Twilight Sparkle was on her way to buy a sapphire cupcake treat for Spike, but she couldn't seem to find the Cakes. As she starts to investigate, she comes upon a dark, dusty corner, where something moved. Curiously, she approached it, when it suddenly lashed out at her. She was saved just in time by a mysterious pony who claims to be "The Doctor".
His cutie mark and blunt speaking only fueled Twilight's curiosity, and it wasn't until it was too late that she discovers what needs to be done to save Equestria.
love it post more plz
Is this like the very first episode of season 1 of Doctor Who?
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Yup!
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Thanks for the support
New chapter coming asap
when will you post the next part?
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Working on it right now. It won't be exactly like the real episode, though. I'm spicing it up a bit. The newest chapter should come very soon.
For chapter 1 I say a bloody good start. Twilight seems to talk to herself a bit much but still. chapter 1 rating 7/10. I'll be watching mate.
its like the first episode of the 9th doctor :)
Is it, the Vashta Nerada?