Please be kind to Scootaloo for she is best crusader !

Off to a great start!  I like how you write the children.  I'm psyched to find out what's going on with Scootaloo.  And bluebell seems really cool.  I love that doll.  (And you even let Twist into your story.  Was that hard?)

>>18388721838872 I'm dying on the inside

Do you just ponify one of my favorite pen&paper rpg?

>>18404891840489 I ponify a lot of things to make stories happen...

Great job on this! You definitely deserved that EQD feature. I like Bluebell, those CMC are being mean. Dinky really knows how to throw out insults, as well.

Something tells me diamond tiara is first on the kill list

New to fanfics... But this one is turning out really good so far! It was fun, varied and well-written. Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it up :)

*Alondro loads his massive arsenal of caster guns, soul arc guns, and regular guns; arms his huge supply of nuclear bombs, spirit bombs, and chemical explosive bombs; and sharpens his broad swords, enchanted swords, singing swords, rune swords, keyblades, and energy swords.*

Ok, now I'm ready to slaughter everything involved with hurting/killing foals.  

*Alondro doesn't get scared.  He gets even.*

This got my interest..... Now for one rule and one rule only..... DON'T KILL THE CRUSADERS!!!! I will ask nicely I will give you the benefit of a like, But should you finish this story and I realize that something traumatizing or boring as a death for Scootaloo or her friends.... well kindly bring your attention to Cupcakes or stories like Harvest.

I know things are rather weird right now Torture them emotionally, injure them, have them on the brink of death, but don't have them cross it I have a picky, picky meany pants rule that says a story has to be complete in order for me to read it. But I will focus on this story as it looks good. Hell I will even accept coma fates. The everyone rating is nothing. Trauma or death can still occur.

Have a super awesome day!

Have a Cupcake I made it myself

Probably not as good as it should be, but a promise is a promise, and here it is. Chapter 2 of Monsters...

The next one won't take 3 months, I promise.

Oh, and it's not an April Fool's joke. That was a coincidence.

Why does Nightshade remind me of Oogie boogie...

The tendrils and eye minus the teeth make me think of the Daedric prince of Knowledge Hermaeus Mora  whose sphere is the scrying of the tides of Fate of the past and future but he is just a blob but that what first cam to my mind when described nightshade.

http://images.uesp.net/b/b4/DB-npc-Hermaeus_Mora.jpg

Its very intersting so far. I like it ^ ^  keep up Shy!

So, uh, did Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon die?

>>23695742369574

I dunno. They have certainly disappeared.

Monsters that kill fillies, even bullies, must be destroyed.

And as for monsters being 'invincible'... many things have made that claim... until I killed them.  

It leans forward, its icy breath washing over her, before one word exits its mangled lips. “Scream.”

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