I tracked . Keep up the good work

This requires a track please continue!

I just have to laugh at the spa mares from hell.

O_O

Twilight's a stallion now. This story is becoming more and more crazy every chapter...

>>148547148547

oh I'm such an evil writer

Question: Does FIMfiction have pre-readers?

This story seems intriguing eough. Consider this as an announcement of me checking the "tracking" box.

But yes, FIMfiction has pre-readers. Hopefully you'll find some willing to help you. I didn't notice many spelling or grammar errors though, so you got a good foundation in that regard. However, I myself sometimes struggle with grammar, so take my observation with a grain of salt.

"Well you're definitely passing the speed test with flying colors!"

I see what you did there

Oh jeez, Loved the ending!

This... wow.

I don't think it would be fair to ask you to write a sequel, but I would like to see more of this OC!

>>265236265236

Well I really did regret never fully explaining Star's cutie mark in-story. It would have been way too bulky and expositiony, if only there were a way to explain its back story  

That was an amazing ending! Thank you for writing this!

-WG

I loved this!  Why did I just find this story now?!  Favorited!

You troll. Genderbending with the anomorphic spell? :D

This is a great story! I hope someday you write a slice-of-life style story of all the hijinks that Star Gazer gets into with his... predicament.

>>367635367635

Eh I've got to finish Reality Break first. Plus, I just found this awesome anime, I'm getting a really weird sense of dejavu though

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Trolling really can be fun sometimes

>>368082368082 dang broken image.

I'm going out on a limb and guessing it's Ranma or To Love Ru.

>>368129368129

looks fine to me but yeah definitely Ranma... and probably some of To-Love-ru as well (that one ova ) Oh I am a cruel author

>>368146368146 I haven't seen a successful Ranma crossover yet, and I don't think there is a To Love Ru crossover except for the reference in your fic. (there is one r\Ranma crossover, but I think it has too many flaws to be enjoyable)

After Reality Break I want to see some crazy anime crossovers >:D

>>368188368188

just waiting for some reviews on this one (not Cloudy Stars) but...

ya read one piece?

>>368202368202 short answer: no

my answer in a few minutes: yes

Wow, another gb story

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Best week ever

Loving this

Funny, psychotic and all other things you look for in these stories, well done.

You know compared to all the other weird things that Equestria has been through, I don't think Star would be that big of a laughing stock.

>>419369419369

A psychological issue rather than an actual one, if you'll recall a certain purple unicorn managed to defeat a Dark Lord of Chaos yet still probably had a greater breakdown over being late on a fricking letter

>>419381419381 I guess.

Now that's what you call "Perfect Timing."

Also this chapter was awesome, as well as you.

All I can say after reding this.

Hi my name is Star Gazer, and I'm a pony just like you

Or I was until Twilight practiced her magic out of the blue

The Princess tried to help but now every time I sneeze

I'm a Mare by Mistake

Aww this story is cute.  

Dat ending!

Downloaded this to my tablet last night, and went through it this afternoon. It was a very enjoyable read. I'm glad to see that you have a sort of sequel fic going, as well. I hope it'll be as enjoyable as this was.

So every time he sneezes he goes form a stallion to a mare and vise-versa.

That is exactly like a manga I read a while back.

R63?

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>>24571822457182

Oh shit! Get him away get him away!

>>24572592457259 Well that's a little mean Don'tcha think? He's just minding his own business.