After a Vampire Tracker Marks her with a crescent moon on her forehead, 16-year-old Twilight Sparkle enters the House of Night and learns that she is no average fledgling. She has been Marked as special by the vampyre Goddess Luna and has affinities for all five elements: Air, Fire Water, Earth and Spirit. But she is not the only fledgling at the House of Night with special powers. When she discovers that the leader of the Dark Daughters(Rarity) , the school’s most elite club, is mis-using her Goddess-given gifts, Twilight must look deep within herself for the courage to embrace her destiny – with a little help from her new vampire friends (or Nerd Herd, as Rarity calls them).
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Never heard of "house of the night", dood. But the only thing that truly bugs me is the format.
Think you could space them out a tad better, dood? I think I got lost a few times reading this, but the story is neat, though
It feels like you just took the first chapter of the book "Marked", changed the names around, and added a few pony related things. The point of a crossover is to bring two worlds together, make it unique, and make sure that characters stay in character.
The format, also, makes it a little off putting to read, like Fusion said.
thanks its my 1st story ever
Hey guys, i have tried making a house of night story mixed with mlp:fim and i have much succeeded..Check it out.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/101573/my-little-marked-secrets-are-magic