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Epilogue
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"Do we really have to do this?"
"Yes, we do. It's like Pinkie always says. You need to learn to face your fears!"
"Wait, I thought it was her Granny Pie that always said that?"
"Oh, well...whatever."
"I still don't see why this is necessary."
"You told me you didn't believe me when I told you about it."
"That was, what, seven months ago? I take your word for it now, honest!"
"How am I supposed to believe you?"
"What? You don't trust me?"
"Don't you trust me?"
"...I hate it when you do that."
"Oh, don't be so grumpy. I promise nothing bad will happen."
"Ugh, I just hope that- Oh sweet Celestia, there it is!"
"Ah! Hello, little guy!"
"L-little? Are you serious!?"
"What? He's just big kitty, aren't you?"
"I-i-it's licking your face!"
"Oh, don't be so scared. Look, I think he likes you!"
"GAH! S-stay away from me!"
"Don't be like that, he only wants to be friends!"
"I, uh...ugh, fine...H-hey, big fella! D-Don't eat my face, okay?"
"He would never do that!"
"How am I supposed to know! I mean, look at him!"
"You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover."
"Ugh, yeah, I know, I know. I learned that lesson awhile ag-"
"..."
"..."
"Do you trust me now?"
"...Of course I do. I always will."
"I love you."
"I love you too."
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Comments ( 32 )
Well, I feel this made a nice story about romance and its obstacles. I only wish it was a longer, even if I am completely satisfied with what you wrote. It was a very good story and I want to see more like it.
here is what my reaction be if i got to go live with fluttershy
Pomf
This story has just one thing that bothers me about Russ aside from his Facebook-crappy quality friend status.
What happened to him after the initial lash out of "you" at him?
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no amount of flutteryays can state wat i thought of this fic ...im still going to try though![]()
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Good story. Enjoyed the feelings of betrayal even though I would hate for it to happen to me. ![]()
That is the single greatest 2nd person Fic I've ever read. On my top 5 overall. Fantastic, absolutely.
Yes, I will admit that Scorched was MUCH better, but hay! Everypony starts somewhere, and this was STILL a good fic!
I told myself I would stop reading and go to be "after the end of this chapter (Ch.6)." My laptop battery died at exactly 1:01 AM, coincidentally the exact same time that I finished chapter 6. However, I did not go to sleep. I ran to where my charger was, plugged it in, and finished the story. I read this story, or began to, the same day that I finished "scorched," which also blew me away with (as I said in that comment). It is now my intention to read each and every one of the stories that you've posted. This story was extremely well done, though I agree that it isn't quite as good as scorched, it was still a great read. Please keep making these stories; the format is original and well done, the plot is perfect, the timing is (usually) exceptional, and the final product is without compare. My only drawback for this one story was the main character, "your," idea about what Fluttershy was planning was so lame. It was still very good, and the backstory was compelling, I just felt that it "she wanted me to pay a bill" really wouldn't stand up to any kind of scrutiny after 3 months of very personal/intimate care. One more fan to add to what I'm sure is a very lare collection, and I'm sorry for the wall of text. ![]()
Kody910 you really know how to bring out a readers emotions, i swear to Celestia i wanted to literally cut myself when i heard well... "me" being mean to Fluttershy.
A: Good story.
B: I am not gonna sleep tonight just becuase I wanna puch that protagonist in the face for doing that to Fluttershy.....Did I mention it was a great story?
Amazing story. Good detail, and I can relate to it because I can't trust anyone in school etc. 10/10![]()
ffffffffffffffffffffffffahk, that was beautiful. Especially chapter six, that brought my heart to warmth.







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