When a certain approval for the study of dark magic or as it's actually called 'Forbidden Magic', Twilight get's a evil inside of her body that is unknown. As the truth was found she tries to free herself from the evil's wrath, it was known that she couldn't free herself. Now that the evil spirit has taken over her body, what will take place next?
Note: This is my first fanfiction! So I would appreciate it if I could get feedback of my story including constructive criticism! Also, there are quite a few characters, just couldn't be checked due to limit, oh well (:
Chapters (4)
........not bad...I will see where this story goes...
Ideas for title:
Curiosity curved the Horn,
The book and the Unicorn.
Hope it helps!
Ps nice story.
Would love to start reading more comments! Fluttershy would love to read them.
Sorry for all the spelling errors,
they are being fixed, and grammer and other stuff... so no worry 
This is great start but you should work on your story telling, every paragraphs just gets to the point quickly like you're telling what is happening instead of showing what is happening.
Poor Twilight, Don't worry you can survive this horrible event!
Need more comments guys! i really would like to hear feedback!
You realise deleting the negative comments will just backfire upon you? But regardless ;) Epic :P Obviously
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Then don't delete them!
Hello everyone, I know you've been expecting an update. But, I lost interest in writing long stories.. therefore, I have cancelled this story and am now writing short stories. As for, The Wish. One of the other stories I was working on. I'm not sure if I want to continue that either.
Sorry for any sad faces I may have profound on you.
-MLPFluttershy.