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Character development in this is superb! And the plot! When the radioactive lobster pony discovered that the blue sheep was actually her father and was hiding the equanox in his chest the whole time was better than the twist in Bioshock! Bravo, good sir!
I thought characters were spot-on, and the conflict was intense! I never saw that double-cross coming.
Can't wait for the next part!
I'm a little confused. Is this a joke or did you just rage quit at knighty?
Anyway, I'd like to say this story was very great. The word choice and grammar was wonderful and made me tear up. Also, plot development was never-ending and held me at attention till the last word.
Thank you. Thank you for making me smile. ![]()
Truly incredible. Were it anymore beautiful, mine eyes would be blinded.
What just happened? Did you guys had a fight or something?
or just plain annoyance.... ![]()
really looking foreward to the next installment of this under-sea epic inspired by Jack Caruak's novel "Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace." The fact that you managed to keep Gandalf and Dobby in character speaks volumes about your musical skill. And that part with the lima beans and the car chase? Priceless!
~Oatz, Streamer/mod of Bronytv~
Will someone please explain? Because...
This is quite possibly the best story I have ever read on FiMFiction.
*Sniff* So beatiful. That part when the gigantic radioactive lobster pony was reunited with it's father gets me every time. 5/5
My main complaint is that it got a little predictable towards the end. The climax of the story was telegraphed at the very beginning, and came as no surprise. Other than that, it was very consistent, story-wise.
Glad to see that moderation is working... I've been waiting for 33 hours for my story to go through... and instead of mine, which might I add I spent 1 week on just one paragraph gets held up... because of this??? What the fuck dude... seriously this website is pissing me off so much right now...
Clearly a homage to the masterworks of Edgar Allen Poe. "Eyo knighty, eat a dick!" captures the same kind of hopeless despair as Poe's works.
best fic on the site
gold starred and tracked
How did this pass the Mods I dunno...
5 stars have a nice day my good sir.
Well guys, I quit. I've had a good run, but I'll never be able to live up to the standards this fic has set. This is the beautiful offspring of Herman Mellville and Woody Allen, with a hint of Bruce Springsteen sprinkled around the nose. Thank you for such a masterpiece, Poultron. And fuck you for producing something I'm not even worthy of scrubbing the shoes of.
I guess... I guess I'll be leaving now
knighty dont edit story im the administrater of fimiftion dont edit
MFW IT WAS TITLED EYO KNIGHTY I WANT YOUR DICK
I HAVE NO FACE FOR I AM IN INTERNET
seriously.... WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED?! RUINING THIS SITE?! I cant imagine why something like this can be brought up
Here we go.. Shy's gonna....
oh no...
.... Please dont...
There she goes....
I will now procced to utter from my lips the classic internet phrase...
Mind if I use select quoted from this masterpiece?
PS. Has knighty seen this?
This is just so beautifully written, a true masterpiece that will last for the ages.
I cry every time! It's just such a wonderful story! Bravo on you good sir!![]()
Man... What a twist. I...Oh man... You have changed my life... Have my babies?
My Little Dashie
Past Sins
A Bright New Midnight
What Do You Do With A Drunken Unicorn
A Fillie's Laughter
Are NOTHING compared to this. A true word smith if I do say so myself, YOU WIN THE INTERNET ![]()
I like the plot of your story.
I needed a good laugh.
Remember class! Every sentence should have at least three curses.![]()
... Uh... Ah screw it, I'm just gonna treat this story like Pinkie Pie, and just accept it and not question it.
What a brilliant, touching work of art!
Wow. Best fic EVAR! Please make a sequel. OR! Maybe you can write a few more Fuck you. Or write "POULTRON IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN KNIGHTY EVEN THOUGH KNIGHTY IS AWESOME AND I SUCK" I support knighty. Dunno why. He just has a better username I guess. Seriously, how did you think of poultron?
that is a serious question. I really want to know.
This is amazing. This is the best thing I've ever seen. Such a rich undercurrent of hidden meaning and existential pleading...it truly raises questions about our place in the world. An author such as I can only aspire to a fraction of the greatness that is this story.
Wat indeed.
...Weird.
Uh, anyway.
Send this image to knighty,then delete this comment :
This story is so constructive and progressive that I feel obligated to favorite it.
This is relevant...right?
Oh well,







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