Fluttershy may have her friends thinking that she's sweet and innocent, but in downtown Canterlot, she's a fast-talking, cigarette-smoking, plot-shakin' piece of mare. Her alter-ego, Night Rage, is all anypony talks about. But when Fluttershy finds her friends seeking "entertainment" at the strip club she works at, "Night Rage" might have to leave for good.
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An interesting story! will follow to see how it develops
Interesting...
my my, i think i like this fluttershy alot more than normal fluttershy. but man she must seriously hate rarity!
Well, that was... it was something. An interesting concept, to be sure.
I love how it is even tho its unfinished
I love this story and I want to see more of it.
Also, it reminds me of this: http://i.imgur.com/VJsYbq0.jpg
2172245 That's hilarious!
well, that took forever, no offence, but after so many months I was expecting something a little longer
but, its still good
i also was expiating more
but non the less it was good
Finally..i was hoping for more, but its good please hurry with next chapter
Does this new story of mine count as a clopfic...?
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Difficult to define.
But i would say no, as you aren't going into any explicit details. perhaps it may become one, but that's up to you.
Giggity Giggity Goo!
The story flow is getting better, might give it a once over before finishing up the chapter I do not think you needed the plural of fly in Dragonfly's name. Other than that any other problems are little nit picky things that do not really bother the story, keep up the good work
I'm really starting to like this story more and more!
3141636 Thanks for the comment! The onyl thing i don't get is the "plural of fly in Dragonfly's name". What did you mean by that?
Sorry if i come off as clueless; been a while since i worked on this.
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you put dragonflies, if I remember correctly, it has been a while since I last read it
3141636 oh i see what you mean; yeah sometimes i get lazy and don't want to read over my work before posting it.
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no worries, I rather enjoy the darker side you gave flutters, the truth is everyone has that side to them it is just to the matter of how you handle it. Flutters is handling it well for the moment but she is starting to see the problems it might cause with the nightmare she had
This... Is a little overkill. I can see Fluttershy not liking her timid nature and getting off on the rush that exotic dancing and pretending to be someone else provides... But this? You're basically saying that Fluttershy is an act, she hates her friends, and really wants to be Night Rage all the time...
But there's nothing stopping her!
Pants? What pants? Why would a quadruped wear pants? Other than Rarity's mother.
Okay, so, this is listed as a comedy, but it's not funny. It's listed as a romance but there is literally no indication of that anywhere...?
Wow... just.... wow. This seems so.... WRONG and yet so right at the same time!
2172245 well, that was... different.