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Dear Princess Celestia,

I'm sorry I haven't written in a while. Things seem to be falling through the cracks lately. Spike thinks I should go see the doctor, but...

First Published
2nd Dec 2012
Last Modified
2nd Dec 2012
#1 · 216w, 23h ago · 24 · ·

Obs, I just want to say this is absolutely brilliant, probably the best thing you've written.

#2 · 216w, 23h ago · · ·

Awesome stuff as always, Obs. I love it.

#4 · 216w, 23h ago · · ·

>>1726935

Your trademark three Dahes. You should just get that coded in so you can press a button for that:rainbowlaugh:

#6 · 216w, 23h ago · · ·

That was beautiful.  Great work! :pinkiehappy:

#7 · 216w, 23h ago · · ·

>>1726971  I think you used to use five.  Why now three?

#8 · 216w, 23h ago · · ·

Obs made another fan-fiction? Good thing I brought a bucket for all these tears.

#9 · 216w, 23h ago · 2 · ·

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#10 · 216w, 23h ago · 1 · ·

>>1727058 I used to use five, then two, then three. According to math, 2+3=5.

:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

#11 · 216w, 23h ago · · ·

Inb4 featured.

#12 · 216w, 23h ago · 2 · ·

>>1726961 There's a pony for that.

#13 · 216w, 23h ago · · ·

>Sadfic

>Twilight/Spike

inb4 feature box

#14 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1727057 Indeed... Very... Beautiful...

*Sniff*

I'm not crying... :fluttercry:

#15 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

That is haunting.

In time we have to give it all back...

I will talk on your writing ability, because if I talk on the story itself I will shudder and lay solemnly for a while before i sleep...

On your writing ability : It is very good.

#16 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

:fluttercry: :applecry:

It's so sad, but sweet and cute and, and, feels!.

It's very good. And well written too, I couldn't see any errors aside the ones on purpose later on and the pacing and flow were good.

#17 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

Ouch, my heart.

#18 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

This was so ...sad in a way, seeing Twlight slipping away further and further.

Damn this story really went straight to the hearth, you've done an excellent job on this story my respects.  Its just so freaking beautiful yet so sad.

#20 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

Hmm.. was warned not to read this by the description, but did it anyway. Have a glass of tears for you.

#21 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

Oh, man...:fluttercry: My heart, it can't take these feels. Great job. Just, great.

#23 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

Welp. The feels are being felt.

#24 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1727068  When are you updating Solitary?

#25 · 216w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

I'm glad I read this.

#26 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

Beautiful One shot...

#28 · 216w, 22h ago · · ·

As somebody whose own grandmother suffers from much the same problem... yeah.

Gonna have to figure out some way to stop looking like I was crying before the fam' notices.  ^^()  Damned good, in that odd way this sort of story is.

#29 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

Oh wow. :pinkiesad2:

#30 · 216w, 21h ago · 1 · ·

Holy crap, that was really powerful.  Brilliantly organized and delicately crafted.  You handled the difference between Spike and Twilight's writing styles very well, and the slow decline of quality in Twilight's letters was a really nice touch.  Great foreshadowing at the beginning, and a truly beautiful ending.  "You know, she forgets my name sometimes, but she always remembers yours."

Thank you.

#31 · 216w, 21h ago · 4 · ·

I'm kinda crying right now.....

Nope...Now its full on crying.

Fuck you Obselescence you made me feel.

Yet I also think I should thank you.

So...Thanks.

#32 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

Awww poor Twi.

#33 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

Many feels were felt while reading

#34 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

Very touching, very moving.  Thanks for writing this.  :twilightsmile:

#35 · 216w, 21h ago · 6 · ·

I heard you guys had a pretty serious mood in the comment section going on right now. It would be horrible if someone were to come along and...

... ruin it.

#36 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

Extremely well written... this hit me right in the feels. My Grandfather is going through similar issues. At times he is fairly lucid, but others...

Thank you for writing this, even if I am struggling not to cry...

#38 · 216w, 21h ago · 1 · ·

But thank celestia the magic of friendship can make the pain go away. :pinkiesad2:

#39 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

This almost had me crying. It was very well-written, and I am a fan of how you made the whole story a series of letters to the Princess. Very well-done. :twilightsmile:

#40 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

This is a fanfiction young writers can aspire to. Shows how you can break rules and still have a brilliantly crafted piece and it's an emotional gut-punch. I am in awe as much as I am in tears.

Cheers

~Cosmic

#41 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

Damn... that hit me right in my manly, manly feels.

#43 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

The feels. Arrgggh my heart!

Too sad.

#44 · 216w, 21h ago · · ·

;;;_____;;;

Great fic, i loved it.

#45 · 216w, 20h ago · · ·

So Twilight has Altsimis Disease? (sorry about my dreadful spelling.)

#46 · 216w, 20h ago · · ·

>>1727449 You depressing fuck!

The pic isn't even valid! :raritydespair:

*climbs onto Rarity*

Now I must search the four corners of the earth to find that pic!

*kicks Rarity and rides off into the sunset*

#47 · 216w, 20h ago · · ·

you gave me a sad

and I just have to say that your an amazing writer

#48 · 216w, 20h ago · · ·

:raritycry::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry: Dang it, you've got me feeling all sappy!

#49 · 216w, 20h ago · · ·

I'm speechless on how awesome this is. Thank you for writing this. :heart:

#50 · 216w, 20h ago · 1 · ·

damn. Just... damn. Good job.

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