When Luna was banished to the moon, what exactly happened up there? A lot can change in a millenia. A lot can happen. We know what happened down here, but what happened up there, where nopony could see. What happened in the last few decades before her return, when she was just an old mare's tale?
Was she Luna? Was she Nightmare Moon? Or was she something in between?
Could she live with herself if she was?
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Oneshot
Okay. Random? Yes. Premeditated Random? Sorta.
Enjoy. Not my usual writing style, so tear this one apart.
Chapters (1)
Wow, just absolute WOW
I very much enjoy your writing style, and you seem to have a very strong grasp on rhetoric.
This story really makes you not only see the crushing lonliness but to feel it as well
Congrats sir, you win one internet.
Bravo, sir.
Excellent work.
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Really? Thanks! I wanted to try something a little out of my comfort zone. I've never written one these types before.
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Thanks, the both of you!
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You are very welcome.
Congratulations, I believe this will make the featured box or at very least popular stories.
Oh wait, it already is in popular stories
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Heh, It's already on the popular list. Here's hoping for the feature board again, but I'm not getting my hopes up. Shorter stories don't tend to make it.
FIMFICTION! PROVE ME WRONG!
Nice avi, by the way. It sorta reminds me of an old book. I don't remember what it was called though.
1768983 Warrior Cats for the old book maybe? And, I have seen loads of short fics on featured so lets all hope you get on featured again.
Impressive, you capture what I can only think must have been going on in Luna's head during the moon perfectly. I must read more of your works at a later date.
well done my friend. Well. Done.
This is going to be featured, calling it now.
1768983 hrmmmm? from all these comments how could i not read this
1768983 This has been read sir and i must say i am impressed. This is an interesting little look into the thoughts of Luna and you did a very good job. Pat yourself on the back if you can reach.
Not really deserving of the sad tag... Didn't seem sad to me at least.
But that's besides the point - The story was well written and had a sort of feeling of despair to it, as well as the feeling of being unsure of just who you are. A different take on the relationship between Luna & NMM I think, and a fairly good one honestly.
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Sounds like it.
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Thanks for the complement. And go for reading my older stuff! Just to warn you, it's not written quite in this way's fashion.
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*tries* *fails*
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I can agree to the sad tag.
A different take? That's good. I was worried I was going to get burned with "ermehgerd, this is overdone." *vote down*
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I wish. If that happens, please, somebody tell me.
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Thanks!
1771455 me try and fail? that's what i thought of the story was about i wasn't reviewing it man.
You did a good job.
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What?
Oh...
That was to "Pat yourself on the back if you can reach."
177190 oh yeah that makes a lot more sense my bad sir
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No problem.
I think the mint fumes from my gum is messing with my brain
i can smell it and its in my pocket.
1771455 Oh trust me I like all styles long as I can make heads or tails of it
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I'll admit that I have seen it before, but not very much.
PS.
What the FUCK happened to fimfiction?
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Sounds good then. Be sure to tell me what you think though!
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So it wasn't the over done cliche story? That's good
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In normal words: Eeyup.
Cool story.
I would appreciate if this was continued.
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Like a continuation of her thoughts while on the moon? Written in the same style?
1956087 Sure, similar style if possible.
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Sure!
I'll seriously think about it. If I get time, I'd do it tomorrow. I need a break from my other story., and this would be perfect. I'd PM you if it was a different story.
1956112 Okay! No rush!
*squee*
hewwo listener :3 another reading
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_yKC-swptI&list=PL5p3daDwRVGGkUY7_xis9-v9e6TbsVk0B&index=11
Short but cool. Fave
I like this on so many levels!
>>Listener More please?? It's really good!!!