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    After his unexpected journey to Equestria, things are starting to look up for the Ultra. The Minor is defeated and Celestia promises a new life. But a storm brews, and this time evil did not come from the Great Beyond...
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  • T Scattered Dust

    Lightning Dust. The name that everypony at flight camp knows, but nopony wants to hear. Why is she the way she is? What drives her into an unstoppable force? And, more importantly, what happens when that unstoppable force meets an immovable wall?
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  • 34w, 1d
    March 2nd, 2014

    Mark the date, ladies and gentlemen. For in one week's time, I will be releasing the (hopefully) edited and final version of the next chapter of Lone Blades at about 4 PM PST (7 PM EST (time subject to change)).

    Yes, at long last the long-awaited continuation is coming. Too long, truthfully, but I'll not waste your time making excuses.

    I'll keep this short since I'm using the (relatively) new story-link-feature-thingy. And I heard it got abused a bit so...yeah. But this should be fairly relevant.

    As a final note, I'd like to thank you all for your continued support and interest in the story. Truthfully, a few brave individuals asking me via PM to "please, please, please" continue the story had a rather large contribution to my desire to continue. So, uh...more of that I guess. But no promises.

    I'll see you all next week, when I can confidently say that we're past all the opening fluff and have officially gotten to the 'good part.'

    Get excited.

    Shane out.

    4 comments · 80 views
  • 36w, 6d
    What the Fart I'm actually doing right now

    Nothing. Literally nothing.

    Okay, not true. I got this job. I've been doing that. It's been good. Money is good. I've also been playing video games and watching professional League of Legends. Like, a lot. Probably an unhealthy amount.

    Haven't been watching pony. About three episodes behind. Can't find will to care. Haven't read or written anything pony-related.

    Maybe pony phase is over? I dunno. Only time will tell I guess.

    Feel free to inform me of any world-shattering updates here, cuz I probably won't hear of them otherwise.

    That's it, I guess. To whoever reads this, stay classy. Peace for now.

    tl;dr: still alive

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  • 46w, 1d
    Tis the season!

    TIIIS THE SEASON TO PUT SANTA HATS ON YOUR AVATAR

    FALALALALAAAALALALALAAAA

    That's right ladies and gentleman! Tis the season to be jolly, and all that jazz! I'm super excited, for it's heading towards my personal favorite time of the year!

    And yes, you read that right, everyone's favorite raven, The Descendant, has issued a call to arms! Or rather, hats! Hats everywhere! Hats on every head! Hats left, right, up, down, and all around! Let the site be filled with holiday spirit! Rejoice, friends, for the wintry wonderlands are upon us!

    And so on and so forth. And yes, before you ask, my santa hat is hand (mouse?) drawn in MSPaint. The only way to do it. #swag amirite.

    So enjoy the holiday seasons, I know I will! As workloads lighten I'll try to get more writing done. I've made some more progress on ASoICE but I'm struggling at the moment. Hopefully I'll get that figured out. And I also might've promised another Lone Blades chapter, so that might happen too.

    Until next time!

    Happy Holidays!

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  • 55w, 5d
    Implifications

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  • 57w, 2d
    Don't Miss Your Chance...

    To read this awesome story by a good pal of mine, naru0C!

    Rainbow Dash has a bit of a crisis.

    Tank "runs" away.

    Looking to write a slice of life story and want examples? Bored out of your mind? Just want a feel-good little tale to pick you up and inspire you to get out there and do that one thing that you just haven't been feeling prepared for? Then look no further! Take it from me, people, he-who-has-read-hundreds-of-stories: this is how a proper slice of life gets you feelin' good.

    Well, what are you waiting for? Go check it out!

    Ciao!

    Shanenator

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Nightmare Moon. Discord. Chrysalis. Sombra. We faced them all, together. Always we were together. Yet in one heart-stopping moment, I almost lost everything. They don't know how close it was, but I do. I alone know what almost happened. The truth. And the truth about the truth? It keeps me up at night.

And it terrifies me beyond anything else this world can offer.

But at least I have my friends to make it all feel better.


This story takes place directly after the events of "Wonderbolts Academy." First-person from Rainbow Dash's perspective.

Sister story to Scattered Dust. Not a required read to understand this, the stories will intertwine but are both stand-alones.

Featured on Equestria Daily, 1/7/2013!

Surgeon General's Warning: Here be feels. You have been warned.

Thanks to Carpe Diem for pre-reading!

First Published
28th Dec 2012
Last Modified
1st Apr 2013
Comment posted by Lord Benjamin Moorington deleted at 10:28pm on the 24th of December, 2012
#4 · 94w, 4d ago · 6 · 1 · And it terrifies me... ·

I'll be the first not to just post 'feels'.

Very well done. Though I feel like such deep thought is a bit out of character for Rainbow, this is easily a real problem that ANY pony could have. And with the voice you gave her, somehow I feel like she was telling me a story personally. Even moreso than if she said 'you' directly.

Bravo. Very, very well done.

#5 · 94w, 4d ago · 2 · · And it terrifies me... ·

>>1867352 Thank you most sincerely! Don't mind the feels guy, he's my prereader. :moustache:

The fact that "deep thought" is considered OOC for Rainbow Dash is quite frankly depressing. In my opinion, she is the most underdeveloped character in the show. She was pretty well-rounded season 1 but season 2 kept things pretty one-dimensional for her. If it were not for the lack of good development, she would totally be best pony.

This is an attempt to rectify that. Thanks for your thoughts.

Happy Holidays!

#6 · 94w, 4d ago · 1 · · And it terrifies me... ·

>>1867367

I'm not saying 'deep' thought is. I'm saying VERY, VERY deep thought like this is. I'm not saying she can't think a lot, but to delve into levels of thought that I'd only expect a philosopher to? That's...a bit extreme.

I do agree that she needs more development, and that she isn't so 2 dimensional. But keep in mind she does have limits to her...

#7 · 94w, 4d ago · · · And it terrifies me... ·

>>1867377 Yeah, maybe the end is a bit much. But I wanted to go out with a bang, y'know? I'll keep that in mind for the future.

#8 · 94w, 4d ago · 5 · 3 · And it terrifies me... ·

Lol 69 views.

#9 · 94w, 4d ago · 3 · · And it terrifies me... ·

>>1867760 I got the notification. AT LAST!! REGIDAR HAS COMMENTED ON MY STORY!!

And then this. Am I surprised? No...I suppose not. But still, the little flutter of hope in my heart was ruthlessly crushed.

Still, 69 views. Likeabauss I suppose. Have a good day, sir. :moustache:

#10 · 94w, 4d ago · 2 · 2 · And it terrifies me... ·

HNNNNNGGGG THE FEELS

I have just realised something

Season 3 is the last ever season of MLP: FIM think about it

Rainbow Dash getting into the Wonderbolts?

Scoots becoming RD little sis?

Hasbro trying to have it go out with a Bang for the fans :raritydespair:

#11 · 94w, 3d ago · · · And it terrifies me... ·

>>1867982 Is it really the last season? I thought I heard rumors about a season 4.

Most saddening. Here's hoping season 3 ends favorably then.

#12 · 94w, 3d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Season Three, I find your lack of faith in the letters to Celestia disturbing. Here, I'll go ahead and fix that for you.

Just a little addendum I wanted to tack on to the story. I'm marking it as 'complete' now. Thanks a bunch to everyone who read, favorited, and dropped a comment and/or thumb. It's pretty cool to see nothing but upvotes up there. :moustache:

Happy Holidays!

#13 · 94w, 3d ago · 6 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Ha that's what I've noticed wrong with season 3

There's barely any letters to Celestia and that makes the episodes seem hollow

#14 · 94w, 3d ago · 2 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1872533 Come on, Hasbro. It ain't hard. Ten less seconds of ads won't kill you.

#15 · 94w, 3d ago · 4 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

They think with their pockets (wallets?) not with their minds

#16 · 94w, 3d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1872552 Truly. We need a team of talented brony animators, stat! I'd give them all the moneyz. :moustache:

#17 · 94w, 3d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

The Double Rainboom project??

Ever heard of it

#18 · 94w, 3d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1872564 Can't say that I have. Google, I require your services!!

#19 · 94w, 3d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

It's a large group of Brony animaters that are getting together to create a fan made episode that has the same standards as the show. which is actually coming along nicely

It's gonna be posted in six parts on HERE

#20 · 94w, 3d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

This should explain things

Info blah blah blah

#21 · 94w, 3d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Y'know I havnt watched ep 8 yet But I'm not gonna watch it

#22 · 94w, 3d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1872614 I didn't like it. This Double Rainboom project looks awesome though, definitely keeping an eye on that.

#23 · 94w, 2d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

:eeyup:

I love Manowar :rainbowdetermined2:

#24 · 94w, 2d ago · 2 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

How is this story not getting showered in love? It's brilliant, well written, and very in character for the show.

5/5 happy ponies :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#25 · 94w, 2d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1873830 If I knew the answer to that, I'd be a much happier brony. Oh well, maybe I'll hit the featured box someday...

#26 · 94w, 2d ago · 2 · 1 · And it terrifies me... ·

And that's why it's more than just a cartoon.

#27 · 94w, 2d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1877298 Most certainly.

#28 · 93w, 3d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Hmmmm awesomeness incarnate. I predict here and now that it will be on Equestria Daily.1/5/2013 :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#29 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Aaaaand... >>1910576 called it. Congrats on the EqD feature!

I liked the story - and the lesson Rainbow learned - a lot.

#30 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Dang, there's a load of powerful emotions in this fic and they are all portrayed perfectly. Everypony was in character, the plot was realistic and relatable and you really captured Rainbow Dash. Bonus points for the Rainbow/Pinkie friendshipping. Thumbed, faved and headcanoned. Bravo,

#31 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

This is deli- er... I mean, beautiful. :raritystarry:

#32 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Beautiful story. Great way to express the emotions inside Rainbow Dash and her friends. Characterization was excellent.

One can feel every single thing.

Awesome work you have done. Congratulations and thank you for such a great story.

Darth Cygnus

#33 · 93w, 1d ago · 2 · · And it terrifies me... ·

>>1867982 "In total, 60 episodes have been produced and broadcast. The third season, consisting of 13 confirmed episodes, aired in North America on November 10, 2012. Investment documents for DHX Media's 2012 financial year indicate that they have also been paid to produce a fourth season." According to Wikipedia.

Cool story, bro. I really liked it.

#34 · 93w, 1d ago · 2 · · And it terrifies me... ·

>>1877298 Woah woah WOAH! Don't go crazy, this is just a piece of fanfiction!

#35 · 93w, 1d ago · 3 · · And it terrifies me... ·

:raritydespair: Why am I so good at visualising?:raritycry:

#36 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1920970 yeah it was a great story wasn't it :trollestia:

#37 · 93w, 1d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1910576 Psychic being! Keep your powers away, foul spawn!! :rainbowlaugh:

>>1920456 Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it! :raritystarry:

>>1920584 Yeah, I cried when I wrote this. Friendshipping is best shipping. And the fact that I made you headcanon is a huge victory for me, I was trying to patch up the holes in that episode. Thanks so much for your thoughts! :twilightsmile:

>>1920739 Thank you!! Have a cupcake! :pinkiehappy:

>>1920905 Thank you for your kind words sir, and you are very welcome! :twilightsmile:

>>1920970 Sweet! Fourth season is best season! Thank you for your thoughts! :twilightsmile:

>>1921145 But it IS more than a cartoon. IT IS LIFE!! :ajsmug:

Fool. Once you go crazy, there's no going back. :pinkiecrazy:

#38 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · And it terrifies me... ·

That soothed my own soul too in the end x3

#39 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1921145

Yes it is.

What I mean is that it fits. This fan fic doesn't feel out of place. Like some random story with ponies with it but something that is a product of how characters are presented. They're simply good enough to handle this sort of heavy stories and the fact that we care about them it makes for good final efect :rainbowdetermined2:

And double points for the story for the fact that I expect Rainbow having some sort of PTSD saving her friends from so many close calls.

#40 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

:fluttercry: that... Was... Just.... D'awwwwww!

The way Rainbow Dashie was ..... Awwwwwe

My heart is now OVERSIZED!

I now need an operation to take away all the LOVE...

I shouldn't bother because.. I'll probably re read it and it'll happen again!

I think it's my second FAVE FIM Fiction!

My Little Dashie is my FAVE! :rainbowkiss: :scootangel: :heart:

#41 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1921169 I hope that means I successfully provided something to visualize!

>>1921280 Happy endings are best endings. Don't get me wrong, I love good conflict, drama, darkness, and overwhelming odds as much as the next guy but sad endings are downers, ya know? Thanks for your thoughts!

#42 · 93w, 1d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1921475 My Little Dashie was great. Sure, it could've been better written as many claim but I'm a sucker for a good feels fic like that. I'm honored that you think this is even slightly comparable! Thank you!

#43 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>Shanenator  no prob and I LOVE this SO much!:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

#44 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Congratulations on getting featuerd on EqD, now there's some attention ^^

Nah, but really, this fic deserved it. It tackled an issue that I at least haven't found in many other fics, just that made it original.

Then, the fact that everything was wellwritten, in character, and detailed, didn't really lower the opinion.

I've said it once, and here it is again: Great fic :twilightsmile:

M

#45 · 93w, 1d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1921611 Thank you so much! I wasn't sure what EQD was going to say about this, but apparently it's not that bad. Thanks for your thoughts! :twilightsmile:

#46 · 93w, 1d ago · 2 · · And it terrifies me... ·

A wise man once told me:

"Tears are good. They are like puking for the soul."

#47 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

Would Rainbow Dash really use the word "Imperiled"? I guess she may have picked it up from Daring Do, but would the author of Daring Do really use the word "Imperiled"? That unnamed author would be likely to use "peril", but "imperiled" would be more likely uttered by an egghead or a villian than the hero of the tale in those books...

Sorry. Great story all around. If I am hung up on a single instance of diction, ya done good.

#48 · 93w, 1d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1921665 I like that quote...

>>1921677 Yeah, I know. I tossed it around. Personally, I decided to go with it just because I really like the idea of Rainbow Dash being a rather intellectual individual. Is it OOC? Maybe a teensy bit. But whatever, it's the direction I personally would really like to see RD move in.

Thanks so much for your thoughts! :twilightsmile:

#49 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · · And it terrifies me... ·

Wow. This is gorgeous.:pinkiesad2:

#50 · 93w, 1d ago · · · Dear Princess Celestia... ·

>>1921758 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

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