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Narrative Style


The midpoint of a pony's leg is a po-knee.

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After the world ends, those that are left must find a way to survive. How will they cope? Where will they live? Who is the narrator talking to if everyone is gone?

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Cool story dude, like where it's going, and it's an interesting way of writing too. I'll keep my eye on it. :moustache:

Ok this got me interested!

*epic slow clap*
You, dear sir or madam, have an really well writhing ability. And as a lil "slice of life in an alternate universe" its a really hight quality Story.
*fave + like*

*looks at the date*

Well, it seems safe to say you failed that challenge :rainbowwild:

Interesting concept, though a little short. Write more of this! :fluttershysad: (<- the closest emoticon to "puppy dog eyes" Fimfic has)

Oh, spotted one small error:
> being a bit more cautious then some of the other pedestrians.
more cautious [than]

2093865 Yeah, I know... I'm still working on it on and off, but I haven't gotten very far. It's less of a lack of motivation, and more that I'm very easily distracted. For instance, I was about to reply to your comment, when I realized that I forgot to feed my dogs. After that, I turned on the tv, with it only dawning on me later that I was in the middle of doing something here. :facehoof:

No, not the then/than! My one true weakness! :raritycry: Thanks for catching it. :twilightsmile:

And another entry into my List of Emoticons This Site Needs. Maybe when I get enough, I'll start a petition.

Oh, and thanks for the favorite! :pinkiehappy:

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It's a real pity the silly image embedding blocking stuff has utterly removed the ability to use custom off-site emoticons :facehoof:

2094459 I'm not sure I could have used those anyway. Apparently Internet Explorer is horrible, but I don't want to learn about a whole new browser. It may have it's quirks, but they're familiar quirks. :derpyderp1:

2094599
Umm... I'm not talking about any browser... just about fimfiction blocking the loading of images from image tags in the comments.

Like this: i.imgur.com/8zifL.png

2094617 Sorry, I wasn't clear. I had just gathered that the add-on people used for extra emoticons that had made it convenient was generally for other browsers. I was saying that the change in image posting was sort of a moot point for me, because even if they hadn't made image posting annoying, I would still not really have access to off-site emoticons in any useful manner. I suppose I could have kept a cut-paste list of exta emoticon pictures, but that would have been tedious, to say the least. Was that clearer? If it wasn't, then I'm probably more tired than I thought.

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