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Tolerance's Stories (4)

Observations and Preservations
The final puzzle solved, Twilight Sparkle discovers that everything she's ever known is wrong.
21,860 words · 227 views · 19 likes · 0 dislikes
Motivations: Relics of Antiquity
Spike tries to discover what happened to some artifacts that Starswirl mentions in his journal: Dragon Eggs
9,154 words · 125 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
Observations
When a mysterious visitor arrives asking for Twilight's research involving Pinkie Sense, she must decide whether to help with or thwart his research. Although the real question is, just how has he managed to not run into Pinkie Pie himself?
16,172 words · 132 views · 6 likes · 0 dislikes
Observations and Motivations
Twilight Sparkle has located Starswirl the Bearded's journal, a document that disappeared along with him at the beginning of the Classical era. This is the Secret history of Starswirl the Banished.
12,354 words · 125 views · 5 likes · 0 dislikes

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Dark Adventure

A pony calling himself Stein approaches Twilight about her research into her friends ability called 'Pinkie Sense', stating that it might be the key to his research. After observing Stein's odd behavior, and his penchant for avoiding answers, Twilight enlists the help of her mentor and her friends to help her decide whether or not she should help him.

Day One · 20th Dec 2012

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Day Two · 20th Dec 2012

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Day Three (Part 1) · 20th Dec 2012

2,135

The Pie Transcription · 20th Dec 2012

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Day Three (Part 2) · 20th Dec 2012

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Concerns of a Diety · 20th Dec 2012

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Lumina Rose

#1 · Chapter 5 · 25w, 4d ago ·

Approaching the story in the form of a letter made for an interesting concept, one that does neatly erase any problems surrounding understanding of some of the concepts introduced in the narrative. I enjoyed the overall plot of the piece, but it took till chapter three to truly get into the story. Had it not been written as a letter, it would have felt too fast paced.

Tolerance

#2 · Chapter 6 · 25w, 4d ago ·

>>18300311830031 Thanks for the criticism! I did feel that it was necessary to avoid lengthy descriptions of some of the concepts I've used. I tend to get overly technical otherwise. :twilightblush: I'm glad you've enjoyed the piece though, and will work on my pacing for any future stories.