After his family was killed by the local wildlife of the Everfree, a young foal was forced to endure the hardships of living in one of equestrias most feared places.however, the Everfree cannot hide its child forever...
After his family was killed by the local wildlife of the Everfree, a young foal was forced to endure the hardships of living in one of equestrias most feared places.however, the Everfree cannot hide its child forever...
And so it begins...
Really enjoyed this and can't wait for you to continue.
This is good. keep it up!
poor foal
but, good start. lets see if you can keep it up hmm?
It's really good! Can't wait to see the rest of the story written.
I concur.
Nice chapter, but what effect will the Poison Joak have o. The poor foal?
1802684
all will become clear soon >:)
lets just say poison joke is not above irony
Nice story. I'll keep an eye on it.
Interesting. Please, go on.
1802689
I'm guessing it turns him into a timberwolf or makes him grow up (or both).
1804147
close, but still wrong
:p
1805168
uhhh... turns him into a plant?
1805254
8/
uhhhhh... no
1808114
dammit... somehow makes it so that he could have beaten the timberwolves?
(I'm grasping at straws here)
Hmmmmm
1819564
hmmmm?
ahhhhh... Not cool bro
1819813
so... what is he... a baby manticore?
1820246
not cool ?
:(
Fuckin' poison joke... the poor foal. I'm tearing up.
Will there be more?
.... This need an update soon.... Will there be one soon?
1821130 Oi!!! When do you plan on updateing?