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While going to cheer on their friend at the Wonderbolt's Academy, the hot air balloon is hit with a twister. How will Applejack and Rarity come to terms with the aftermath? Is Rainbow Dash really the fastest in Equestria? Is Pinkie Pie just a little too candid?

Find out!

This is a collab between my favorite chaos spreader Cozmosus and I. Spoilery!

First Published
13th Dec 2012
Last Modified
13th Dec 2012
#1 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

Is that picture and those tags implying a RarityxThunderlane ship?

Ahahahahah LOLNOPE!

SoarinXThunderlane forever, why else would he want to join the wonderbolts?

Now to actually read the fic...

#2 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792950 SoarinMac forever man

#4 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792952 BigmacxBreaburn. usosillehdancah.

#5 · 105w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

What am I even doing here

#6 · 105w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

>>1792959

InsertrandomshipinvolvingBraeburnhere

Hahaha, surely you musn't be serious, as the ship I just stated is truly the greatest.

#7 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792958 i love you too

>>1792959 ew, relation relations, no thank you (unless it's shininglight)

>>1792963 oh, you

#8 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792966  InsertshippinginvolvingwhoeveryoushippedwithBreaburnherewithsomeoneelse

YOUSOSILLEH, MAHBOI. Clearly the shipping I stated is OTP.

#11 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792971

inb4Regidar.

#12 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792970 everypony's gay for brae

#13 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792969 Ohrly? Done. :3... Crap, now I want to write that out...

#14 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792979 Except that one fuck. That one fuck who's a dog.

#15 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792982 do eeet. i can edit the clop part if you want :rainbowwild:

#16 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792983 winona is female so that's irrelevant

#17 · 105w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

THIS COMMENT THREAD IS NOW CIRCLEJERK

#18 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792985 Ehh.... I might do it this weekend if I can get the motivation to do it. Who knows. (Yes, I am actually discussing the possibility of creating clop. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME.)

>>1792994 HAHAHAHAHA~ No.

>>1793000 YOU ARE DRIVING ME TO WRITE CLOP. MENOLIKEYTHIS.

#19 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792983

You mean Big Mac?

#20 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

ALRIGHT EVERYPONY, STOW IT

#22 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792994

THAT'S RIGHT!

Stow it away and save it for later.

#23 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1792992 nothing you can complain about

#24 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

YAY HORSE WORDS

#25 · 105w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

HEY DANCER IT GOT PUBLISHED ALREADY

BET YOU WANTED IT TO HAPPEN WHEN YOU WOKE UP BUT LOLNOPE

NOW IT'S UP WHEN NO-ONE'S ONLINE

HAVE FUN WITH OBSCURITY

SHIFT KEY IS BEST PONY

NOW GOODNIGHT

#26 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1793079

Raise the moon with that voice will ya?  I mean for reals man, you're going to wake up MD

Also, best fic is best fic.

:moustache: : I am Spike's moustache, and this is my favourite fic on FimFiciton

#27 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

Wow, you work quick, good fic.

That totally rhymed

#29 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

Just because everypony else is doing it...

inB4Regidar, mofos! :pinkiecrazy:

#31 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

Oh God that ending!

#32 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1793079 I DON'T ACTUALLY SLEEP ARRAY, YOU KNOW DIS

>>1793141 We remembered that with every new episode, there was a fic up within an hour of premiere/the leak of the episode, so we thought we'd try it :)

>>1793803 ...is the best ending! :raritywink:

MnM
#33 · 105w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

>>1792959>>1792950>>1792952 Nope!

It's all about Big Mac X Big Mac and Soarin X Soarin.

#34 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1794033 Oh mirror pool and all your fanfic possibilities

MnM
#35 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1794060 Someone should write a fanfiction about everyone getting their own clone and falling in love with them.

Hey! You're a good writer. Maybe you should. :twilightsmile:

-Liam

#36 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1794068 I'll add it to the pile

and to be totally fair, most of the good writing in the first part of this fic was all Coz, while the sex joke in the last half was mostly me haha, so I bet Coz could do that story idea too if he weren't my favorite lazy lord of chaos

MnM
#37 · 105w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

>>1794075 Someone needs to do it. :trixieshiftleft:

-Liam

#38 · 105w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Five fucking stars man.

#39 · 105w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1794267 thank ya kindly :ajsmug:

#40 · 105w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1794075

I would do it if I weren't trying to write three other things.

#41 · 105w, 1d ago · · ·

Why did you make a fic about an episode that's not officially released yet?

#42 · 105w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1795084 Because I've already watched that episode. And I put that it's spoilery, so after that point if you read that's on you tbh :rainbowkiss:

#43 · 105w, 1d ago · · ·

i dont get it. was pinky in ajs room to or did she go to rainbow then back to her room?:pinkiegasp::rainbowwild:

#44 · 105w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1799279 AJ and Rarity shared a room which was next door to Pinkie's room. Dash showed up to Pinkie's room while AJ and Rarity were fighting. All of this was audible because hotel rooms have the shittiest walls ever, which I know from experience.

#45 · 104w, 6d ago · · ·

o ok now i get it. doink:derpytongue2::twilightblush:

#46 · 104w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

Named off the famous comment by Regidar.

#47 · 104w, 2d ago · · 1 ·

>>1815356

Shit, two days late...


Regardless, Sex tag always has to have Mature set on the story.

#48 · 98w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1828574 Then why is it an option to tack it onto a Teen story? The option opens up if the rating's higher than Everyone. Same with Gore.

#49 · 98w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2047899

What? Really? That's bull

#50 · 96w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1794068 psst, writing it now :3 giving you credit for the inspiration. Not telling which pony I'm using, though ;)

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