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After a series of long night walks, Luna stumbles upon a small unicorn filly. Luna wants to help this Unicorn as much as she can, as she believes that it can help herself as well, making her past sins seem distant in her own mind.

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Aw, sweet story :twilightsmile: There is going to be more...right? :ajbemused:

Anyway...overpowered filly is overpowered. Really, blowing up an entire school? :rainbowhuh: Tone down her power a notch, as much as we'd like it, not all ponies can be Twilight Sparkles. :twilightsheepish:

And automanicly becoming Luna's favorite? :rainbowderp:

Just work on the Mary - Sueness, and you'll be fine! :rainbowwild:

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We'll see. But thank you

Nice Luna gunna own those Big menie pants.:pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile: :yay: :raritystarry: :ajsmug:

I like I like, sire write more but tread lightly or you may end up ruining this excelent fic you have started

Well played, sir!

Luna chucked as Azura looked in awe,

Small spelling error sire

But nicely done, it is not easy to make a fic like this without it being realy cheesy

I'm cleaning out the stories that I have been keeping track of starting with the oldest. Could you please tell me if this story is still active?

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