• Member Since 15th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 31st, 2019

Kaille


A Canadian brony with too much free time on his hands and too much of an addiction to the internet and video games

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Spike comes across Chrysalis after the events of the Royal Wedding, and shows pity on her from seeing the state of her, and her hive. However, she must still work to garner his trust before he will show enough emotion towards her to sustain her. He visits her in secret, and as the years pass, she accrues his trust.

Although more than just trust begins to develop. . .

NOTE: Weird shipping is weird, but it will pose an interesting challenge. Who knows, maybe this will blossom into more than a simple one-shot/short story.

Challenge here: http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/105794/new-years-shipping-challenge

Teen for some gore, and likely use of language - subject to change in the future.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 185 )

make it mature, make it SEX.

MOAR:flutterrage: We demand it:pinkiecrazy:

Wow. Submitted before bed last night, and I wake up to this? Wooh! :pinkiehappy:

I HIT THE FEATURED BOX! ! ! HNGAIYgIbalFSDFYUIaL! ! ! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::heart::heart::heart::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

Sorry for the outburst, this is just a huge achievement for me. :twilightblush:

A few typos, missing apostrophes and stuff, but nothing too major.

thumbs up and faving! :pinkiehappy:

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When I get home I will go back and re-read it, see if I can find them. I admit, apostrophes are, and always have been, the bane of me. :derpytongue2:

And thanks for the like/fave! I appreciate it! :pinkiehappy:

Mallajong will be amazed.

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:rainbowlaugh: Spike's Chrysalis, eh?

2042281 Lol ya. Send him your story, he'll read it.

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Eh, if he finds it, then cool. I don't really want to do any sort of self-promotion. :derpytongue2:

This is.... surprisingly interesting :D Thought it would be a funny fail, but you have proved me wrong. The setting is nice and the description descriptive but not overly so. I look forward to the next chapter
Also that little thing about the cavern was great. Wish I could draw so I could.. well, draw it XD

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:pinkiehappy: I have already started the drawing of the cave. The cover image of the story you see here is a scan of my own drawing. :raritywink:

I did heavily reference other pictures I found on google though. :twilightblush:

As for the rest of your comment, thank you. I was dubious of the pairing when I first got it, saying to myself "wtf can I do with this I don't even-" But I solved it. Got it aaaaall planned out!

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That. . . is a maybe. Looooong in the future, IF I do it. Others can try if they like, as a follow up to my story, but they wont be considered part of the canon of this 'verse. :raritywink:

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If I decide to do clop for this, it will be a separate story. I understand many readers dont like that. :pinkiehappy:

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By that wording, are you saying you will refuse to read the story now? If so, thats fine, I am just curious.

I love this idea

I saw somewhere Fic with totally same plot and same entreance but in half way it went totally shitty.

Anyway i hope you will make this a long story :D

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lol, nice. :rainbowlaugh:

As for the length, it will only be around 20-25 k, I think. But, who knows. I may delve past my current plans and extend it. Nothing has been set in stone yet. :raritywink:

*Reads title*
Okay. * Continues scrolling*
Waitwoawaitwoawhywaitwoawhaaaat?!?!

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:rainbowlaugh::raritywink: I guess it caught your attention then?

Wooh! 100 faves! :pinkiehappy::raritystarry::heart:

You need an editor. I spotted many typos. (gult, wimpered, comlications)

More description (of the cave itself, the smells, etc) would also help.

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Thanks! (wimpered - whimpered, gult - guilt, comlications - complications) At least those typos I can fix. As for the smells, I can work on that, and description of the cave picks up later as we explore more and more of it.

As for editor, I don't have one, but I usually do more proofreading than I did here. I am giving it another look or four when I get home. :twilightsmile:

I must say you have defiantly caught my eye. It has been awhile since I have seen a recent story with the power to draw me in like this. I must say you did a very very good job. Also if your other stories of are at similar quality to this one. They might as well be already be part of my favorites.

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lol, thank you. :pinkiehappy: I think this is of better stuff than my others though; this one has more thought behind it. But I appreciate it! :raritywink:

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On another note, just did a quick run through, checking for typos, errors, and the like before I get ready to ship off from work. I didn't have anything to do today, so I have been here. :derpytongue2: I know that doesn't say much for my work ethic, but eh. :rainbowlaugh: I usually work hard. I just need something to work ON.

An actually mature and ARTICULATE Spike... Huh, miracles do happen :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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:rainbowlaugh: Well, I thought about it. He is just about as old as Twilight (relatively). And then, reading multiple fics stressing that fact furthur, and stressing that he is a baby by DRAGON standards, it only seemed logical. Plus, look at WHO he lives with, and WHERE. :raritywink::pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

2043753 Ok seriously, please send me links to these "multiple fics" please please do. I would really enjoy reading a couple stories like that.

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Uhh. . . If I can remember which ones. :twilightblush: I know I have seen it a few times, just. . . where will take a bit of thinking. :rainbowwild:

2043765........ Dammit. But ok, I can wait a while. I have a considerable amount of patience... Ok, maybe that was an exaggeration.

:moustache: This is relevant to my interests. Please continue.

It's unique, so worth tracking. Let's see if you can pull it off.

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Eh? :rainbowhuh: I wrote it for a challenge. IT started New Years day. This has been in the making since then. That's why. Is that what you are getting at. . ?

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lol, thanks. :pinkiehappy: There is no doubt about it, I am going to finish this. :raritywink:

A Spike Chrayssalis shipping?
This... This is relevant to my interest!! Thumbs up and fav. Man I wish there were more fics like this, presenting a mature, articulate, and emotional Spike. God I can dream can't I?!

Wow not bad not that many grammer errors and an original shipping give this man applause. You heard me do it
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The cards also said the Power Of Love is an Element. I rest my case.

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. . . eh? :derpytongue2: Sorry, my brain is only half-functioning on pony right now. I have no idea what you mean. :rainbowlaugh:

Quite enjoyable. I look forward to more.

Not manufactured galss, but natural glass from when lava meets water under certain cirumstances.

What? :applejackconfused:

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There is such a thing! It's blue too. :pinkiehappy:

Volcanic Glass

It is a rare type of obsidian. :raritywink:

EDIT: Just noticed the typo, thank you. :derpytongue2:

You're doing it right.

I can see a lot of potential over here. Nice set up. Nice characterization so far. And nice detailed narrative.
I have just one problem:

Lying at my feet, two days after the events of the Royal Wedding...
Eight days ago, I was on my way to Zecora's hut in the Everfree forest t...
So here I am, at the edge of the Everfree Forest, on the way to go explore said cave, and here I find the Queen of the Changelings.

Time paradox?:applejackconfused:

You made spike a badass...:moustache: I like it!

(Joke) Alt. Title: Shipping For A New Year #273: The Queen Gets Spiked And Featured
Dumb joke, I know. At least this isn't yet another "Chrysalis-wants-revenge" fic. And, if I were the one handin' out these challenges, I would've made this Chrysalis and Fluttershy. No reason.

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Nnnope!

Finds cave 6 days before wedding, goes to wedding, two days after wedding, explores. :pinkiehappy:

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