Tom Clayford was joining the military. He and his friends were avid watchers of My Little Pony. They had gone to many brony conventions. Tom was planning to meet his friends one last time before they went to training. When Tom got on the plane, things went bad for him, and he crashed in an unknown place. He doesn't know what awaits him, but he plans on learning from this experience, as long as he lives.
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Military in Equestria?
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1781729 These sometimes end up fine, actually.
1781756 Not in my experience.
1781950
I have seen them end up OK.
1781966 Then you must have seen different ones from me.
1781971
I am actually referring to fics that are mostly older. Most newer fics don't. Especially when plot follows these lines;
1. Human ends up in Equestria via violent scenario
2. Pony (basically) attacks human or performs acts that could be considered hostile.
3. Human shoots pony
4. Human is obviously villain and feels bad about what he has done, even though he is 'bad'.
5. Human is punished and OK with it.
6. ????
1781987 I can see how military in Equestria could work. Like, the soldier goes to Equestria and is all like "Fucking hell, I'm out of that war! Even better, ponies! Fuck yeah!" And just chills. But violence in those fics? Come on you guys. I know it's tempting, but... really?
1781996
I've seen ones where the whole army goes. But you're right, a single solider wouldn't likely shoot everyone.
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1781971
All I mentioned was the fact that we was enlisting. A backstory doesn't mean a story is going to be something due to one line.
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1781987 1781729 Now that I re-read the comments, did you either read the story before commenting?
1782151
Nope.
1782151 I did.
1782163 You should probably read a story before commenting...
1782168 Then you knew it had nothing to do with the military, besides adding a back-story to him.
1782173 I read it AFTER I posted the comment. I work in three ways:
Skim the story, post, then leave.
Skim the story, post, re-read(if it was good), then leave.
Read the description, post, then read, and change the comment accordingly. I didn't change the comment this time because I was too lazy.
Alt. Titles: And When The Writer Published This and Tom Clayford's Last Flight
1782517
That's actually pretty neat.
You really need to break down those walls of text.
1782663 I don't think it looks too bad. If I made too many paragraphs, it wouldn't look right either. I'll see what I can do, because I'm sure others will have the same issue.
1782736 No, grammatically, there should be a new paragraph every time a character speaks, after that, and every time the topic is changed.
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I have seen no novels that has this writing style. If you would like to mention one, go ahead.
1782993
Seriously, that's basic English grammer. Anyway, Tom Clancy's Rainbow Six. Plus, when you build up walls of text it becomes harder to read and looks rather sloppy, no offense.
1783013
Not all authors do this either. It depends on who is writing a story as to what and how they'll write. A few books you can pick up don't have this manner. To be honest, if you are going to sit here and talk about how a fan-fiction, not a legit book, doesn't look like books, I don't really know what to say. Also, you don't spam enter every single dialogue line, which it seems that you be trying to go off, seeing from your own writing.