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Gojira007


The following tale...is true. And by true, I mean false. It's all lies. But they're entertaining lies. And in the end, isn't that the real truth? The answer is no.

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Just when all hope for his world seems lost, Optimus Prime finds himself on a new world entirely unlike the one he knows. Now the citizens of Equestria must figure out what to do with their unusual visitor, and how to get him home...but does he actually want to go back?

Contains SPOILERS for the Season 2 finale of "Transformers Prime".

Cover Image by WingedHippocampus: http://wingedhippocampus.deviantart.com/art/Collaboration-The-Visitor-356160975

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 85 )

1740440

That, my friends, is how you're all joining groups you haven't given consent for.

1740481
Through Meep? Seriously?

1740499

Pointed out by Lazy Dan, he's using image coding along with the code for joining a group, to effectively have people auto-join just by loading this imaginary picture.

1740499 Thanks for the head's up; I'll delete the comment and hopefully that'll take care of things.

1740499>>1740504
I know I'm not the only one but I've reported him and his group to Knightly. Great now I'm going to have quite that damn group again.

Ok now on to the story. First thing, you know you have done good when I can hear Peter Cullen speaking in my head, and yes I hear him in my head. This is one heck of a start, and I as a TransFan from G1 onward look forward to seeing where you take this.... oh and how two great leaders will react when they meet.

And no one has made a comment pertaining to the story, for shame. I rather enjoyed this, kinda looking forward to how Optimus will adapt to a world full of technicolor ponies.

1740554
I hold the effective emulation of a character's voice in fan-fic in VERY high regard, and consider it an essential part of my writing process. Especially in the case of Peter Cullen, I'm very proud to hear I was successful. ^_^ And you should indeed look forward to a meeting of Leaders down the line in this story.... ;3

Thank you for your comment. ^_^

1740619 Thanks for the concern, but Celestia's Paladin did just barely beat you to the punch. :raritywink: Still, thank you for the thought, and I'm glad to hear the story has your interest. :twilightsmile:

1740860 ...well now THAT's pretty awesome. XD; Admittedly, not quite what I had in mind, but thanks for sharing even so. :)

1740970
Look up Optimus Celestia on Deviantart and you get some pretty good ones in the first 20 or so pictures

FINALLY! I have waited for so long for an inter-HUB crossover. I can't wait to see what's next, Lyra's reaction the most!:pinkiehappy:

1741097 Not to disappoint you, but I doubt I'll be using the whole "Lyra is obsessed with human stuff!" angle; it's not really in keeping with what I have planned. ^^; Still, I'm glad you're liking it so far, and I hope what I have planned will be just as satisfying for you. :)

1740989 Thanks for the tip. :D

1741186
Please don't, in all honestly that got really annoying (and all for a single scene too)
1741222
Don't mention it

Before I read this; and by Hoof or by Shepard's Crook, I will read this; I have to ask: How did Castle Midnight hold up post-Season Opener?

1741330 Juuuuuuuuuuust fine. XD In fact, I'm about...25-30% done with the next chapter. :D

Hope you enjoy this story too. ^_^

1741366
I'll try. And on that note, should I actually watch Prime before reading this? So far, I've only ever caught parts of a smattering of episodes so far.

...and "smattering" is an actual word, according to FireFox. Who knew? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png

1741423 I wouldn't say it's strictly necessary, but it might firm up your context a little bit. ^_^

kaboom! baby! more! plz!

1741423

It also contains a bit of spoilers for Season 2.

1742099 XD Thanks for the enthusiasm. ^_^

1742866
...so? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png But really, I know Insecticons are canon now. Beyond that, how much do I need to know about a series based off of the Live Action Baysplosion Movies?

1744306 "Based off of" is putting it too strongly. While it does use certain elements and ideas from the Bay films (as well as pretty much every other "Transformers" continuity), it's ultimately its own series with its own identity entirely separate from the movies.

1744419
...really? :rainbowderp: It's just the aft-ugly bot designs they lifted?

Why don't other `bots TELL me these things! :facehoof: I am so hoping Netflix has it on streaming right now...

1744624 Well I'm certainly glad I've convinced you to give the show a chance; good luck tracking it down. ^_^

1746377 Ah yes, I do so love that pic. <3 Anyway, glad you're enjoying the story so far.

1744306

It is not Bayformers. Not even close. Even if some of the design are similar, they are close to Animated if anything.

1747597
Gojira007 cleared that up. Even so, that is still one ugly Starscream. :pinkiesick:

Tha escalated quickly.:derpyderp2:

1740860 nnnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccccccccceeeeeeeeee:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Good so far, but i suggest you put a different cover art, the one you have is to soft:moustache:

1752042 "Too soft" in what sense? It's literally meant to be an upcoming scene from the story, I think it's entirely appropriate as a cover image. ^_^

1752219 Optimus doesn't smile like that

1753291 i can't see anything, just numbers and words:moustache:

That's better>>1753758

1753758read my story it has Grimlock in it:pinkiehappy:

I ahve made a page for your story on The Fan Labor wiki checkit out right Here

1757785 How very thoughtful of you, thank you kindly. ^_^

Looks like we've got a gentle giant situation :twilightsmile:

1798685 As long as there are no Decepticons around, yes. X3 ^_^

I can't wait for more:pinkiehappy:

1799985 Glad to hear. :)

FInally seen S1&2. Time to read.

1804389 Excellent. Hope you like! :D

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