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    After leaving Ponyville, the human TD Harrison Powell finds himself in even stranger territory than the land of the ponies. Will he find his way home? Or will he find out that he should have stayed in Ponyville under the watchful eyes of the Royal Sisters after all?

    Sequel to No, I am NOT a Brony, GET ME OUTTA EQUESTRIA!!!

    Edited by the amazing Jack Kellar

    Special thanks to MyHobby for the cover art!!

    First Published
    6th Jan 2013
    Last Modified
    24th May 2013

    Comments ( 1,068 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 9 · ·
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    YAAAAAAAY! Sequel! Wow, he was gone for six years? Damn, TD. You're stubborn.

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    #3 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 6 · ·
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    Commence reading sequence!

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wait, you didn't even finish the prequel. :unsuresweetie:

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Yay! Sequel time :rainbowwild::pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    ....

    Okay so the first one ended when he strode off into the wilderness.

    And now it's six years later....

    Why

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wohoo!!!:yay:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    da very da

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 8 · ·
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    Badass T.D. Is best T.D.

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hm, first chapter was 18 months after he left, then we did another time jump, and 6 years have passed? Wow, I wonder what all he has experienced during his journey. Heh, is he going to have to tell about it while in the Crystal Empire?

    Anyway, good start on a new epic story. Keep up the good work.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · 10 · ·
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    This get's 5/5 big mac's  :eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 4 · ·
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    Sequel's out, whoo! The only thing left to do is read it.:pinkiehappy:

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    In my experience most comedies have that "shit got real" moment, would not call it one without this kind of thing :p

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 5 · ·
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    I like you.You have to be one of my favourite authors.

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    #17 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    EMOTIONS! THEY BURN!

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    #19 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    WOOP! This is going to be AWESOME!!! :rainbowkiss:

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 4 · ·
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    Celestia seriously needs to learn about boundaries. GTFO PRINCESS PASTEL

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · 17 · ·
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    >No one has 'seen' changelings in Zebrica

    Well then they wouldn't be doing their job, would they?  You know where else no changelings were seen?  Canterlot, right before the wedding.  :rainbowlaugh:

    Not that AJ isn't right, but dang girl, get some better arguments hahaha

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    #23 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915486 No. Again, I'm making this funny as possible. He was hostile because they were.

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1914809 Because he's been a lot of places and he's had to walk to all of them.

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh hello TD in the feature box, you go straight to my favorites... Because you are a sequel to a great fic!

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>1914809 The authors lazy.....

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 2 · ·
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    >>1915509 Okay, how about you walk across the US, stay a while in some places and see how long that takes you. I explain where he's been and what he's doing.

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>1915516

    I see where you are kinda going from, but it's on the same level of:

    "What did you do on your vacation in Japan?"

    "Stuff"

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 2 · 1 ·
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    >>1915528 Oh don't worry, he will explain in hilarious detail what he's been doing. That's a large portion of the story so if you want to know where he's been and what he's doing, you will find out.

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #31 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    He's still grudging against celestia! Six years on the road seem to have made him stop caring about the ponies from ponyville, very meh reaction to them.

    I can't wait to see more

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    BronyWriter, more.

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Yay! Favorited and thumbs-up, now let's start reading! :pinkiehappy:

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915533 Im ok with this.

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915533

    Okay, I THINK I know what you're talking about. This is actually the end or near of the story and most of the following chapters are just TD leading up to this moment? Like with what they did in Megamind? He was about to die and most of the movie was just leading up to him falling to his death.

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 3 · ·
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    >>1914789 Actually he did. Chapter 15 "I'm Still Not a Brony and Now I'm Outta Equestria" was the last chapter. The ones after that were noncannon deleted scenes.

    ~Have a good one.

    #37 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    IT BEGINS!:pinkiecrazy:

    #38 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Still an excellent story, but I'm getting to really dislike TD...

    #39 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Yes...

    Yes.

    Yes!

    Yes!!!

    YES!!!

    YEEEEAAAAAAAAAAH!!!

    This is lovely, perfect, and VERY interesting.

    #40 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Comedy!? NUUUUUUUU! Make it themed like the first one... Ok nvm, the first one is an adventure comedy featuring a huge asshole known as 'TD'

    #41 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1914789

    Actually, he has. The new chapters coming out are 'What If?' scenarios. (Hope I'm using that term right.)

    #42 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Insta-faved and thumbs up, of course.  Eagerly anticipating more, please!  :twilightsmile:

    #43 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915880 Precisely.

    #44 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915578 Oh no he hasn't. he still likes them I promise. He has lightened up. I know it doesn't seem so right now, but just trust me.

    #45 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #46 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915848 Just trust me.

    #47 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 4 · ·
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    There are many things that make me scream YYYYEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!

    Like

    But when I saw and read this sequel......

    #48 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Dude, yes. But 6 years? This guy is stubborn, but a quick question.

    Will you create your own original characters and settings from now until is over? Will there be cameos by other characters such as Gilda? (he would get along with her just nice).

    Okay, I'm getting ahead of myself, I haven't even begun reading.

    Just excited for this.:pinkiehappy:

    #49 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915990 yeah I will have some OCs as a lot of this is what he's been doing so this is world building, but there will still be some familiar faces, of course.

    #50 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1916011 So you are basically building the universe outside Equestria from scratch.

    Big job ahead of you, man.

    Good luck!:pinkiesmile:

    #51 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Any chance we can request small snippets of his journeys in the other kingdoms?

    #52 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1916079 That's going to be a significant portion of this fic.

    #53 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    If he was gone for six years but doesn't think any time has passed, does that mean that his potential for aging is a lot higher in Equestria? Or in other words, do humans grow older extremely slow in Equestria?

    #54 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1916099 Oh he knows that time has passed, he just didn't know how much. He did assume he had been gone for a few years at least.

    #55 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I'm loving this.  Can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

    #56 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wow.. Six years? I'd like to see Reginald.

    #57 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Keep up the good work, loving it so far.

    #58 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That coverart is actually really good, it's simple which always makes for the best.  I love the trees in it for some reason, it reminds me of RWBY,

    #59 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1916088  Imagine his time with the Gryphons, another handed community.

    #60 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    IT'S ABOUT FREAKIN TIME YOU MADE THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage:

    Anyway, the questions.

    1: What are the crusaders cutie marks?

    2: Has reginald gotten any new images?

    Thanks for starting the sequel, good sir:moustache:

    #61 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #62 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 6 · ·
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    Been dreaming, I've been waiting,

    To read up this great sequel,

    By BronyWriter I've read and,

    It's more awesome than the last.

    It'll shoot up through the ratings,

    and shower him with mass likes

    This story will be popular

    on FIMFiction!

    Great work and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915347 This guy has a point!

    #64 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #65 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    So, that was his plan!

    #66 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    TD is a badass!!!!

    #67 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Haven't read one chapter yet. FAV, LIKE AND E-MAIL UPDATE.:moustache:

    #68 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    YES! IT'S HERE! i just finished the last story and the i see the featured box and this is here, YES!

    #69 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 4 · 1 ·
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    >Logs in after many hours of academic and musical studies ON A SUNDAY

    >Sees this in the featured box

    >Open Link, Read Later, Like, Fave

    >Read

    >Comment; Badassery to the max :rainbowdetermined2:

    #70 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: Do I dare need to say anymore?

    #71 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    TD has a skirmish and not two minutes later the pony-equivalent of GI Joe materializes.  Interesting.  

    I look forward to hearing of his adventures.  :pinkiesmile:

    #72 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    HAAAAAAA BRRRRFFPHPHPHPHPHPHP! By chance I've found this! Must read!

    #73 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    MMh, cant wait to see the rest of this. 6 years of story to potentially talk about, who/what changed and all that.

    All of my yesyesyesyesyesyesyes!

    #74 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1917065

    Isn't it redundant to have it in both the Read Later and Favourites sections? If you fave it, you'll get the notifications anyway.

    #75 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Woooo! Haha hell yeah, sequel is out.

    #76 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    My initial reaction to the Twilight perspective was:

    Then in the second chapter I was like:

    And now:

    Needless to say, I'm hyped for the next chapters. This is gonna be great!

    #77 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Ohh here we go. Been wondering where this was.

    Wonder what skills TD has picked up over the years. . . Wilderness survival, of course, but what else. . .

    Wonder what things Reginald has been used for.

    #78 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    After six years of trying to find a way home, I would have given up at this point and tried to settle down with a mare, if that was even possible at all. I still don't blame him though, it's awfully hard to live in cartoon world and miss home so damn much. Hope he gets a happy endings, whatever that may be.

    #79 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Awesome.

    #80 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    “... particularly if you were doin' it outta your own free will, even if we didn't agree with ya goin', it's not our place to stop ya. It's your choice alone, and no matter how much we love you, we ain't got the final say in the matter. We can only advise you."

    God... Those words..... I've heard similar words from my parents with regards to certain aspects of my life and i can tell you this, they are both infuriating and terrifying to hear, at least for someone like me.

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    A year and a half. Are we skipping all that? I hope not. Also, I wonder what has appeared on his staff (which I forgot the name of) in that time of traveling.

    #82 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1918659 Reginald.

    #83 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Ok, we didn't skip a year and a half. We skipped six.

    What the hell is on that staff?!?

    #84 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1918715 O man, greatly beloved. Fear not, peace be unto thee... I explain.

    #85 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Well I already really like this *thumbs up* Now excuse me while I get something out of my eye :fluttercry:

    #86 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1915347

    Applejack, darling. Your argument is idiotic...:raritystarry:

    #87 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · 2 ·
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    >>1918715

    an manticore having sex with a changeling:rainbowlaugh:

    #88 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · 2 ·
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    >>1916358

    1) sweetie belles is a hammer. appleblooms is a bucket of apples and scootaloos is a pedophile.

    2) i know one of thevimages on reginald. a manticore having sex with a chqnglin :rainbowlaugh:

    #89 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 3 · ·
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    Right...

    A sequel to that story...

    I think I've got something for you.

    Give me a minute...


    Here it is.

    #90 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    So it begins....:pinkiecrazy:

    #91 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    YES THIS IS HERE!!

    I'm just the teensiest bit excited for this. Loving the Twilight first-person and the time skip. Can't wait til we hear about TD's shenanigans!

    >>1918659 Reginald. :moustache:

    #92 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Comedy yes but it should balance it out with what he has done in the badlands.  Also dont make him hate Celestia just for bringing him to Equestria,  expand on it.  make him feel like he missis home more than before, to a point that he does another up and leave.  Just dont totally forget that his ultimate desire is to go home, and not just another tortured soul in Equestria.

    P.S. Just to sweeten things up, I thing Celestia should double cross him in some way to have a true antihero of this story. even if its to protect him or to satisfy Twilight selfish desire to protect him.

    #93 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Ooooh boy, this is gonna be so good. TD is a total bad-ass now. I can tell he's got that hard-ass "I think about myself first" attitude, but I wouldn't take that as far as to say he's become a total asshole. It's instinct now, y'know?

    Also calling it right now: Twilight has a crush on TD. TWI X TD! TWI X TD! TWI X TD!!

    Anywho, so awesome this is up. Instant like and fav. Cannot wait for more!! :twilightsmile:

    #94 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1919252

    I Second This Comment!!!!:flutterrage:

    >>1919338

    And he would most likely reject her.

    #95 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 5d ago · 2 · ·
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    'Not again. Never again.'

    I'm sensing a flashback coming up at some point. My guess is Diamond Dogs, although both Changel;ings and Griffons are good bets too. I doubt dragons have much in the way of jails, and minotaurs seem to be a very much 'victim administered punishment' type society.

    Also " but it sounds like yer accusin' Princess Celestia of foul play.”

    No, no, no, noooo. Not _foul play_, never _foul play_. Simply a little bit of bureaucratic wrangling. After all, no _laws_ have been _broken_, right? They've simply been applied a little _inventively_. Nothing _wrong_ with _that_.

    Finally " I won't hesitate to use lethal force to escape,”

    Ah, no. Bad move, there. See, a good leader protects their people. Celestia being, unarguably, a good ruler, it follows quite simply that she would move to protect her ponies. Even without knowledge of the events of th season 2 finale, we can figure that out. So, the only reason that TD is not painfully restrained by a very p'd off Celestia is that a) she still feels guilty, and is still granting him extroadinary leeway, or b) she is certain that the threat will not need to be implemented, or, most likely, c) a mixture of both. Yes, I say restrained. Luna is fresh out of an era of battling demons and deities, all of which can deal with 'mortal' wounds as though they were but scratches. Celestia has had over a thousand years of dealing with mortal politicians and bureaucrats - she must have refined 'restraint' into an art form by now.

    #96 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 5d ago · 3 · ·
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    I faved this before I even read it. You are that good a writer.

    #97 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Finally, it's out! :pinkiehappy:

    I want a Clovevellian Staff. Who needs a sword or a spear when you can have a magic walking stick?

    I would name mine George Markusthius Miremoore VII, but I would call it Bob. :pinkiecrazy:

    #98 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I just finished the first story a few days ago and now I have spotted this :yay:! I've got some reading to do :pinkiehappy:.

    #99 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1916108 I wonder how long he was in the snow for?

    #100 · Chapter 1 · 19w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Nyeeeeees....

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