• Member Since 18th Jan, 2012
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Aerovenax


Just a brony. May post something if I ever actually finish writing one.

Comments ( 32 )

Well Mary sure can wait a tiny bit for chapter three, i have 15k words to read.

1715341 Thank god for this fiction.

I liked and faved!! Congrats on a clopfic well done!!! :rainbowwild:

I have but one question....where's the non-clop for this paring?

Derp, sorry all, forgot to mark this as completed when I posted. It's correct now.

Though for any interested, I am currently working on a psuedo-sequel that focuses on the rest of Luna Flight.

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Finding anything for this pairing is rather difficult, hence my using it for TAW's contest.

1716004 Shame. I'm game for most straight parings but not a fan of clop. I don't flame clop though. Good writing on your part.

Very nice story and clop. So needs to be continued.

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It will be, in a manner of speaking. The ponies of Luna Flight were actually conceived for another story which I'm about 2/3 through the first chapter of. It went on hold for TAW's contest, but will be on its way soon enough.

Glad to hear that you all liked my first foray into writing clop. I've got more coming. [Insert Pinkie Pie rimshot]

1717383 Sounds good and hope to see more of Soarin and Luna cause I can't imagine after a night like that nothing ever happens between them again.

I liked it great balance of romance and clop great work!

Best short Luna shipping story ever.:derpytongue2:

Oh my god that was amazing
There needs to be more about these two

Any way keep it up

Bravo Zulu

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by any chance will luna be appearing in the "sequel" with the rest of them with training, and other activities?

1716004 do you think you would be able to notify me when your pseudo-sequel is out?

I loved this... and found something ironic... what is it you may ask? Its the part where Misty and Spitfire are making out... What's ironic about this? Almost nothing. Except for the fact that my OC, Calecune, is married to Misty in my fanfic (well, right now theyre just friends) and i know.. OC paired with a character from the show... oh well. Anyways, To have her and spitfire making out is ironic to me... cause in my story, Cale had a previous history as Spitfire's coltfriend, way before she became a Wonderbolt. Just saying, thought it was funny cause i kept picturing that in my head :rainbowlaugh:

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That's what the Watch button's for! Automatic notification when a new story's posted. Also when I post blogs, if you feel like listening to me ramble.

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She may well. To be honest, I didn't know she was going to feature in the Luna Flight tales until I started writing this. It's fun watching a universe grow on its own.

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My definition of short is under 20,000 words.

Wow. That was a lovely story, gorgeous characterisation and the most refined use of Luna's Old Equestrian speech pattern that I've come across. Very well done.

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If you liked my speech, check out Gabriel LaVediere. He is much better at it than I, and I emulated him rather heavily. Regardless, I'm glad you liked it. I certainly enjoyed writing her.

A lot of sections have broken formatting, where a line break randomly intrudes mid-paragraph.

"pour
over him"

Is one example, and there are a lot more. The story itself (thus far) is fantastic, I just wanted to point that out before I read too much further.

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Not sure how those slipped in. I blame the import process.

Thanks for pointing it out. They're fixed now. Glad you like the story.

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Yesterday was a fairly long series of interruptions to me trying to read, so now I can actually comment properly:
This was really solid, all the way through. An occasional small line struck me as odd or unexplained, but the whole was very good. As far as major flaws... The ending is very abrupt. It was a great read, and I'll keep an eye on your future work. :yay:

I used to avoid stories outright if they had the misfortune of having less than 100 to 200 green thumbs, this one makes me regret that habit.

Very well done, your Luna character is one the best I've seen (more like read but whatever)

Excellent work, have a fav:twilightsmile:

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Any chance of this Luna Flight story still happening? I'd love to read more of anything if it continues in the same vein as this. This story remains one of my all time favorites on FIMfic. It's fantastically done!

I know this story is really old, but I think it's still criminally under-rated. Even without the clop it would still probably be one of the best romances on the site. I'd rate this easily in the top ten clopfics on the site, but maybe that's because I like a really slow burn and a proper story to build up to it.

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