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Tolerance

Joined August 2012
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  • Observations and Motivations
    Twilight Sparkle has located Starswirl the Bearded's journal, a document that disappeared along with him at the beginning of the Classical era. This is the Secret history of Starswirl the Banished.

    12,354 words · 206 views · 7 likes · 0 dislikes

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  • Observations and Preservations
    The final puzzle solved, Twilight Sparkle discovers that everything she's ever known is wrong.

    21,860 words · 303 views · 20 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Motivations: Relics of Antiquity
    Spike tries to discover what happened to some artifacts that Starswirl mentions in his journal: Dragon Eggs
    36,515 words · 283 views · 15 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Observations
    When a mysterious visitor arrives asking for Twilight's research involving Pinkie Sense, she must decide whether to help with or thwart his research. Although the real question is, just how has he managed to not run into Pinkie Pie himself?
    16,172 words · 244 views · 8 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Observations and Motivations
    Twilight Sparkle has located Starswirl the Bearded's journal, a document that disappeared along with him at the beginning of the Classical era. This is the Secret history of Starswirl the Banished.
    12,354 words · 206 views · 7 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Penumbra: The Toll of Arrogance
    3,977 words · 112 views · 2 likes · 0 dislikes

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A pony calling himself Stein approaches Twilight about her research into her friends ability called 'Pinkie Sense', stating that it might be the key to his research. After observing Stein's odd behavior, and his penchant for avoiding answers, Twilight enlists the help of her mentor and her friends to help her decide whether or not she should help him.

Continued in Observations and Motivations!

First Published
20th Dec 2012
Last Modified
20th Dec 2012

Comments ( 6 )

#1 · Chapter 5 · 88w, 4d ago · · ·

Approaching the story in the form of a letter made for an interesting concept, one that does neatly erase any problems surrounding understanding of some of the concepts introduced in the narrative. I enjoyed the overall plot of the piece, but it took till chapter three to truly get into the story. Had it not been written as a letter, it would have felt too fast paced.

#2 · Chapter 6 · 88w, 4d ago · · ·

>>1830031 Thanks for the criticism! I did feel that it was necessary to avoid lengthy descriptions of some of the concepts I've used. I tend to get overly technical otherwise.:twilightblush: I'm glad you've enjoyed the piece though, and will work on my pacing for any future stories.

#3 · Chapter 6 · 88w, 20h ago · · ·

Guess who it is!

Well done with the story. I truly enjoyed it!

#4 · Chapter 6 · 88w, 19h ago · · ·

>>1847243 Appreciate the help and the Fave. Now it's time for me to get back to work...:derpytongue2:

#5 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 6d ago · · ·

The Cousin of Stone? I guess that name's going to be significant later on!

#6 · Chapter 4 · 87w, 5d ago · · ·

Very good transcript.

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