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1872458 it's not that it's a terrible idea, don't get me wrong I love writting this story, but when it comes to the sex I'm like... (Deep sigh) "I depsise myself, It's just got to do with the fact that I usually write action novels not romance stories, but glad to know you like it
.....uh-oh someone (like Apple Bloom or scootaloo) saw what they weren't suppose to see and bad things ensue??..that's my hypotheses.
interesting story and concepts though why tiara wants to rape/blackmail/intimidate Joe is beyond me, loving it and hope his pimphand is strong and puts that hoe...in her place AMEN!! (everyone elts- AMEN!!!)
Maybe you should try to switch perspectives between Scoots and Joe more often.
1873332 yeah I think I will, next chapter is completly about Joe... speaking of which
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That's fine. It's just that when the story started it reminded me of Xenophilia where the story is entirely from Rainbow Dash's perspective, but in your story I'm glad that it eventually switched perspectives to the human that she has a crush because now we can see things in his perspective and see what Scootaloo's actions look like to him, especially since that he sees ponies as talking animals.
Seems like Applejack is a better match anyway.