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Dear author, here is a tip for you. Take it or leave it, your call.
Use the story synopsis thingie to place the story synopsis and the pre-reading/editing/cover image credits. Nothing more.
That comment over there, you can place it after the fanfic or post it as a comment on your own story.
Also: Try to create a more... enticing synopsis. Something to draw the reader in. Not just "X happens". But don't divulge the entire story in the synopsis. Since this is a dark story, write something mysterious. Propose questions for the readers in a clever way, forcing them to read your fanfic in order to reach the answers (meaning: don't do "Will <PONY> live? Will evil prevail? Read to find out!").
1721126 Alright then, thanks xD
1721131 Edited that comment. You might want to give it another look.
1721126 Yeahhh, I noticed that xD I'm sorry, I'm really terrible at making those, so I don't think I'm even gonna try from now on xD
O_O
Nice.. writing..
1721163 Don't give up, dear author. Practice makes perfect.
Here is a lil' place for you to lurk and learn a bit. Be sure to read the rules before posting. If I'm not mistaken, they have threads over there to help authors with their synopsis. I really recommend it.
1721175 Ahhh, my sincerest thanks to you, sir
1721170 Thank.. you xD
1721194 No problem.
LOVE IT
1721306 xD Thanks, George XD
brutal......
love it 
My thoughts exactly. The cover art is awesome, the story is great, but the synopsis... eh... it needs work to draw more attention.
1721534 Glad ya enjoyed it, and thank you for adding it to your favorites
1721557 Yeaahhh, that will probably be a frequent problem on my stories xD I'm pretty terrible at that sorta thing
Interesting....INTERESTING
Wow, this is great.
Wow, that cover picture is damn creepy.
A good gore fic.... Do my eyes deceive me? They must, because good gorefics don't exist.
This was pretty good. It wasn't the best, but it was good.
Wow, a good gorefic.
Heh
Wow, a well written dark fix. You know how hard these are to come by? That's a thumb and favorite.
Don't worry about details. It gives the story more depth and makes it that much more interesting.
OH FUCK
SO INTERESTING
MORE THANKS
You didn't tell me you had a new chapter out :o lol Good job so far :) I enjoyed the killing lol I wanna see how everyone reacts to Fluttershy being gone now that Blanc isn't in her form hehe
Also, there were two parts where you used incorrect tenses...
"but every time they'd turn around, they sees nothing. Rarity figured it must simply be their imagination and reassures Sweetie that no one is following them. This kept occurring sporadically until they finally arrived at the Carousel Boutique."
It should be saw and reassured :D haha sorry but it bothered me :p
OHMYGOD,
POOR SISTERS
OH CELESTIA
WHY RARITY! WHY SWEETIE BELLE! 
It's so sad, but yet so amazing! 
This is really starting to get intense.