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It's your three month anniversary, Rainbow Dash! So what are you running from?

First Published
6th Dec 2012
Last Modified
6th Dec 2012
#1 · 105w, 6d ago · · 7 ·

I came.

#2 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh here we go.

>>1749157 Seriously. Stop it. Just because you're friends with the mods doesn't mean you can go around and be annoying.

[after reading] Dawwwww. Nice story.

#3 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Awww, that was so cute:rainbowkiss:

#4 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

You'd swear this is something sinister from that cover photo.

#5 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

"Hey, is that a PinkieDash story I se-no, just another cupcakes spi-nope, Romance tag."

#6 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1749157 Grats!

>>1749160 Where're we going?

>>1749166 Glad you liked it! :pinkiesmile:

>>1749216 Really? I didn't get that impression at all from that picture! At least, not until you mentioned it. Now, zoomed out, Dash does look sliiiightly more distressed than I intended when I picked the picture for "cover art."

>>1749258 ... Not the impression I wanted to give people on first glance... D:

#7 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1749396 I typed that before reading. as in, oh here we go let's read this thing.

#8 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1749160 This has nothing to do with having two mods tolerate my existence.

#9 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

That was absolutely adorable. I was actually just thinking, hmm, I haven't read a good PinkieDash in a while, then bam! Right on the front page. Wonderful job - both of their characters felt spot on, and this is really something I could see happening between them in the shipping world. Plus it was ridiculously cute. Seriously, I might have to go off sugar for a while to compensate. Lovely work :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

#10 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1749400 Well, in that case, let's go! :D

>>1749405 I don't know who you are or what you guys are talking about, but... hi! :pinkiehappy:

>>1749425 Aww, thank you! Good luck recovering from your short-term diabeetus. :heart:

#12 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

This was the cutest thing I've read in a long time. Thank you!

#13 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Great story! Glad to have you back Cupcakes :twilightsmile:

#14 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Yay~

#15 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Awesome :heart:

#16 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1749160 I like his annoyance :pinkiehappy: it's fun

#17 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh man was that adorable. I kinda want to know who was on the other side of the hill though.

#18 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1749535>>1749985>>1750189 Thanks, guys, I'm really glad you enjoyed!

>>1750093 Woohoo~ And thank you for helping to make the story come to life! Darnit, I forgot to make a thank you post to you, Cloudy, and PresentPerfect as the first comment! I was really dumb last night. :applejackconfused:

>>1750650 It's a secret to everypony~

#19 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1751101

Delete all comments and make one. Clearly best plan.

#20 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Yeah, he's a good author, I liked Shutdown and  Operation Get-lestia

#21 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Adorable, and so wonderfully in character.

Also:

"I'll still love you even if you I'm the only one who says it!"

#22 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1751244 ... DONE AND DONE. Oh, wait, no.

>>1751792 I'm glad you think so! Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

>>1751938 I was a little worried about the in-character-ness in the most emotional parts, since we have so little to work with from the show... but so far, no complaints! Phew. Also, thank you for the fix~

#23 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

"Even if Nightmare Moon came back and teamed up with Discord and the changelings and Sombra to make some Ministry of Evil and took over Equestria using Ursa Minors and Manticores to enslave all the cute little ponies of Ponyville...!"

THIS!!! THIS NEEDS TO BE WRITTEN. I was actually thinking of doing something like this :pinkiehappy:

#24 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

So much D'awwwwwww :rainbowkiss:

It was the perfect length for a quick cute fic;

and very well written as well :moustache:

#25 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

I've been wanting some more cute one-offs. This was just perfect. Thanks!

#26 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

Adorable? Check.

Well-written? Check.

I don't even care that it's shipping. It still gets a big ol' thumbs up from me.

#27 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1752426

Rainbow Dash's seven evil ex's

#28 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

You got featured! Congrats! I feel like such a hipster for reading this beforehand. Good to see some Rainbowpie getting recognition and this fic deserves it.

#29 · 105w, 6d ago · · ·

I loved it. So cute and simple; I really want this to happen. Oh, well I'll stick with fanfictions. They can be good, like this one! :pinkiehappy:

#30 · 105w, 5d ago · · ·

adorable and well written!

#31 · 105w, 5d ago · · ·

As unlikely as, but an antidote to, Cupcakes.:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

#32 · 105w, 5d ago · · ·

This put a smile on my face.

#33 · 105w, 5d ago · · ·

I feel like a hipster too for obsessively checking for new RainbowPie fics reading this before it got featured, but either way, I love it. One thing: are you an artist? Because this fic is a lot more visually oriented than most, almost like a full episode script, but not quite. It would be easier than most fics to make into an animated short, at any rate! :pinkiehappy:

Anyways, LOVE this, like...seriously. :heart: It's, at least in my opinion, very on-character overall and totally how I would imagine their relationship would work, if it were to happen within the context of the show. Can't think of any constructive criticism at the moment, probably because I want to marry my bed right about now, but just thought I'd throw some more love for this fic up, because it really is one of the absolute best RainbowPie fics out there, and just a great fic, shipping or no shipping. Just the right amount of funny, character psychology, on-character-ness, with a very large dash of warm fuzzies thrown in, and the added bonus of it really feeling almost like an episode. :rainbowkiss:

#34 · 105w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1752426 Well, get to work!

>>1755147 Now THAT is a great compliment!

>>1755540 I'm actually not an artist and I have a terrible time with visualizing scenery and descriptions and such. But, what I think you may have picked up on was a LOT of character eye movements, what ponies were looking at, etc. I noticed there's a lot of that in this story, or maybe in much of my writing? Either way, I don't necessarily agree that this is episodey, but the compliment is very well received... thanks. :twilightsheepish:

>>1753852>>1754539>>1754623>>1754789>>1754815>>1755129>>1755496 Thank you very much guys, both for reading the story and taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it! I wouldn't write if I didn't think people would have a positive reaction to what I shared, so your comments are super-duper appreciated! :pinkiehappy:

#35 · 105w, 5d ago · · ·

Very cute, greenthumbed.

#36 · 105w, 5d ago · · ·

I agree with >>1755540. I probably couldn't have said it better myself! How you managed to make it feel like you were reading the scripts, and storyboard of an actual episode...I have no clue, but for what I'm know for sure, is that I wish I could write like this. I'm so jelly-Clarkson of you right now! :rainbowlaugh:

Wonderful work, and I think I'll click that watch button now...and give you a like/favourite! :twilightsmile:

#37 · 105w, 5d ago · · ·

Happy feelings

#38 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

So damn cute...

#39 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

>>1756782>>1760951 Thanks!

>>1757360 Well... good! That was my goal. :twilightsmile:

>>1757208 I guess... I'll have to take you's guys's word for it!

JAG
#40 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

And there's my day made. Good PinkieDash is hard to come by of late, so this was extremely welcome.

I could go into detail about what i liked, but that would involve reposting half the story here, so... yeah. Suffice to say, you nailed it. Aborable, sweet, heartwarming, funny, perfect characterization, perfect dialogue, etc. No flaws to speak of. It felt a lot like the show, just shippier.

5/5. Thumbs-upped, and have a well-deserved moustache: :moustache:  

#41 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Too much d'aww! :rainbowkiss: You broke my feels. Great job, I thank the Equestria Daily for bringing me here to this amazing story. :derpytongue2: Instant fave.

~Have a savvy day! :coolphoto:~

#42 · 105w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Hmmm... I liked it, I love the part where somepony shouted "Duh" :rainbowlaugh: really hilarious

but... I'm not to much into SUCH happy endings, I mean I love happy endings, who dosen't? but I just think, i don't know, maybe it was to obvious...:applejackunsure:

just saying, still good story:pinkiehappy:

#43 · 105w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

:pinkiehappy: This was adorable.

#44 · 102w, 5d ago · · ·

This is awesome. You have earned a yay.:yay:

#45 · 100w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

Very cute. These kinds of sugary romances always gt me smiling.

#46 · 100w, 7h ago · · ·

>>1969703 Mission accomplished! :pinkiehappy:

#47 · 99w, 6d ago · · ·

You  broke my face, I can't get the sides of my mouth to go down

#48 · 97w, 1d ago · · ·

I went back through [romance][no human][pinkie][dash] today. This still makes me happy. It's a shame that no one seems to write PinkieDash well anymore. Thanks for sharing it. Again.

#49 · 97w, 11h ago · · ·

>>2081242 Yes, get happy. Or else.

#50 · 92w, 1d ago · · ·

I liked it. Better than most of the fics I have read. I'm just glad that you didn't incorporate sex..... eugh

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