You sir, have my attention. Well done!

Transformares!

Ponies in Disguise...

im makeing a human story to, maybe i can get pointers from you

>>128721128721

I don't have any pointers.  This is my first one as well.  Only thing I can say is to read a few before attempting one yourself.

ah, this is interesting, i'm looking fowrd to your nwxt story, oh and just for you, a random anocement. transformers is a good cross over but in a few days i'll post something that will nock your socks off, untill then i wish you good luck.

and just to say, that was on a rim and not in any attempet to promte my story, savvy?

-ww

Your story is very interesting! don't stop there keep on writing!!!

because I am writing a draft for my transformers-my little pony-terminator cross over

>>137578137578

Oh, I have no intention of stopping anytime soon. Haha MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Edit:  For future reference, I am using this map of Ponyville.

Well done.

I expect a baddie *cough*Galvatron*cough* will show up soon?

>>146948146948

Maybe.

P.S.:  That will be my go-to response for ANY future plot points

Giant black dragon?  Why does that sound familiar?

*cracking knuckles* kill mode activated

Oh buck.

If it is the ender dragon im gonna get bertie to tnt the shit outta it

DAT ALDUIN

Dude, your story is just awesome!!!

I don't understand why they gave you 3.5 although you deserve 5 stars

MMMMOOOOAAAAARRRRRR!!!!

I am also thinking about writing terminator and transformers cross-over

But currently I am working on Ironman cross over

>>166727166727

Meh, I'm not too worried about the rating.  So long as it's above 3, I'm perfectly content.

...Decepticons.......Or somthing robot...

A winged bull's skull surrounded by an inverted triangle.

That sounds like the Decepticon logo. Shouldn't he have the Autobot one?

Nice foreshadowing dude.

I'm just waiting to see Optimus meet Celestia.

>>172901172901

Nope, it's the NEST insignia.

.........Called it.......sort of.....

So you're going to turn Galvatron into BW Megatron? If so, will he keep his movie savageness or will it be toned down?

Soundwave G1 brings up an interesting point. Are you going to do something like this? If so, will Galvatron become a Predacon?

... Maybe.

(Seriously though, this intermission is the result of a recent Beast Wars binge.)

edit:  And for the record, in case anyone missed it, the canon is based loosely on the live action films.

Poor ponies...LET THE SLAUGHTERING BEGIN!And then we will make CUPCAKES

You just keep making this better and better.

Ok i have to admit.This is getting really good.AND also!DAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

I have a question, if Gyvon is basically a Cybertronian now, shouldn't he be eating energon instead of organic food?

Doesn't mean he can't enjoy the taste

Seriously though, that'll be explained next chapter next chapter.  I'll also be uploading a map of the race course as well.

I also noticed that you included Arcee in the prologue.  If you incorporate her into later chapters I suggest you use the Chromia component since that was the only part of Arcee that survived Bonecrusher's ambush at Giza.

Actually, according to the wiki, there's some confusion about that.  Michael Bay says they all died, while IDW and Hasbro says they all survived that battle, but Elita-1 was killed later.

http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Arcee_%28Movie%29#Revenge_of_the_Fallen_film

You put my question about his diet in there!

Galvatron, Liege Maximo, and Unicron all on one planet!!!  Shit just got super real!

>>217471217471

Okay Galvatron and Unicron I know of, but who is this Liege Maximo character?

>>220633220633

Liege Maximo, one of the original 13 transformers.  Gyvon's discription of a massive transformer covered in spikes matches him to a T.

... yeah, sure, what he said.

*quickly changes script*

Sorry, Soundwave.  2/3 aint bad though.

....Wait.....*Thinks back to Dinobots*....Dinobots?

think beast wars .... i think

Dinobot

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Awesome~

Is he the 1st or 2nd?

Dinobot!?!  If your story involves him dying in a blaze of glory, please let him at least kill one of the main villians first.

So wait, all the Predacons from the Beast Wars have been created? What about a Beast Wars era Megatron? Was he created too? And what about the Maximals? Will they be making an appearance?

Dang, I thought it was going to be a sort of crossover between Robert A. Heinleins A Stranger In A Stranger Land

Wrong dam(n).

U know your doing something right when

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Awesome.

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You know you're doing something right.

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Keep it coming!

>>224159224159

The only one of those I will confirm is about the Maximals.  They will NOT be making an appearance in this story.

>>Gyvon

Well, in that case, the ponies are boned.

Author's note:  I so wanted to title this chapter Code of Hero, just to throw everybody off.

I have to say it worked.  If you had killed off my favorite BW transformer in his first chapter, this would have gotten nasty.

On a different note, having Rainbow almost single haddidly kill Thundercracker was a good call, you sould do the same with AJ since she and Dash are considered the "fighters" of the group.