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interesting i have a question though is it weired that i actually enjoyed reading oh and keep it up

Man, what is it with this fandom and rape? :rainbowhuh:

Not gonna downvote because I stopped reading when it started getting all rapey so I can't judge the story's quality as a whole, but I'll never understand this fetish. I don't understand many things though, so whatever.

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If its got rape, that means its mature, and if its mature more people will like it. Which is pretty paradoxical, considering that so many of us came into this fandom because the show was light and happy and incuded nothing like rape and murder and such.

This is worse than just rape, though. This is rape with really wooden dialog. It's got about as much erotic tension as an unmicrowaved fishstick.

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Technically there is one account of rape in the show where Chrysalis was in the form of Princess Candence. Even thought it is not mention, it is kinda obvious since she sleeps with Shining Armor every night. Also the fact that they are getting married. Another fact that support this is that she is a changeling and they get there strength from "sucking" love from others.

ehh. could use more character to the story.

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"It's got about as much erotic tension as an unmicrowaved fishstick."

Would that make the Gorton's Fisherman Ron Jeremy?
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After all, he does love fish tacos.

Domination sexy.:rainbowkiss:

This is sickening, the words of the English language can not encompass the disgust I feel toward the idea of raping Chrysalis. May Sithis take you and may Sheogorath forever dance upon your entrails.

oh no there harming our queent we must save her all remaining changlings who arn't captured yet we must regroup and come up with a plan to save are comrades and are queen.

i say we tell twilight what is happening to are queen i know that shes to much of a goody goody to let anyone suffer the fate are queen is suffering:fluttercry:

2022326 I'm with ya bro (even if i'm just a unicorn masquerading as one of ya.) lets tell Twilight what is going on.:twilightsmile:

hmmm
ok
i just here wondering if this will end good for her or not XD
i mean i HIGHLY doubt celestia or luna are ok with this but i am wiling to keep track of it to see what happens next

1922404 Sheogorath would totally just play jump rope with them instead.

Well I for one found it entertaining.

OH BUCK NO DIS AINT HAPPNIN! there better be the fan charcter the king of changlings in this story and he better best a cap in da rapiost ponys @$$ NOW!

This is strange. I had a roleplay on omegle like this once, everything is almost the same.......even my characters coat color and eye color and even the aspect of him being very tall are there...... Ever so strange.

Why is everyone complaning about? There are far more brutal and disgusting fanfics around this fandom.
This one is truly something, but I don't think is THAT horrible. In fact, I'm surprise there are no more stories like this where Chrysalis is the one being raped, instead of the rapist. And is very well done. :twilightsmile:
I hope to read more.

GOOD, i like this one

...and then Sombra saves the day. Reads Celestia the riot act. I can't see Cadance condoning this, so she likely doesn't know. If she does...I have lost all respect for your writing.

This story did what I wanted it to do (in a clop sense) but now I wanna see progression...will Crissy get out of this? Will some goody goody help? Maybe this unicorn is full of s**t and he is really a random guy who happened to capture the poor bug queen, using illusions to make her think he has her children hostage? Who knows. I just hope that this story doesn't have TOO much of a dark end. Those stories always make me sad :ajsleepy::fluttershyouch::pinkiesad2:

Acheron, may Luna rape you up the ass with her horn.

Now that that's out of the way, good story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

caI feel like she should be rescued by cadence, who found out that her aunt had caught the changelings/chrysalis but didn't know where she was so cadence kept asking her aunt where she was ( because, being the princess of love, cadence knew that chrysalis was invading canterlot because she loved her children, who were starving, and not because she was evil ) but celestial just kept saying " she can't hurt you anymore, she's being punish" but cadence didn't want her to be punished so she and shining ( who cadence explained the situation to ) go to scour the dungeons for chrysalis and they find her all depressed and broken and they save her and the changelings.

Is this getting updated?

from wat i can tell she will start moaning like crazy soon:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::moustache:

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