Watson MacMaren is a small unicorn with a bent horn living in Ponyville. Working as a handypony and inventor with a cheerful personality, he's worked hard to cover up his dark past. But some ponies refuse to forget what he did, and he soon finds himself catching the attention of a certain princess...a princess who nearly killed him...
My first fanfic! Please rate and review! Constructive criticism accepted and requested!
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You give me very little options.
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Thank you for the comment, but I am afraid I do not quite understand it. I can see you tried to send a pic, but my laptop won't register it.
1794532 HMMM
This is a dilema.
Good chapter and what is up with the site lately? Least half the time it doesn't show when new chapters are added to favorited stories.
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No idea. I only joined last month, so I haven't figured out the inner workings completely.
But still, thanks for commenting!
hmmm why does this story have so very little appreciation. It's a good story and I'd say worth the read.
Anyway Good Job!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!
This story looks very promising
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Thank you! I hope you enjoy it as it goes on!
Interesting I like it. Also I love the fact that you are incorporating a version of the four Horsemen or in this case Horses of the Apocalypse. I love those guys. Anyway keep up the great work.
Still reading and still loving it. I knew it though the minute Chromos mentioned bugs and two strange scarbs I knew that it was Pestilence but I have to admit the whole Prince thing threw me for a loop. I had expected them to be all princesses. Anyway I can't stop reading.
I have this wierd feeling that the Evisicans are either humans or something really ridiculous looking maybe something cute and furry or not anyway I am looking forward to your next update. And seriously it's crap that more people aren't reading your story the whole thing with the Four Horsemen is really unique and I don't think anyone else on the site has made a story involving them so thank you for fueling my fanboyism. Also are we going to meet the Horse of Death because that would be so cool.
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Thanks for the reviews!
Glad to see people out there actually like this. As for Death, I can't say much, but there is a reason we learned his name in chapter three. And I assure you, the Evisica are not human.
Feel free to tell other people about this! I won't kill you for spreading the word! ^^
2400312 I'll see what I cna do but who is the fourth Horse. I don't recall seeing them described in the chapter is it Plague, Famine, Conquest, Wrath or some other aspect. Well your the writer. Anyway again you have earned my respect for the unique spin you introduced. and here have a mustache
Oh one more thing Derpy has something for you as well
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enjoy
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When Watson was walking through Celestia's gardens while disguised as a guard, he saw statues of all four. There were War, Famine, Pestilence and Death. Death was named Mauso'Liam. I'm still debating whether or not Famine will make an appearance. I know she'll be mentioned, that's the only solid thing about her.
Thanks for the muffins!
2400370 no problem and I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter
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I'll try and get it up before May, but if I fail, it'll be early May at the latest.
2401150 Thanks I'll be looking forward to it
Hello!!! I am a long time fan and I finally get to say I greatly enjoy your story and hope u write more javascript:smilie('
'); And I cant wait till next chapter
I will like this as soon as I figure out how!!!(i'm new here , don't judge)
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I'm just happy to get a comment!
Glad you like it so much! I'm working on the next chapter and will hopefully have it up within a week.
2545409 AWESOME!!!!!
I really hope Watson becomes an Alicorn at the end( Alicorn of inventions Maybe?) so he can have a chance with malic, not sure what u have planned 4 the story but I just think its a good idea 
anway ill keep an eye out 4 next chapter (can't Wait 
)
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Thanks! ^^
Got your message and I kinda already read the chapter just forgot to comment
I was bust making my FIRST STRORY EVA!!!!!
anyway ITS GREAT!!! are the eviscians using technology,or magic or both? I like the whole revelation with malice and the war battles are AWESOME.!!! Im guessing RACER is the true king and he"s doing this because malice rejected his feelings for her or something like that. Im still rooting 4 Watlice or Matson: 
still not sure what 2 call it, but still GOOD CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! U GET 12 HAPPY PINKIES 
Yay this is turning out to be awesome
Great chapter and great story (get the epilogue out asap!)! As for what story is next..... i cant really help you there. Sorry
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Thanks for commenting. As for the epilogue, it MIGHT take a bit longer cause I wanna make an MMD pic of Watson and Malice before I post it.
Thus the great story I found long ago ends .the ending was just... beautiful
Thanks for the mention. I'm honerd you did that. I honestly didn't think I was that helpful 
.. The ending got me right in the feels
. HA HA !!!I couldn't resist!!! 
all I have left to say is...... Watson and Malice sitting on a bench K-I-S-S-I-N-G
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Of course I'd mention you. You've always left awesome replies and stuff. Thanks for liking my story. And yes, Malice planted one on Watson on that Bench.
Yay for god damn happy endings! I just finished catching up on chapter 39 of fallout equestria and wanted a heartwarming moment/chapter
This was it. Also hurray you finished! What are you going to do next?
Finally, YAY!!! I feel special being [FIRST] in the thank you list
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Thanks for the pleasant review. ^^ I'm glad you liked this chapter. As for mentioning you first, you've been here since before Christmas, although that was on FFNet. Felt you deserved it.
As for what to do next, I might write my Pocket Monsters fic, or I might work on the Sequel-type fic I have in mind. idk which, if either.
Looks very promising so far. I'd read more if I wasn't starving and tired. You have a very good pacing and detail, I also like how the story opened up and the main character is very loveable so far. I'll be sure to keep track of any updates.
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thanks! ^^ But like I said, the story's finished, so you can read the whole thing!