Spike has tried everything to attract Rarity's love, but all his attempts have remained fruitless. Disheartened by his failures, he decides to make use of a more radical method to get his beloved's attention. However, he hasn't foreseen all the ramifications that his decision entails.
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I want more!
It looks really good.
Uh... question - why are there hyphens at the start of nearly every sentence somepony talks in?
Good story!
127848 I've seen this one on fanfiction.net, and I think it's a translation from French. Perhaps that might be the reason for the hyphens.
I like it so far!
127999 You're right. Dialogues are written like this in French and I simply kept the hyphens when I translated this, but that probably wasn't a smart choice. I'll fix it for future chapters
(Update: will be fixed very soon.)
Nice read. Tracking
-Glassed
Holy crap
Good to see you put this story on a site that's actually.... good. Hope you update soon, yo!
Oh snap stuff just got REAL
I've seen this before somewhere... but where?
Good day.
Oh spike you classy dragon you
Looks like we'll see a dragony soon.
I still don't see why you wait to upload these chapters from Fanficiton.net, you could easily upload them all at once.
Well that really lucky of him,stiil i fell there is something fishy about this
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We've thought about this, but a lot of people on here aren't on fanfiction.net. Until Saldana finishes Chapter 7 and I translate it, why not pass the time and keep the suspense going with chapter-by-chapter posting?
Only chapters away from the newest one!
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Jolly good show.
Good day.
Damnnnn... Anyways, i'm surprised this story isn't that popular
155056 Too many big words.
Nobody seems to notice or care that Spike is missing? Not even Twilight?
So when are we gonna get an update :D
Only read the final chapter so far... but I have to say. This has grabbed me hard and has no sings of wanting to let go.
So do I have to learn French to continue enjoying this story?
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I've completed the translation of the seventh chapter. However, for some reason, I can no longer reach Saldana. He seems to have been inactive for quite some while now, and the last chapter he published in French was chapter 8, almost two months ago. I don't really know what's going on, I hope everything is alright.
Here's a link to the (draft of the) seventh chapter: Seventh chapter on Google Docs
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Thank you.
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so was this written for the before the best day ever episode.....
I forgive rarity, just because this is funny.
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thats exactly what im thinking.
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no email address?
823494 To all intents and purposes, this story is dead, unfortunately.
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Really interesting story!!!
I think I am the only one who read this story in 2020.