This story is a sequel to Changeling
A short something I thought up as a headcanon for Gilda, which may play into a future story I have planned after Changeling.
This takes place directly after Griffon the Brush Off.
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Could be worse
I've read worse.
Nice.
I liked it, you don't see many griffon stories around.
This could turn nicely.
Liked it. You could do with some more description of the castle walls, the father's appearance, etc. Still, did the job. I doubt she'd refer to soldiers as 'punk-asses' though.
I liked it. Myt only nitpick is that princes and princesses usually don't have numbered names until they actually ascend to the throne.
I love it! For a short fanfiction, this one hit me hard.
It's a beautiful piece of work.
I liked it, it'd be nice if this was longer, but I suppose this is just supposed to set the scene for whatever new story you are thinking up.
I look at this and see a "No More Heroes" approach to Gilda's life.
It doesn't provide answers or a very satisfying resolution, but it does cause the reader to think about things.
Good job.
Not bad. The bit of world building/foreshadowing makes me wonder if there is a sequel planned.