When Twilight and the rest of the wingless ponies thought it would be neat to cheer on Rainbow Dash at the Best Young Flyer's competition, they may have overlooked some minor details. Law details. Long story short, the mane six are now on the run, charged for terrorism in a locked down city. Twilight's in jail, and to make matters worse, they only have three days to get her out before the cloud spell wears off. It's hard enough making bail for acts against the city, but it's a lot harder when the only one's can help you are fugitives.
CanterlotGuardian and I decided to have a little friendly competition. The basis was a prompt that I thought of and posted in my blog: what would happen if it were illegal for non-pegasus ponies to step foot in Cloudsdale? So read mine, and his, and tell us both what you think!
I absolutely love the concept here!
1763951 It's an... Okay band
1763963 I do enjoy Foster the People, but they aren't my favorite.
I kinda like the general topic, but the idea itself is totally ridiculous. Oh well, I should read a story before judging it :)
I actually quite like it. Nicely written, little mistakes, and interesting. Good job!
You wrote the concept? Yes! I'll be reading this later
Interesting, keep going.
New Chrome story?
1764615 You make me happy
This is very familiar... who was talking about this before? T'was you? If so, thank you, I shall read it and love it, and if for some reason the romance does not please me, I shall not hold it against you. This may be favorited but it indeed shall have a thumbs up, it is as I decree!
Fly Dashie fly! Save Twilight or it will be the end of Equestria as we know it, soon the forces of Morgoth will mass and take Equestria for their own!
Run fo dem hills, u gunna have to jump off of Cloudsdale, and pop divine shield before you hit the ground.
All followers of Celestia have that spell right?
1763492 feel free to take it, this doesn't seem to be selling so well. I originally didn't want to write this, maybe you can do it justice.
Celestia isn't a Pegasus and she was in Cloudsdale. It's a lousy idea.
1783068 Wow, that's some solid logic.
At least you told me what you didn't like about it, I respect you for that, as I never get comments like that. Not an entire basis for your argument of a "lousy idea," being that the princesses, while not pegasi, are the rulers of Equestria after all.
I really like this story so far. Interesting concept, and pretty well written.
I'm also interested to see what spin canterlotgaurdian puts on this concept