pretty good, is there going to be more?

>>30083008

well, i do want to expand on the Everfree character, but nothing new soon. next month i'm gonna be doing the National Pony Writing Month so my time will be completely taken up by that. i will probably write more stories about Everfree eventually though

Thanks for reading

Gah, I want to straight up love this story. It's got this wonderful sense of mystery and sorrow... but so much of it is just left up to mystery. Just so many 'why's. Why is Everfree trapped? Why can't Celly fix her mistake? Why did Celly make the mistake in the first place? Why doesn't Luna know about it?

It's just not quite satisfying with most of the story focusing outside the character onto the main six ponies... but still, when you've left your reader craving more you've done something right. It certainly wasn't disappointing though. Good start and I do hope that eventually is more than just a start. Got me all intrigued.

I'm absolutely obsessed with Everfree, and this is something I do hope you continue.

>>3380733807 trust me. I want to, but the drafts aren't coming out right, so it's not at the front of my to do list

... I need to write it though

>>3382033820Hm. Ya don't say...

There Is a third princess. Her name is Cadence. She gets married at the end of Season 2.

Other than that, this was interesting.

Explain further, please. This has my interest.