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PONIES! Uhem, yes. I have come here for the ponies. And the fanfiction. And the other stuff that I do not know. Derpy Hooves for dah win!

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Fluttershy has some strange hobbies, but none were more questionable than watching Big Mac during sunny days. Every so often she would walk over to Sweet Apple Acres and quietly sit on a branch and observe the big red pony heaving away at his family duties...

And why exactly does she watch him? Well... It's been a long time secret but...

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Comments ( 32 )

You're on a sinking ship...

1772543 Prolly cuz Fluttermac is overused as heck

"She leant into him and sighed in contempt. "

*cough* not to nitpick but Contempt means extreme dislike. Perhaps you meant contentment?

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeh...great. Another FlutterMac story.

:ajsleepy:

I'll probably throw a like your way, but I most certainly won't dislike it. I'm not that mean-spirited, but I might read it later to give it a look

eh ill give it a look. :pinkiehappy:

>>Rhino_Man
Thanks for telling me, you're not nitpicking.

1772543

First thing that came to my mind when you said that :coolphoto:

Made me d'aww :) great story, but it didn't flow very well in the beginning.
I got the feeling Big Mac had also had his eye on her for a while too, am I correct?

I thumbs-up, but no fave since the beginning didn't flow well.

But anyway, never was a fan of Big Mac/Fluttershy. I'll just take my leave :moustache:

I'm a newcomer to all this, so I didn't get the "heard it" vibe that seems to be affecting a lot of your reviewers. I think you've written a really sweet story, and managed to keep everyone in character. Pinkie doing a Big Mac impersonation is a brilliant mental image - I'd love to see that on screen!

I think you ended it in the right place. We can let the pair have a bit of privacy eh?

1772546 Overused. Yes, Bad for being overused. No

1773118 Never said it was. I was with Regi saying that it'll prolly get downvotes because of it being so overused

I'm honestly not just hating on this because it is Fluttermac, I did read it a judge honestly. All I saw was the same stuff that I've seen before and under every circumstance it never fails to confuse me. There is very little that works in the relationship and only a few fics manage to convince me. I'll leave you be for now, but if you want a real ship, go with Flutterdash. Trust me.:yay:

YES A FLUTTERMAC FANFIC I LOVE FLUTTERMAC !!!!!

You should do more parts like Fluttershy and Big Mac going on more dates, Fluttershy telling her friends, maybe Applejack not liking the idea of losing her big brother? I really enjoyed this, i hope you make more stories.:pinkiehappy:

It does not matter to me how often a story is told, how many times a pair is joined, or how frequent I read them, I judge a story on its content and how well it is written... which I have to say is better than most of these people lead on to say... but I feel that it is mostly because the Fluttermac pairings is a tad overdone...

Personally, I never get tired of the pairing... and keep writing, no matter the criticism :ajsmug:

1773135

PFFFT

There's so little FlutterMac fics it's hilarious.

Do you see how many TwiMac or FlutterDash fics there are? Those are overused as hell.

The people dissing this fic probably wish their ships could be this overused. :facehoof:

I liked it.

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Twimac: You see one every once in a blue moon. Trust me when I say there are far more Fluttermac fics out there. I have read a majority but most still failed to convince me.

Flutterdash: That is a whole other thing. Comparing it to this is like comparing gold to coal. I can get a lot more from Flutterdash than from Fluttermac. The stories are believable, I buy the romance, the characters click so well together. The only thing I can find in Fluttermac is that they are both shy, and that isn't necessarily a good thing.

1779494
First, you must not know how many TwiMac fics there are,
Secondly,
:ajbemused:
That's the point of shipping fics. They're supposed to go deeper into the characterization of the two ponies. I like FlutterDash, it's cute. Contrasting personalities give the ship more of a story.
But I like FlutterMac a lot more, simply because I enjoy seeing the author plan out the story, piece by piece, and then give the characters background.

So what you're saying to me is that two shy people can't properly build a relationship? That is the absolute stupidest thing I've ever heard. I have friends that are shy. I'm shy. What your saying to me does not properly compute. Because I'm shy, I won't be able to keep my friends? Being shy is a bad thing? No. Shy people take comfort in knowing there are other people, like them, that go through the same thing.

Lastly, who said Big Macintosh was shy? :eeyup:

1782514 I'm honestly not going to get into another debate on a comment section so I'll let you have it. You can like Fluttermac as you may.

Non-stop smile from beginning to end! I love this story, absolutely adorable. Not only that, but I could totally see it as being an actual episode! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

So damned sweet I have to go find something manly to do. Like punch a grizzly, then I can justify how much I enjoyed this. :moustache:

DAWWWWWWWW FLUTTERMAC. :yay::heart::eeyup:

That was adorable!
Fluttermac is my favorite pairing.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW fluttermac is my favorite pairing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




:yay::heart::eeyup: FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1778312
I'm not saying there's anything wrong with Fluttermac (though it's not my personal ship for Mac OR Fluttershy) but I've seen a great deal more Fluttermac by accident than I've seen Twimac in the Twimac Fiction section on this site itself. I've seen maybe one or two MacinDash fics, though once again, I aint searching.

Aw... That's just adorable! I just LOVE FlutterMac! :scootangel:
If you ask me, Pinkie made a good Big Mac impression! :rainbowlaugh:

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