The Cutie Mark Crusaders have a classic question. Where do babies come from? Who do they ask? Why the Mane Six of course! But will the Twilight and her friends be able to overcome their embarrassment and answer the question? Rated teen for brief mentions of sexual content but nothing graphic.
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First story, huh? Well...not everyone's first story is good.
Except for this one! I really enjoyed this story. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, and some paragraphs seemed kind of "blocky", but there were not enough errors to distract me from the story.
It was funny, clever, and not horribly crude like another "CMC find out where babies come from" I read in the past. That part with Angel...my gosh. He's such a jerk.
I'm not sure if other readers will agree with me, but I thought this was great!
Good going Twilight!
I agree!
This was a great short story, I was surprised to see this is your first. Good storyline, semi-solid writing and funny!
I have a ton to say about this story, both good and bad. Do you mind if I send you a PM about it?
Hilarious!
1806716 Thanks a lot! I had a bit a trouble deciding where to indent, if that's what you mean by "Blocky"
1806781 Yeah Just like her to do this
1806782 You really found it funny? YAY! Goal achieved!
1806957 Please do.
Thank you all so much! This was a blast to write! especially writing the scene with Pinkie! I hope to add more stories soon.
That ending.
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1807016 Thank you both!
Could have used a bit more humor, but otherwise pretty fun read.
My eyes nearly bled from all the different characters' dialogue being in the same paragraphs though.
1807037 Thanks for your honest thoughts. And I agree I really need help with indenting
Radical writing, just needs to be not in unreadable walls of text. Good job though!
I wish Twilight had taught my sex education class, you see I live in the the south united states and well the sex education here is bare minimum, maybe a little less than minimum.
1807075 Thank you! Refer to my previous statements about indenting
1807076 Oh don't I know it! I live in Florida and I literally didn't have sex-ed until 7th grade!
Thank you all so much! You don't even know how I feel Right now! I never expected to get a response like this let alone so quickly!
I think AB would already know, since she lives on a farm.
1807828 Well she...
Damn it, never thought of that.
1807101 I didn't learn about it until 7th grade Health and I live in Michigan.
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I guess I should add my input here. I grew up in Idaho, but spent the last semester of sixth grade in Texas. The semester I missed was the one where the district taught sex-ed. I moved back the beginning semester of seventh grade, missing the sex-ed class in Texas, so I never had to take sex-ed
I had the whole "Birds and Bees" talk with my parents in fifth grade. It was sorta nice because they were really straightforward with the whole thing, instead of beating around the bush, and they initiated the conversation instead of me putting them on the spot. I'll be honest, I didn't care where babies came from back then.
1807845 There is one fanfic where Applejack says she already told Apple Bloom about "The Birds and The Bees" and then it's implied that she blabed to the CMC when Rarity says "No wonder Sweetie Belle is so afraid of Big Macintosh." It's on TV Tropes and it's a very funny fic.
I remember when I was taught "the birds and the bees."
It was seventh grade. My friend came up to me during athletics, and he told me everything.
EVERYTHING.
Lol I remember my "talk" our school was mixed and I guess us Irish girls are stronger then the lads, I was in fits of laughter by the end of it
Nobody told me. I just found out gradually from reliable sources. *cough-internetporn-coughcough*
I kinda wanted to hear what Twilight would tell them.
Twilight is so screwed...