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Twilight has always dedicated herself to pleasing her long time friend and mentor, Celestia, who after many years of watching the studious filly grow into a vibrant mare realizes that the burden of immortality has caught up to her once more. Knowing that Twilight may not be able to hold onto her will much longer, she decides to give her star pupil one last touching celebration for all her hard work and loyalty.
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This is... thank you.
Damn you, making me tear up
J-just take my favorite.
Pale colt huh? Any relation to the Pale Horse?
NO! TWILIGHT WILL LIVE FOREVER! *breaks out in tears* I LOVED THIS SO MUCH!!
This was very sweet and charming... Nicely done!
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I want to personally thank you for the amazing artwork that you draw as my story was entirely inspired by the artwork itself, keep up the amazing work.
I also want to thank everyone for the favorites and the views, 
your support is what keeps me writing and I hope to provide more for you all in due time.
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You could say that he's... probably what you think he is. I plan to have him within all my stories, sometimes with a prominent role but for the most part he's just an Easter egg.
i have not even read this i just wanted to say pinkie forever!!!!! look in the right edge near the buildings.
*shots Jforte*
No!!! Twilight will sparkle FOREVER!!!
My heart hurts.
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I looked down after reading and this is exactly my thoughts and feelings.
1837918 what the hel is pinkie doing there isnt she supposed to be the same age as twilight in this story. Its not fair twi has to die and not pinkie
All the feels!
R.I.P Twilight Sparkle you will always be remebered
COMPANY ATTENNNNN-TION (snap to attention)
21 GUN SALUTE (salute and hold it)
READY...AIM....FIRE (rifle shots x7)
READY...AIM...FIRE (rifle shots x7)
READY...AIM...FIRE (rigfle shots x7)
COMPANY ATTENTION (salute falls)
COMPANY RETREAT
COMPANY DISMISSED
+1 like and fav you earned it
i think something inside me just cringed up and died.
Way to ruin a celebration, just showing up and straight up dying
.
Lol, no, but sweet story.
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Why you do this?
Uh er what just happend
SO beautiful.
Damn that was so sad.
Darn it, Must...not cry...I must...Not...cry...DARN YOU!!!
So much feels!!!!
Great story. Read it when we were in that Skype call
Just wanted to say I'm glad I met you dude, and you are a great guy.
ponies are just so cute and innocent that you dont want to think of them getting old and die but THIS! was very beautiful but sad.
manly tears were shed
Beautiful.
Thank you all for the support, I really hope this short has helped or even touched a few.
I plan to write more fics like this, smaller and larger (Especially one of novel length I am vigourously trying to get to) in the near future. 
Also, if I made you cry... you weren't alone. I can honestly say that I cried a little myself as I wrote it, just as I did in the next short I have planned to release this weekend.
I couldn't keep myself from tearing up at the end.
Although, I'm confused as to who the colt with Celestia was.
1933373 Funny, I have a OC just like that. His name is Styxen Stones and has been the adviser for Celestia and her entire family for most of his life(around 10,000). He also serves as Thanatos, god of death. The fact that he looks like a living unicorn skeleton is so he can't show his emotions. He has many friends, but he is never truly happy. He knows that eventually, everything dies. Thanatos is practically a machine built from bones, clockwork, and magic. Unlike his brother, Hypnos(god of sleep), he's incapable of sleep and suffers from it. Friendship is something that Thanatos will never fully understand. It has no strength itself, but still, it doesn't die. Death and friendship. Different in so many ways, but still, they always seem to be unable to affect each other.
Wow right in the feels bro
I mean just wow
Celestia's last line was especially beautiful, good job.
I cried. Hard.
Wow. Just...wow. Right in the feels. You are such an amazing writer.
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I wanna say thank you, I greatly appreciate the kind words ^.^ I don't really have a whole lot of confidence in myself and honestly I've had sort of a writer's block lately.
A lot of my material(either in the works or conceptualized) is of this venue, dark and warped, or M/M Clop:Shipping. The latter two being a bit more down my alley, which is unfortunate because most people respond to dark stories and M/M clop like this(See "Gladiator" gif) without giving me any reason or critique. I can only assume they didn't read my description fully(I include "Heads up" tags within the risky genres, dark and M/M clop), they didn't like how the story ended, or they're turned off by my extremely vibrant gay aura.
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I really wish I knew because I am always looking for ways to improve my writing, to please my associates(Fans, but I prefer to not let my head get "too" big), and to draw others to my work. Unfortunately I can only assume...
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Anyways hit me up in a PM for more chat, I promise I won't bite
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Seriously, it's like we're connected! I have no confidence in myself either (in anything I do) and it makes me want to scream. As it stands now, I'm honestly probably going to revoke the submission on my story, and ask for a permanent ban. I'm tired of trying my hardest, to only have the "voice" kick me down.
Bring on the feels! I can take 'em.....Maybe.....
Waaahhhh!
So sad!
Damn, the feels there's so much
.
Despite the sadness of this story, this is a peaceful and beautiful way to go.
Also, pretty soul the colt is the angel that's come to bring her to that final resting place.
I really should stop cutting onions while reading stuff.
I love in the cover art that there is a representation of each of the mane six's cutie marks. It's quite clever and makes one melancholy.
2458954 Also, Pinkie Pie is in the backround.
2791893 I noticed that too.
I had to punch a hole in my wall to feel manly again
I really liked this story, good concept and well written, BUT...
Being the heartless person I am, I had no feels at all. (Don't worry this is normal for me.)
But since I am not THAT heartless, I will leave a comment on what to improve.
Make the story longer. It would have creared the perfect atmosphere if the story was, say, 2000-3000 words or something. Of course, this is just my opinion, but if you ever decide to make another story, have this in mind. It will improve your story if you do it well.
2458954 There's also what appears to be a Male Fluttershy in the one corner.
I love this story, short and bitter-sweet.
I love lullabies, But I dont like death.....
we need a soft expansion to this where it isnt negative, and only positive with the lullaby. IMO.
i hate stories where twilight dies but its understandable from pre feb 13 2013 stories
dont worry just cause i hate stories where twilight dies doesnt mean i didnt enjoy the read
3377166 i disagree with you making this story any longer would destroy what it is and what ive no doubt it was meant to be