This forest Prison

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On a moonless night, a strange Pony explores Ponyville. She gains a glimpse into the lives of the ponies there and envies them.

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#1 · Aug 30th, 2011 · · ·

pretty good, is there going to be more?

JuyUnseen

JuyUnseen #2 · Aug 30th, 2011 · · ·

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well, i do want to expand on the Everfree character, but nothing new soon. next month i'm gonna be doing the National Pony Writing Month so my time will be completely taken up by that. i will probably write more stories about Everfree eventually though

Thanks for reading

littlerobotbird

littlerobotbird #3 · Sep 5th, 2011 · · ·

Gah, I want to straight up love this story. It's got this wonderful sense of mystery and sorrow... but so much of it is just left up to mystery. Just so many 'why's. Why is Everfree trapped? Why can't Celly fix her mistake? Why did Celly make the mistake in the first place? Why doesn't Luna know about it?

It's just not quite satisfying with most of the story focusing outside the character onto the main six ponies... but still, when you've left your reader craving more you've done something right. It certainly wasn't disappointing though. Good start and I do hope that eventually is more than just a start. Got me all intrigued.

Hollyfern