During a sleepover with Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy receives a letter from her mother. This causes her to reveal a harsh secret about her past that she's been trying to forget for years. With this secret revealed, Fluttershy is now forced to make an important decision that could change her life forever.
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Wow...such a compelling and touching storyline... I want to see more. And that she tried to commit suicide off the cloud :( and she had wings so she could've flown back up! I'm faving this. I expect more though
I like the idea, though I’ve never really liked the “i’m screwed up because my dad was an ass” plot. The dialogue could be better, Rainbow just seems to take everything without any emotion. It’s still nice though, just could use more description.
Awesome can't wait for new chapters
hmmmm... good so far and i would love to read the rest if you put up more chapters
I like it so far. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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Thanks for the advice! I'll take that into consideration when creating the future chapters.
The beginning of a powerful story. I can't wait for more.
It was nice to see Fluttershy reunite with her sister, but now we have more questions. What was bothering Applejack, and what is Starlight hiding? Look forward to the next part to find out.
yeah
This is getting really intense. I really like the connection between Applejack and Starlight, and the funeral should be really exciting.
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i sense something that i haven't for a while a moon banishing if they are lucky a dream land hell if otherwise Luna could probably make some sweet nightmares