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    • Turbulence
      [2nd Person] A popular Cloudsdale game. What could go wrong?

      29,216 words · 4,842 views · 572 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Scorched
      [2nd Person] You, a thief, winds up working for the Apple Family.
      40,745 words · 7,881 views · 1,103 likes · 20 dislikes
    • Those Golden Eyes
      [2nd Person] Derpy seems a bit upset. Maybe you should help her out.
      6,728 words · 3,598 views · 442 likes · 6 dislikes
    • The Wub Carries On
      [2nd Person] Pluck that bass!
      7,656 words · 9,599 views · 679 likes · 12 dislikes
    • Rejuvenate
      24,827 words · 3,617 views · 256 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Novelty
      14,996 words · 5,271 views · 592 likes · 18 dislikes
    • Alleycat Blues
      1,354 words · 749 views · 67 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Recipe for Romance
      3,434 words · 619 views · 45 likes · 1 dislikes

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    "Do we really have to do this?"

    "Yes, we do. It's like Pinkie always says. You need to learn to face your fears!"

    "Wait, I thought it was her Granny Pie that always said that?"

    "Oh, well...whatever."

    "I still don't see why this is necessary."

    "You told me you didn't believe me when I told you about it."

    "That was, what, seven months ago? I take your word for it now, honest!"

    "How am I supposed to believe you?"

    "What? You don't trust me?"

    "Don't you trust me?"

    "...I hate it when you do that."

    "Oh, don't be so grumpy. I promise nothing bad will happen."

    "Ugh, I just hope that- Oh sweet Celestia, there it is!"

    "Ah! Hello, little guy!"

    "L-little? Are you serious!?"

    "What? He's just big kitty, aren't you?"

    "I-i-it's licking your face!"

    "Oh, don't be so scared. Look, I think he likes you!"

    "GAH! S-stay away from me!"

    "Don't be like that, he only wants to be friends!"

    "I, uh...ugh, fine...H-hey, big fella! D-Don't eat my face, okay?"

    "He would never do that!"

    "How am I supposed to know! I mean, look at him!"

    "You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover."

    "Ugh, yeah, I know, I know. I learned that lesson awhile ag-"

    "..."

    "..."

    "Do you trust me now?"

    "...Of course I do. I always will."

    "I love you."

    "I love you too."

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    Make sure you hit up my Finishing Notes for answers to questions the readers may have. Leave feedback for the story here, ask questions about the story there. Thanks!

    Comments ( 32 )

    #1 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    great fic !

    #2 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well, I feel this made a nice story about romance and its obstacles. I only wish it was a longer, even if I am completely satisfied with what you wrote. It was a very good story and I want to see more like it.

    #3 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>218804

    >>218822

    Glad that you both enjoyed it!

    If I tried to make it longer, I would end up punching a baby or something. :applejackconfused:

    #4 · 64w, 2d ago · · ·
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    "..................... What the hell just happened?:derpyderp1:

    #5 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>367291 he met the manticore who picked up the boulder and moved it off his legs.

    In least Twilight knows to not go with Russ, not now not ever.

    #6 · 58w, 14h ago · · ·
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    here is what my reaction be if i got to go live with fluttershy

    Pomf

    #7 · 57w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This story has just one thing that bothers me about Russ aside from his Facebook-crappy quality friend status.

    What happened to him after the initial lash out of "you" at him?

    #8 · 57w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>577311

    I suppose I just sort of left it to the reader's imagination to wonder what happened with him.  All I would say is that he just skipped town.

    He won't be returning in any future stories I write, I'll say that much.

    #9 · 57w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>577415

    By the way, if you haven't yet, USE THIS SITE. It is immensely inspiring as it lists absolutely EVERYTHING that can be included, happen or make people react in a story.

    #10 · 55w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>647319

    Good lord, FINALLY. Someone acknowledged that and is a fan!

    YOU, sir, deserve the highest degree of 'staches.

    :moustache:

    #11 · 55w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:no amount of flutteryays can state wat i thought of this fic ...im still going to try though:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

    #12 · 54w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Good story. Enjoyed the feelings of betrayal even though I would hate for it to happen to me. :twilightsheepish:

    #13 · 54w, 5d ago · · ·
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    OMG BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!! YOU GET THE SEAL OF APROVAL :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile::trollestia::yay::pinkiesmile::heart::twilightsheepish::raritywink:

    #14 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    That is the single greatest 2nd person Fic I've ever read.  On my top 5 overall. Fantastic, absolutely.

    #15 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I told you nigs it was too late.

    #16 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yes, I will admit that Scorched was MUCH better, but hay! Everypony starts somewhere, and this was STILL a good fic!

    #17 · 52w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>759713

    NO

    NO IT SHOULD NOT

    RUN AWAY NOW

    #18 · 52w, 2d ago · · ·
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    they are either talking about a manticore or his penis... I'm confused :rainbowhuh:

    #20 · 52w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I told myself I would stop reading and go to be "after the end of this chapter (Ch.6)." My laptop battery died at exactly 1:01 AM, coincidentally the exact same time that I finished chapter 6. However, I did not go to sleep. I ran to where my charger was, plugged it in, and finished the story. I read this story, or began to, the same day that I finished "scorched," which also blew me away with (as I said in that comment). It is now my intention to read each and every one of the stories that you've posted. This story was extremely well done, though I agree that it isn't quite as good as scorched, it was still a great read. Please keep making these stories; the format is original and well done, the plot is perfect, the timing is (usually) exceptional, and the final product is without compare. My only drawback for this one story was the main character, "your," idea about what Fluttershy was planning was so lame. It was still very good, and the backstory was compelling, I just felt that it "she wanted me to pay a bill" really wouldn't stand up to any kind of scrutiny after 3 months of very personal/intimate care. One more fan to add to what I'm sure is a very lare collection, and I'm sorry for the wall of text. :moustache:

    #21 · 51w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Kody910 you really know how to bring out a readers emotions, i swear to Celestia i wanted to literally cut myself when i heard well... "me" being mean to Fluttershy.

    #22 · 50w, 16h ago · · ·
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    A: Good story.

    B: I am not gonna sleep tonight just becuase I wanna puch that protagonist in the face for doing that to Fluttershy.....Did I mention it was a great story?

    #23 · 49w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>367291

    me and you both :derpyderp2::derpytongue2::derpyderp1:

    #24 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Still great a month after my first read:pinkiehappy:

    #25 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Well tht was a great story.

    It took me a while to find it.

    #26 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    That was a fun read! Thanks for that man. :yay:

    #27 · 36w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Amazing story. Good detail, and I can relate to it because I can't trust anyone in school etc. 10/10:rainbowkiss:

    #28 · 25w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I've no idea who what voice is >.<

    #29 · 23w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1901513 OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH NNOOOOOOOOOO!

    #30 · 23w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1901626 BOHM BOHM BOOOOH BOOOHM, BOH BOB HOB BOBO BOOOH

    #31 · 16w, 7h ago · · ·
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    ffffffffffffffffffffffffahk, that was beautiful. Especially chapter six, that brought my heart to warmth.

    #32 · 6w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1852749

    First sentence is "you", second is Fluttershy, third is back to "you" again, so on and so forth.

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