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I'll get to them this week--when I copy the chapters to this site, the formatting gets really screwed up, so I have to manually fix everything, which is time-consuming.
I want to finish chapter 14 before sitting down to spend that much time formatting the previous chapters :D
Verrry interesting indeed 
. Its a shame the layout of this site doesnt encourage reviews, just comments. i imagine if this was on FF youd have gotten a lot more review thingies.
At any rate, 100% enjoyable. i was a little hesitant at first when you used the old "Oh wow, shes hot" - "What was that i just thought?" thing, because thats generally the sign of an amateur writer doing romancce. but i gotta say i like the unique set up here, of twilight actively having an embarassing crush on Trixie and Trixie mostly treating her as an annoyance. its not usual, and im likin it.
So i cant wait for more, and as a reward i will gift to you a mustache. Enjoy. 
This is epic. Absolutely epic. The characters are perfectly observed, there are some killer lines in it, and armed!Rarity does odd things to me that I think means I'm growing up...
Why the hell my own fic is higher up the ratings chart in the archives I do not know. Yours is by far the superior work.
Why does this story never update? This is one of my favorites!
“Oh dude, are you part of an underground rodeo club that meets every week just to duke it out because you all feel disenfranchised and alienated by society?”
Please tell me that is a reference to Fight Club! The day when ponies and Fight Club collide... I suddenly have an idea for a crossover! 
Just as Planned.
Trixie has undisclosed desires for Twi 
Man, every time someone catches on, I get that song stuck in my head for the rest of the day.
Rarity: Hold on, Darling, this is ridiculous. You want me to kick you?
Twilight Durden: That's right.
Rarity: What, do you want me to strike your face?
Twilight Durden: Surprise me.
>>author
sorry for the miss understanding, i didn't mean to sound annoying or mean, i was trying to be silly ^^
I was confused by the fact that the story should have been posted all together, but if he is trying to go with the progression idea, then that clearly makes sense. i didn't even know he was working on a next part too! wow!
Sorry for the missunderstanding!~
keep up the great work!
It used to do that before (and pretty badly), but that was fixed earlier on. Still, I write out the chapters in LibreOffice, then upload the odt file to GDocs, which is always the first place you'll find new chapters. To import them over to FimFiction with all their formatting, I have to through the entire chapter adding the BBCode formatting tags. When I started converting the chapters, as I read them I noticed some things that needed fixing (like Applejack saying "I" instead of "Ah" in some instances), or sentences that I thought could use better syntax or rewording. I also added a bit more details to certain paragraphs that were pretty sparse; no major rewrites though.
Basically, up to chapter 13, FimFiction has the most updated versions of each chapter. I'm slowly going through the same fixes over on the FF.net site, and my DeviantArt site.
Incidentally, I'd keep an eye out on this page this weekend, since we all know what comes after 13... 
OMGOSH i'V BEEN WAITING FOR CHAPtER 15 FOR LIKE, MONTHS, CAN'T.FREAKING.WAIT!!!! 8D
awesome story by the way, keep up the good work, its nice to reread these stories after so long ago, i wish you the best of luck for chapter 15! i know sethisto on equestria daily will be pleased XD
I'm really not a fan of the Twilight and Trixie pairing in any story. I don't know why, it's just a thing. But this story is hilarious and fun to read, and there's so much more to it than just a bit of Twixie shipping. Like Rainbow Dash, Ace Attorney - no one pony should have all that awesome. I'm really enjoying this.
OH MY GOD IT UPDATED YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES IT UPDATED
I have a happy. 
I'm very happy to see the new chapter. The basis of Twi's crush isn't as clear as that of Trix, AJ, or RD, but that is likely because she doens't understand it herself. The upcoming research is an excellent chance to explore this.
On my second reading, this caught my attention:
"Rafale, Miss Spelling, Holly Diver, the bale of hay, and a crimson Fluttershy all turned to look at Applejack with varying degrees of incredulity. Pinkie Pie, wearing red-cyan glasses, happily munched on some popcorn and appeared completely focused on the scene developing between Twilight and Trixie."
If Fluttershy is out of the bale (and red for some reason) and Pinkie isn't in there, then who's in the bale? Then again, with Pinkie in attendance, it may not need and occupant to react to a conversation.
"Not sure if I like 'Twixie,' though the pairing makes sense;
*Reads fanfict up to this point*
I LOVE Twixie! I wish this was canon!"
^
[An average brony reaction.]
Seriously, can I has moar? I don't think I've read a more deeper and involving fan fiction than this one. I've now read it three more times throughout the week. Every single time I can find a detail that I have overlooked. That speaks volumes about how much detail is in this.
I'm not sure how I'm going to be able to wait for this next chapter. I just know it's going to feel like an eternity.
>>10236 Just noticed that you use LibreOffice to write this, which is why it takes a little bit longer to get a release, so I thought you may be intrested in this (extensions.services.openoffice.org/en/project/BBkode) extenshion for Libre/OpenOffice. It claims to convert the formatting into BBCode for you. I can't atest to its affectivness but If it works then 
Anyway, heres hopeing it means that I get a new chapter even a day or two earlier and once again damn you for makeing me like twixie! :)
I must inquire as to whether the next chapter is indeed in progress, or if the story is to be postponed until certain video games are finished for playing; I am really quite eager to read the next chapter, especially after having re-read the story, thus far, in its entirety several times over the course of the last few days.
Please, PLEASE let there be another chapter soon /)^o^(\
Hey guys, thought I'd do a little mass reply here, since I did one over at the EqD comments just yesterday (when love was such an easy game to play). As always, I thank you all for the trackage and the faving and the comments, I'm always glad to be able to make so many of you laugh! And as some of you have pointed out, there are indeed quite a few references per chapter; remember to add them to the TVTropes page as you see them; I'd love to see how long the list actually is! 
I'm actually extremely tempted to draw Fluttershy thuggin' out 
Twixie is best pony
You are correct, sir. The other police pony is a reference too, though not to any specific character.
Pshhhhhh
"The Complete Egghead's Illustrated Guide to Pony Anatomy: Pop-Up Edition (Watch your Eyes!)"
You sir and/or madam, are the first person to notice (or the first person to point out to me) in all the months that the fic's been around! You have earned yourself an internet cookie in the shape of your preferred pony.
That's not the only Futurama reference in the story, can you find another one? 
Fluttershy was red because she was blushing, on account of what was being discussed at that moment. And no, you didn't read that wrong, the bale actually moved on its own; that's how bad AJ's misunderstanding affected it.
I'll try my damnest to not make everyone wait 3 months again! (Then again, November has Battlefield, Sonic Generations, Skyward Sword and Mario 3D Land...)
I've been meaning to get back to the CMC for a bit; they ARE plotting a little something...
You'll find the answer to that question soon (Hint: the answer's in one of the early chapters)
I've been looking for something like this! I shall give this a try when the next chapter is close to publishing; thanks!
Luckily enough, I did not buy Skyrim, precisely because I knew how much time it was gonna consume from my soul.
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