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Joined March 2012
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    Obselescence's Stories (22)

    • In Memory Of
      Dear Princess Celestia, I'm sorry I haven't written in a while. Things seem to be falling through the cracks lately. Spike thinks I should go see the doctor, but...

      7,186 words · 13,600 views · 1,585 likes · 22 dislikes
    • Let's Just Say...
      "Suppose I killed them all?"
      1,583 words · 15,953 views · 1,624 likes · 32 dislikes
    • The Daring Do Well Life Style
      It's hard work saving the world...
      7,003 words · 2,156 views · 245 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Love, in All Its Forms
      The depths of Luna's loneliness drive her to create a creature that never should have been. But the nature of her companion, and the dark methods used to create it, may lead Celestia to commit an unforgivable deed of her own...
      5,714 words · 2,746 views · 394 likes · 6 dislikes
    • The Knight's Gambit
      3,895 words · 3,750 views · 430 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Derpy's Diary
      3,419 words · 14,603 views · 1,040 likes · 31 dislikes
    • The Knight In Shining Armor
      2,970 words · 4,551 views · 434 likes · 10 dislikes
    • The Mare at the End of Forever
      3,600 words · 4,747 views · 659 likes · 20 dislikes
    • Best Friend Screw Loose
      2,311 words · 1,465 views · 182 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Into the Everfree
      5,081 words · 1,137 views · 149 likes · 3 dislikes
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    Dear Princess Celestia,

    I'm sorry I haven't written in a while. Things seem to be falling through the cracks lately. Spike thinks I should go see the doctor, but...

    First Published
    2nd Dec 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Dec 2012

    Comments ( 379 )

    #1 · 28w, 2d ago · 4 · ·
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    Obs, I just want to say this is absolutely brilliant, probably the best thing you've written.

    #2 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Awesome stuff as always, Obs. I love it.

    #3 · 28w, 2d ago · · 2 ·
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    :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

    #4 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1726935

    Your trademark three Dahes. You should just get that coded in so you can press a button for that:rainbowlaugh:

    #5 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #6 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    That was beautiful.  Great work! :pinkiehappy:

    #7 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1726971  I think you used to use five.  Why now three?

    #8 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Obs made another fan-fiction? Good thing I brought a bucket for all these tears.

    #9 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote upvote

    #10 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1727058 I used to use five, then two, then three. According to math, 2+3=5.

    :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

    #11 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Inb4 featured.

    #12 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1726961 There's a pony for that.

    #13 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >Sadfic

    >Twilight/Spike

    inb4 feature box

    #14 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1727057 Indeed... Very... Beautiful...

    *Sniff*

    I'm not crying... :fluttercry:

    #15 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    That is haunting.

    In time we have to give it all back...

    I will talk on your writing ability, because if I talk on the story itself I will shudder and lay solemnly for a while before i sleep...

    On your writing ability : It is very good.

    #16 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry: :applecry:

    It's so sad, but sweet and cute and, and, feels!.

    It's very good. And well written too, I couldn't see any errors aside the ones on purpose later on and the pacing and flow were good.

    #17 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ouch, my heart.

    #18 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This was so ...sad in a way, seeing Twlight slipping away further and further.

    Damn this story really went straight to the hearth, you've done an excellent job on this story my respects.  Its just so freaking beautiful yet so sad.

    #20 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hmm.. was warned not to read this by the description, but did it anyway. Have a glass of tears for you.

    #21 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh, man...:fluttercry: My heart, it can't take these feels. Great job. Just, great.

    #23 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Welp. The feels are being felt.

    #24 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1727068  When are you updating Solitary?

    #25 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I'm glad I read this.

    #26 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Beautiful One shot...

    #28 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    As somebody whose own grandmother suffers from much the same problem... yeah.

    Gonna have to figure out some way to stop looking like I was crying before the fam' notices.  ^^()  Damned good, in that odd way this sort of story is.

    #29 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh wow. :pinkiesad2:

    #30 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Holy crap, that was really powerful.  Brilliantly organized and delicately crafted.  You handled the difference between Spike and Twilight's writing styles very well, and the slow decline of quality in Twilight's letters was a really nice touch.  Great foreshadowing at the beginning, and a truly beautiful ending.  "You know, she forgets my name sometimes, but she always remembers yours."

    Thank you.

    #31 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm kinda crying right now.....

    Nope...Now its full on crying.

    Fuck you Obselescence you made me feel.

    Yet I also think I should thank you.

    So...Thanks.

    #32 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awww poor Twi.

    #33 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Many feels were felt while reading

    #34 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very touching, very moving.  Thanks for writing this.  :twilightsmile:

    #35 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I heard you guys had a pretty serious mood in the comment section going on right now. It would be horrible if someone were to come along and...

    ... ruin it.

    #36 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Extremely well written... this hit me right in the feels. My Grandfather is going through similar issues. At times he is fairly lucid, but others...

    Thank you for writing this, even if I am struggling not to cry...

    #37 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

    #38 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    But thank celestia the magic of friendship can make the pain go away. :pinkiesad2:

    #39 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This almost had me crying. It was very well-written, and I am a fan of how you made the whole story a series of letters to the Princess. Very well-done. :twilightsmile:

    #40 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is a fanfiction young writers can aspire to. Shows how you can break rules and still have a brilliantly crafted piece and it's an emotional gut-punch. I am in awe as much as I am in tears.

    Cheers

    ~Cosmic

    #41 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Damn... that hit me right in my manly, manly feels.

    #43 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The feels. Arrgggh my heart!

    Too sad.

    #44 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ;;;_____;;;

    Great fic, i loved it.

    #45 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    So Twilight has Altsimis Disease? (sorry about my dreadful spelling.)

    #46 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1727449 You depressing fuck!

    The pic isn't even valid! :raritydespair:

    *climbs onto Rarity*

    Now I must search the four corners of the earth to find that pic!

    *kicks Rarity and rides off into the sunset*

    #47 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    you gave me a sad

    and I just have to say that your an amazing writer

    #48 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :raritycry::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry: Dang it, you've got me feeling all sappy!

    #49 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm speechless on how awesome this is. Thank you for writing this. :heart:

    #50 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    damn. Just... damn. Good job.

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