The Conversion Bureau: Caught in the Middle

When you're doing something illegal with a lot of money involved, trouble will find you. Especially in Equestria.

Based in a Conversion Bureau Universe.

Chapters (3)

Chapter One: Immigrant · 16th Dec 2012 · 1,508 words
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Chapter Two: Work · 8th Jan 2013 · 1,017 words
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Chapter Three: Paycheck To Paycheck · 21st Jan 2013 · 313 words
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Guardian

Guardian #1 · Dec 17th, 2012 · · · Chapter One: Immigrant ·

Dual conversion... awesome!

Royal Brisk

Royal Brisk #2 · Dec 17th, 2012 · · · Chapter One: Immigrant ·

Must admit that I'm kinda curious at what Dual Conversion is going to be.

Westphalian_Musketeer

Westphalian_Musketeer #3 · Dec 17th, 2012 · · · Chapter One: Immigrant ·

You have quite a few grammar mistakes, particularly in your dialogue. If you're interested in improving I can give you a link to where you can get some good advice.

However, a smuggling ring sounds interesting. I'll be keeping track to see how you do with this story.

digiboy

digiboy #4 · Dec 17th, 2012 · · · Chapter One: Immigrant ·

Awesome :D

Fex

Fex #5 · Jan 8th, 2013 · 1 · · Chapter Two: Work ·

This sounds awesome gonna read it now ... though before I start I expect the Netherlands to change their laws as first like they have done with nearly everything when it comes to equal rights.

no sh*t sherlock

no sh*t sherlock #6 · Jan 15th, 2013 · · · Chapter One: Immigrant ·

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The World
*Equestria rises from the ocean in 1888 about 280 miles(450km) off the east coast of the United States.
*Ponies frequently travel to other countries and because of the exposure, Equestria goes through its own industrial revolution and modernization.
*Equestria becomes trading partner with many nations, but has no allies and is untouched by wars and violence of the 1900's.
*After the WWII, Equestria begins to modernize its military and creates its own verisons of the Coast Guard, Air Force and Marines.
*Ponies can live in most countries around the world, but have verylittle rights.
*Starting in early 2000's humans can live Equestria.
*H.A.D.C= Humans Against Dual Conversion
*PIER= Ponies for International Equal Rights