• Member Since 31st Oct, 2011
  • offline last seen Jan 26th, 2012

Jinadan


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Twilight gets her hooves on Red Pegasus, an energy drink so powerful that it is banned in Cloudsdale. She gets Rainbow Dash involved, and soon her other friends too. Like the cliche goes : Hilarity ensues.

I've deleted the old one and made a brand new one. Each chapter has like 2k words more than the original chapters ( 700 - 1000 words ) and the grammar is tremendously improved, thanks to my editors too.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 44 )

:rainbowlaugh:
I'm now tracking this!

Im willing to reread this!
Cause it was awesome the first time and it will be awesome again!

lol wow dude im writing a story for a friend, im actually using that drink. i didnt steal it i just thought of it at random and i look around and see you already wrote about it. but i also made another so no worrys

never read the original, but this looks promising

HYPERACTIVE TWILIGHT WITH PINKIE PIE

wait... does pinkie pie drink this stuff? That would explain a lot.

125973
Why not use it if Jinadan permits it? Would make for a cool sort-of crossover :pinkiehappy:

I lost it at "Spell Tome: Fireball" :rainbowlaugh:

Yessssss!
Party Hard :pinkiesick:

Ice

Didn't read the original but I'll read this one.

Never read the first "Red pegasus" book but im tracking this!!! :rainbowlaugh:

This is madness! This is also brilliance. :yay:

i'm fairly sure i missed the first writing.

This was good.

Nice, Skyrim reference. Good chapter.

Looks like this finally made it up I see.

Ordeal/ideal mixed up. Other than that, win.

Ordeal/ideal mixed up. Other than that, win.

" Dragging her lifeless body out of the bed and into the toilet, Twilight took the largest piss she ever took in her entire life."


:facehoof:
It's a good story and I shall be tracking this.:twilightsheepish:

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Pinkie Pie is concentrated sugar. She doesn't drink the things, she IS one.
126497
I enjoyed the story, but that part brutally pulled me out of the story for a second. Still, a great story, and I'm going to start tracking this.

Now I'm wondering how Fluttershy would react after drinking one....

I saw this one was "remastered" and immediately tracked it :twilightsmile:. That explains why you hadn't updated in a while! :rainbowlaugh:

Advanced Restoration Magic, Spell Tome: Fireball, Equestrian Civil Unrest…” Do I detect a Skyrim reference? :pinkiehappy: Maybe the Restoration Magic thing too, but that could go either way.

"Thankfully, there was a slice of chocolate ice cream cake, and while it wasn’t ordeal, the droopy eyed pony decided it was the best option available." I certainly hope it's not an ordeal! I don't think Twilight could take another ordeal in her exhausted state! :twilightblush: (I couldn't think of anything punnier. . . so this will have to do :twilightsmile:)

126371 Ha! The post has been doubled! :trollestia:

I'm such a cheater, knowing what will happen next, but considering the quality of this one it'll be like reading a whole new fic! ~yay~ :yay:

There are still four cans in the fridge. This is guaranteed to not end well, and I want to see it.

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I told him not to add that (Well, specifically "Please please please don't use this."), but it would appear it still made it through. :ajbemused: Lookin' at you Jinadan...

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:facehoof: 'Dat Ordeal. should be "ideal"

red peasus? sounds like a sweet story. ill have to read it soon.

:twilightsmile:cant wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

I still remember scootaloo on Red Pegasus along with the rainbow dash fan club... EVERYPONY RUN!!!!!

I read the chapter and the story sounds promising to me, Please keep at it (If that's ok :yay:)

126655 Sonic ShyBoom.

We must, We MUST, WE MUST!!!

Thanks everypony! Trying to dish out chapters every 5 to 7 days. Thanks to my editor Comixafro too :twilightsmile:

CosmicAfro*

Slip of fingers :pinkiecrazy:

126655 Aight, changed that!

127648

You didn't have to change it, I was just pointing it out. You can blame to some extent my time at Alternatehistory.com for that, as they make a big deal out of anything that suddenly rips you out of reading a timeline or story.

Looking forward to more!

Well, glad to know it's back! Can't wait, dude!

what happened to the first one? i had it bookmarked and was gonna read it when it was marked as complete. :raritycry:

131420 It was On Hiatus, Season 2 features the royal sisters getting their hooves on it!

Yea, I'm rewriting the whole thing cause the grammar is so bad. So don't worry!

My god... What happens when she gets POWERTHRIST?


MADE WITH LIGHTING

REAL LIGHTING

UPDATE PLEEEEEZ!!!!! :raritystarry:

Here I am, Wondering about an update... :pinkiecrazy:

Don't worry, I'm patient; I'm just... Wondering about an update. :pinkiecrazy:

:pinkiesmile:

So, is there a place to read the original, cause this one isn't getting updated...

i remember the original:pinkiehappy: i cant wait for more:pinkiecrazy:

An alcoholic beverage and a hungover Twilight, So far so good hahahahah!

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