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    Anyone want to help me draw a comic?

    It's called "Glass Flowers" and it's probably one of the most tearjerking, if simple, ideas for a short story I've ever come up with. But it would only work as a very short comic, and I'm terrible at art and I have no money, so would anyone like to work with me to create it? PM me for details if you're interested. It would only be a couple of panels long, and it need not be particularly intricate.

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    Also Frightened, by Regidar

    Hey guys. I'd like to tell you to take a moment to check out Also Frightened by Regidar. It's a very short story about Rumble and Scootaloo that I really liked. Regidar doesn't really write troll stuff anymore, so go enjoy its emotionalness! He's one of the best writers in the entire fandom.

    E Also Frightened

    by Regidar

    Romance Slice of Life

    Scootaloo and Rumble head out from town one night, and head north. To the north, there are hills nopony every goes to. They'll be alone, in the dark stretch of land no one bothered to explore.

    Also, for those who have been wondering, I'm doing a little better. I'll make a blog about it when I have everything together, but I just want you tall to know that I'm really thankful for all the recent support. :heart:

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    On Wednesday I was going to kill myself

    As you may be aware, I have struggled with depression for a long time. It's gotten a lot worse lately because my financial situation has been falling apart. I won't bother explaining all of that because it's convoluted and you don't care and I don't really want you to know anyway. I made a patreon, but that's for another day--I'm not so manipulative as to post a link in the same message as all this other stuff. Basically you should know that I've been having a lot of financial problems, chronic migraine headaches, and my depression has gotten worse by magnitudes.

    I tried to kill myself two days ago. Obviously I did not pull the trigger or I probably wouldn't be here. But I went through the trouble of getting a gun out and putting it in front of me, and loading and unloading it and putting it up against my head a few times and crying and some other emotional stuff I'm not going to bother talking about in-depth because you don't need to know the specifics.

    It was all very sudden and I decided to do it out of nowhere, after progressively freaking out over some stuff I barely even remember. My entire life felt completely overwhelming and hopeless, so I decided the only solution I could deal with was to make it all go away.

    I'm terrified of dying. But there was a moment when I felt so hopeless that I decided I didn't care if I died anyway because it didn't matter, and then the only thing that stopped me for about two or three seconds was the fact that I didn't want my parents, who were in the next room, to have to listen to me shoot myself, because it would make them sad and they wouldn't understand why I did it because I didn't write a note. So then I went on my computer to write a note, and by then the moment was past, so I didn't do it.

    Even though a couple of people talked me out of suicide altogether a little later on, I still feel terrible. My depression is worse than ever and has been for a long time. I should have realized that when I started making blogs begging people to tell me good things about myself so I could get up in the morning. But it's insidious like that. I thought I was happy, except that everything I looked seemed dull and hollow and that made me feel so sad inside.

    It's like there's something eroding everything real about the world I live in and leaving nothing but vague outlines behind. I'm sorry I haven't been writing very much, but I'm not in a good place right now.

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#1 · 97w, 5d ago · 3 · 17 ·

First! Yay! :pinkiecrazy:

#2 · 97w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

Well, this is very well written, to say the least. Good job!

#3 · 97w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

>>1911553

>>1925328

eeyup

i'm a good writer

praise me

thanks for prereading and stuff

#4 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

>>1929154

ALL HAIL THE PARASPRITES

You're welcome :twilightblush:

#5 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

I love sex between rainbow dash :rainbowlaugh: and pinkie pie :pinkiehappy::heart:

I dont like violence and gore :applecry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritydespair::raritycry:

#6 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

It's good... Lots of cumcame

#7 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

She also had a date coming up that night with her marefriend, Rainbow Dash, for which she was very excited.

My Grammar Nazi Cat is purring.

#8 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

Given how muh species-jargon you put in, this almost felt like it should have been Twilight/Dash. It was interesting, but really interrupted the flow. While its unique and I've not seen anything quite so... bondage, I feel like these two were so ooc they could've been replaced with anypony and it still would've felt the same.

#9 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

I like the story. Good details and explanations. Hope to see a part 2 soon. :twilightblush:

#10 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

Damn good job! Words fail me right now on how great this story is!

#11 · 97w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

That was interesting. Also that second Q&A in the authors nots made me choke on my own laughter.

#12 · 97w, 2d ago · · ·

Moar sub RD. Who doesn't like a good sub RD?

Well, a better question is who enjoys a well-written sub RD? I love it when writers can go into the psychology behind certain acts. The fact that you were able to make this both a convincing argument using factual information species-wise and still keep it erotic gives me no other stronger inclination than to tell you so and favorite this story.

#13 · 97w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

'a bit like a prismatic .'

A prismatic what? Sandwich?  :pinkiehappy:

#14 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

I enjoyed this.

#15 · 97w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Oh... Woooooow:twilightblush:

Can we have a prequel too? I would love to see how these two got together, and how their relationship slowly developed to this :pinkiehappy:

#16 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

This was really good.  I love the transformation and personality changes.  It felt like a very natural progression.

#17 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

I'm commenting for the sequel

And also, nice.

#18 · 97w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Hmm 100 comments? I'm going to need to think of a lot of things to say it looks like. Because i want that damn sequel!

#19 · 97w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Can I comment a hundred times? Because if it means a sequel I will.

#20 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

sequel? SEQUEL!

#21 · 97w, 1d ago · 1 · 1 ·

>>1929775

your pussy is happy

>>1929836

i probably could have integrated that stuff better

if i tried

>>1929873

me too

>>1930590

go fuck a horse

oh wait...

>>1930912

yeah i always pictured dash as being one of those guys that acts tough to everyone

and then likes to get spanked in the bedroom

like a republican politician

>>1931424

yes

>>1932242

yeah that would be pretty cool

i'll keep that in mind

>>1932432

:moustache:

#22 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

Loved it

#23 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

Am i the only one who imagined the whole story with pinkie's mane down, pinkamena style ? It's so much sexier.

And yes, we need a sequel.

#24 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1933969

Ha, jokes on you cuz I already do that!:pinkiehappy:

#25 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

This is very good written ^^

#26 · 97w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Wow that was better than I thought it was going to be.  It was a very interesting delve into the psyches of these characters.  You really should do one on Pinkie because this was was very interesting.  As what I am sure was the intention the Rainbows thoughts and her psychology was the actual story and the sex was just a back drop for it.

#27 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

I'm honestly having trouble putting how I feel about this story into words. I didn't really find it all that erotic, but I don't feel like I wasted my time reading it.

It's like... It was a character study that just happened to involve sex, and in that regard it was very well done!

It just didn't do much for me in the way of wanting to clop to it.

#28 · 97w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

>>1935212

>>1934964

you guys are right

this was meant less as clop and more as an exploration of how i characterize rainbow dash--she's outwardly confident and egoistic, but she acts that way because she's actually very insecure. she's caught between an inability to trust others and a burning desire for intimacy, which is part of why she's so loyal to those she cares about but tries to hide every negative emotion from everyone, afraid of being too open with them

if i do one for pinkie, it would revolve more around responsibility. but you'll find out more if that comes to pass

also i just wanted to write something that showed people/ponies having sex in a way that wasn't just rauchy lolporn.

actually i can only think of four other stories that actually bother exploring psychological interactions in relationships with power imbalances (spike's really, really, really bad day, risk aware consensual pony, rainbow/Dash, and competent villains).

god damn i sound like a fucking egghead

analyzing the fuck out of this shit

who cares

oh and also stealing harmony is really good but that's technically a rape fic so it doesn't count

but rapetrain-express is good at feels and psychology

#29 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1935296

I care, and fuck you for thinking I don't.

You're an awesome writer,

and I look forward to seeing that Pinkie study,

and I'm going to look at those other stories you linked,

but fuck you.

#30 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1935353

fair enough, yo

#31 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

Ill help!

#32 · 97w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

all the explanations are good and all but you told the emotions at first then you showed us next time just show also good story

#33 · 97w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

A sequel would be AWESOME!!! :D

#34 · 97w, 20h ago · · ·

:heart: I can't seem to express properly how much I enjoyed this story.

#35 · 97w, 19h ago · · ·

Surprisingly good, I liked their interactions *I mean their social interaction, though the physical was pretty good too* and my only real complain as you've probably seen more then enough times is the need of a proof-reader. You had some interesting takes on the Pegasus and Earth Pony Societies when it came to how it affected their sexual nature and details like that always make a story more interesting; at least to me.

#36 · 97w, 13h ago · · ·

Best. Clopfic. EVAAAHH!!! :flutterrage:

Srsly I liked the whole aspect with Pinkie's and Dashie's alter-ego's! :pinkiehappy:

Daaaynum, this was well written and,

DAAAYNUM this is sexy! :twilightsmile:

:heart:

#37 · 97w, 11h ago · · ·

And then Pancakes made comment contribution because author is good writer :twilightsmile:

#38 · 97w, 5h ago · 3 · ·

I don't read clopfics unless they're done horribly or when they're just plain funny, but after being told repeatedly that i need to read this, i sat down and immediately had my face melted.

Seriously, this is one of the most emotional and thought provoking things I've ever read. It's taken something usually used purely for sexual uses and made it completely and utterly emotional. Allowing someone to take everything you are and pulling you apart and trusting them to put you back together is the apex of intimacy and affection.

The greatest thing i can say about this fic is that I can't get it out of my head.

Bravo.

#39 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

Very nice...

#40 · 96w, 4d ago · · ·

It's very good, almost like you wrote a script for an episode.

#41 · 96w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

>>1940959

hey thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it

and i'm pleased that it turned out so well

i wasn't really going for a porn story

well i was in the beginning

but clop honestly doesn't do much for me

so i only like clop stories if they're

1) emotionally engaging

or

2) extreme enough to provoke an emotional response

and i leave the second one to guys like rapetrain and anongladje

>>1956875

pretty sure an mlpfim episode wouldn't include graphic bondage porn

but thanks i like the way it turned out

#42 · 96w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

Today, on a VERY VERY special episode of My Little Pony...

#44 · 95w, 3d ago · · ·

Oh wow......that was....intense so very intense... I have yet to see dash played like this....to so fully give up everything to be so totaly controlled takes an insane amount of trust on both parts:heart:

#45 · 95w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

This is so amazing :pinkiehappy: I was pleasantly surprised at how in-depth this got with the details; it looks like you put a lot of thought into the pony psychology. Simply fabulous job! :raritystarry: I can't wait for 100 comments cause I would love to see more of this Pinkie!

#46 · 94w, 1d ago · 3 · ·

This is a fantastic look into loyalty, Pegasus psychology, bondage, and trust. This is how BDSM fics should be done, right here. Every moment was sweet in its trust-building way, and I... should probably go to sleep instead of spending half an hour finding ways to express how happy this story of yours made me. Suffice it to say that it was incredibly obvious throughout how much the two of them love each other, and that's beautiful.

#47 · 94w, 12h ago · · ·

>comment

...

MOAR

#48 · 92w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

"Do you trust me... with your life?"

:rainbowderp: :pinkiegasp: Holy fuck that is fucking hot as fuck.

I think I remember reading somewhere that the most erotic words anyone can say are: "I trust you".

I happen to agree.

Anyway, this was amazing. I love clop that isn't just mindless fucking but has some kind of relationship and meaning backing it. This had that in spades. Wonderful depiction of Dash's psychology; it's very believable. I'm always impressed when a story can temporarily convince me of a ship that I don't support (PinkieDash in this case), and this one certainly did. I really felt the love between these two ponies. Great job.

There were a few odd typos (missing words mostly) but I couldn't even keep track of them because I was too engrossed in the plot. I might re-read this later.

#49 · 92w, 6d ago · · ·

Comment, you're amazing

#50 · 92w, 6d ago · · ·

This takes S&M to a whole new level. Great story

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