After an unfortunate accident, that leaves one of Twilight's friend heavily injured, the unicorn start having doubts about her magic and the value of her friendship.
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Interesting. Does not flow, though. Needs more cider. Hard c;
Twilight should kill Rainbow Dash. I want to see what happens next, can't wait for more
(Joke) Alt. Title: No More Sad/Dark, Please
Damnit Dash get the whole story of things before doing something like that.
Please let karma bite her hard.
I like it so far. Keep going!
1795800lol yep
wow
not bad
So could you guys say what are liking in the story? what is lacking ? where i could get better ?
as a inhabitant of a non speaking English country i have some problems with sentence making, a feedback would help me immensely
1863888 Well your English is very good. Perhaps a couple of little mistakes here and there, but nothing to be worried about. Perhaps find a reviewer on ponychan or something. I do like the story so far. I will be sticking this in my favorites. Can't wait for the next chapter, since this one really peaked my interest.