bright light, he passes into a new world and begins to fall from the sky into a land known as Equestria. After a big transformation and his body being filled with scars, the voice then tells him that his scars will go away when he finds happiness. Scouring the land to find happiness he meets friends and find somepony to call family.
i like it lots of potential here!
needs more paragraphs though
I like this! And derpy found him!!! Can't wait for more...
Good story... very good I'm interested so don't dissapont
Alicorn? Interesting... update soon!
I like this story its very well written and expertly thought out
You should be able to mmake these faster dude
Hi, do you ever sleep?
This be the Editor here doing a last read through to make sure he put 'its' instead of "it's".
Anyway we have other stories to write, in my case edit, and making music and on top of that drawing pony art! We will be slightly slow on the posting of new chapters. Anyway Its about 1am our time so you readers are lucky we pulled the all nighter to finish this. Now Mr.Dilligent (DisHarmonize) is sitting on his computer starting on his new story called 'Discord's Key'.
But hope you all like the new update we worked hard on!
Update soon please!
Dragon85- YOU DONT SLEEP EITHER.
Great story DisHarmonize, can't wait for MOAR CHAPTERS!!